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 | Alice's Wunderland | 1_word_at_a_time | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.93 | Jan 7, 2012 |
Summary:Taking a break from Ruby Rose and feeling reflective, so thought I'd give poetry a crack. Not because I'm any good at it, but I wanted to play around with interpretations/double meanings.
I know as a poem this is really awkward - clumsy rhyming, lousy rhythm, annoying experimental pace ... so I'm looking more for suggestions on how to improve, rather than pointing out what I already know is crap.
I'm particularly looking for feedback on the content - I'm trying for the interpreting-alternative-meanings concept without being too obvious or too obscure ... walkin' the line, I guess.Chapters: |
| WITHIN MY WALLS | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.86 | Nov 30, 2011 |
Summary:This is more of a freeing of one's soul Not sure regarding formal format or allowing it to simply go where it wants to go.
Perhaps it is simply a gift to me as a writer... to just let the words flow freely, with no rules holding me back... no particular audience to please... just one soul putting into words her experiences... Any feedback..
It may ramble a bit but I think that would be appropriate ate times. These are thoughts in verses. Chapters: |
| FlO"S PROVERB | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.15 | Oct 22, 2011 |
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OKAY, serious minded today as always am when my belly hurts?
Why is that? Is my muse 'pain'
Just s thought I have had many times and written down many timed to simply put it away or throw it out.
Not sure it shouldn't be but as same time it makes a bit of sense to me as I understand what I am saying. Will the readers though?
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| WOULD THAT I COULD | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.12 | Aug 7, 2011 |
Summary:SIMPLY a flow of words I talk about so much. I haven't a clue if they have meaning but they demand to be heard.
Yes, short .. so fifty word summary sucks!
But, hey, I have to do them all the time!
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| Random Ramblings | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.59 | Mar 31, 2011 |
Summary:As the title suggests. Randoms ramblings is simply about words I cannot control and at times too rapid to try and make sense of. I would imagine within them, lies more truth than even I can recognize?
Sometimes almost a 'verse?' Sometimes a line or two is all I get and I don't add other words that needed 'creating' ... as that would be planned.
Make any sense?
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| Messages from Jacquie | Sha | Novel | Memoir | 1 | n/a | Aug 3, 2010 |
Summary:This is a memoir of my daughter's death and the communications we've had since her death. Since it is a true story, I want to know if it's readable and interesting.Chapters: |
| So You Think You Have Had A Bad Year | flowing pencil | Short Story | Humor | 19 | 0.10 | Dec 27, 2008 |
Summary:Just a sort of dark humorous reminder to keep things in perspective. Any an all sharing is welcome. Chapters: |
| The Blues | touch1stone | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 0.44 | Aug 10, 2008 |
Summary:Just a tribute to the music of sufferring and pain. Chapters: |
