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Hi TNBW group! I've been working really hard at getting this story clean and tight, and I know that there is more I can do. I'm currently starting to edit and rewrite some things, along with adding more detail. I'm hoping to get some good feedback on what's working, what's not, etc. I'll take it all, the good the bad and the ugly. I will return reviews as well. Thanks again everyone. Cate

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Young adult fantasy. This is the first of a series of books which will span Ella’s years of training. She has been selected as a trainee to the Preases who are a group of powerful beings. They each possess an orb that grants them specific powers which they use to defend the earth’s dimensions. All of her dreams and nightmares are out there in some dimension that she may one day explore. The inhabitants are humans mixed with other beings from each of earth’s dimensions. During her training, her best friend is kidnapped and she sets out to rescue her. I would like to know if the story is interesting and any creative title ideas (I am at a loss for a good one). I would appreciate feedback any other comments that come to mind. I look forward to all constructive criticism! Thank you to everyone who took time to read this.

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Kyrie Riddel and Cartophyllus Le Nécromant working as investigators for Prime Minister Spencer Cavendish, Duke of Devonshire and Coregent of the Kingdom of Ghaescagony discover Kyrie's former business partner, a smuggler named Edsal Halleck, murdered after she threatened to kill him because of his failure to pay a debt. But Edsal Halleck was murdered by magic that melted his eyes into red tears, burned out his pineal gland. When Cartophyllus attempts to speak to Halleck’s dead soul to lean what happened he discovers that in violation of the laws of magic, Halleck's soul has been destroyed. In a race against time, the two begin to search for clues to who might have wanted Halleck dead, who would have the power to destroy his soul, and who might have the motive to destroy him in that way. With the city watch intent on finding Kyrie guilty, and Eight Lords Inquisitor increasing concern that Cartophyllus is committing the darkest acts of blasphemy, the two follow a trail of clues across the city of London into the office of the Prime Minister himself to stop a plot to murder the Prince of Wales and so that Spence Cavendish can ascend to the thrown. I am looking for help with plotting, pacing, characters, and any other problems with the novel

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This is the story of three childhood friends, cursed through their own ignorant arrogance towards the supernatural and paranormal. Charlie, Noelle and Harry decide to see how much than scare themselves by going to the forest at 3am on Halloween. There they are cursed and have to deal with the aftermath of becoming a werewolf (Charlie), berseker (Noelle) and demon (Harry). Noelle and Charlie stick together and start a detective agency to have an income. This is their story, as they look to help others, find a cure and redemption, and seek a normal life.

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A deranged dwarf gets put in her place by a supernatural force while a woman with a doll phobia discovers the root of her problem.

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I would appreciate any feedback on this draft. Don't be shy, I have a VERY thick skin.

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Necromancer, sequel to the Blood Inheritance, takes us to the darker side of the magical world Alexandria Reed has found herself emmersed in. Her friend's emerging powers as a necromancer has put them all in danger. An old enemy from the Cameron's past has come to exact her revenge. It will take all thier combined skills to stop the ancient evil, but will be enough to save them all?

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This is an apocalyptic thriller with an embedded love story. Following the terrorist attack of September 11, 2001, the lives of Kodi Peek and her father are irrevocably changed as they begin the countdown to 2012.

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