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As a novelist, this challenge was daunting for me, and at times truly horrific. However, it was quite a learning experience. I appreciate any and all comments. Thank you.

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Droubble Contest entry. All comments welcome. Thanks.

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Competition entry. All comments welcome. Thanks!

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This was a very fun challenge, a lot more difficult than I thought it was going to be. I'm interested in any thought you have. Thanks for reading

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After even more helpful reviews, I've revised this droubble yet again. I've added dialogue and tried to make the protagonist more active. Once again, if you've read this before, please tell me if you think the changes do or do not improve it. If you haven't, I welcome any and all comments.

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How to become a Millionaire.

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Madness takes its toll (Please have exact change)

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This is indeed one of my favorite Big Bang scenes.

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Too much information (tech)?

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Feedback welcomed

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I've lived my entire life outside of St. Louis and always been a fanatic about St. Louis sports. Having a time machine gave me the idea to fix a couple of the travesties that have been blemishes on our beloved teams during my life time!

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Is it clear? My recent entries seem to need clarification for lots of folks. Any comments welcome. Thanks.

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Correcting a wrong

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Love knows no boundaries.

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first shot at flash fiction

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Having a drink with a livestock man.

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ok so this is a story, yes a story that just so happens to have taken on an alien form in the shape of an extra terrestrial head (and neck) that just so happens to be formatted as a pictopoem that just so happens to amount to a grand total of 200 words that just so happens to make it a droubble! ok so maybe needs some stretch of the imagination, but here's a hint...stand back and squint!

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I used to be fascinated by this woman when I was in my teens.

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A woman changes the face of the nation. feedback very appreciated time_machine_droubble

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All feedback welcome.

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Any feedback welcome!

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Thanks, Mylilyrose, Nadine and. JElizabeth for helping me polish this one. There was a train wreck, 9 July 1918, and a Mr. CA Craig - founder of 'W.S.M.' Radio, ("We Shield Millions") the building on 7th Ave, housing National Life Insurance would later be known as Grand Ole Opry. This Droubble is a work of fiction. Duh, time machine and all.

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This is a story of a young lady that got an access to time machine, and by pressing a button, finds herself back in the year of 2001, in the United States...

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Previously titled "Well Oiled Machine". This is another attempt to clarify the ending within the word limit. Anything deemed constructive, like or dislike.

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Just having fun..

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time_machine_droubble The choice to relive a teenage moment in time. Feedback welcome. .

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Timmy's mommy hates him and he wants to go into the time machine to see why. A little droubble let me know what you think.

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Sorry, although I did all the formatting and etc. on the site after I exported it from Word, it still messed up the table of contents, didn't bold the title or do the underlines, etc. You'll just have to imagine it along with the clams. LOL

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What with all the doomsayers predicting the end of the world in 2012. Thanks to the Mayan calendar and a planetary alignment, the possibility of meteors striking the Earth or us getting incinerated by solar flares, I thought I would jump on that wagon.

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When my second oldest brother was going to get married to my sister-in-law, my youngest brother and I chaperoned them to Dallas, TX. We had a chance to go see where President Kennedy was assassinated at the Texas Book Depository. We were walking across the grassy knoll, when we were scared off by some unsavory men.. But what if Dallas had put on their Southern Charm that day in November of 1963 instead of Southern Death...then what.

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Would you honestly ask for anything else?

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I'm pissed off. It's always the gun. Gun manufactures the world over make a dangerous product with no other purpose but to inflict damage on human beings, and for profit... this is insane! And we sit and watch like Gooney Birds the carnage and destruction throughout our country and history...

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My MS Word Count DEFINITELY says 200 words, but my site word count says 203. I don't know why! * * * * * . >> << means two are speaking simultaneously, >>> <<< means it's all three of ‘em.

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Okay.. someone suggested I try a droubble poem for the time machine bit. I'll try anything once. This reflect what I would hope the future holds Not a great piece of work and I know it but it made me stretch. Ouch!

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A trip 20,000 years into the past reveals a startling and highly personal realization of the origins of human civilization.

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Just another day on the job. In a society that builds itself around time travel. Time travel controlled by a ruling government, a government that is only interested in profit and performance. And definitely involves record keeping. Note: 110106-I have made some date changes; to avoid any association with incidents of our own past and present:) thanks Sara.

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It's definitely a what if scenario. All feedback is welcome.

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Contest entry. Looking for anything to improve or clarify. Thanks.

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Two hundred words of something, I guess. Feedback welcome.

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I left pieces out of the story for the reader to figure out. I hope I provided just enough information for it to make sense. All feedback welcome.

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Busy divorced mother of two joins a scientific study for cash. She is given an Easy Button to travel through time when she needs it.

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So the man waited on the lame duck congress, goes on a well deserved vacation that was delayed, then decides to go for a swim in the waters off Kaneohe, some time alone to body-surf and think about all he's done to help the world... Happy New Year!

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If you read please review. All comments welcome.

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The heavenly reward entice a young man.

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Michael is reluctant to marry again eventhough he is certain he has found the woman he has always wanted for himself. His future self returns in a time machine to encourage him.

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Billy and Suzanne are desperate. Grammy's Alzheimer is getting worse and they are afraid. If something happens to Grammy, who will care for them?

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Whether it was the hand of God or some random fluke of science, I do not know nor do I care. When the machine popped into existence, or more accurately, into my existence, I felt resignation. Others would have been excited, awed, something that would cause most to drop to a knee in fascination at the cosmic perfection. For me it was the perfect end to a miserable life that had dragged out unjustly long. The controls were simple enough, even for my level of education. A series of clocks ticked up as my time moved forward in its dimension. Second by second, this clock counted upwards from the beginning of time. A keypad of technology not much different then what I might find at an upscale geek shop allowed me to key in the destination date. There was a part on the pad that asked about automatic return to this time. I left it on yes minus five minutes. I smiled, a rare event for me, knowing that I sent the machine to myself. I set the destination with a string of zeros and pressed begin. I laughed at the poetry that my life ended with a big bang.

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Forty-seven years ago, everyone took sides

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Jewish man travels to first-century Jerusalem

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Shelley decides where to go and what to change when she wins the lottery for Time Machine travel.

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Chaos theory and the sensitive dependence on initial conditions === Some lessons of history should live on forever === Palindrome, a sentence that reads backwards the same as it does forward - Are we not drawn onward, we few, drawn onward to a new era

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A Buddhist travels to the world of his ancestors. I know next to nothing about Tibetan monks. Are their spiritual leaders called High Lhama? And any other blunders pointed out would be appreciated.

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Destination: Washington D.C Date: July 4, 2050

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For the time travel contest. I know its not exactly what Sol wanted but its what I wrote. :) The girl in the story is based loosely on a real person from the 1980's.

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Timer traveler arrives in New York City in the year 2014

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This is a (revised)retelling of my previous contest entry "Paradox" which appears to be too subtle in many references. Hopefully this version will clarify. I am leaving the first up also in case anyone wishes to compare the two. Any suggestions/comments are appreciated. MS Word count - 200. Thanks.

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It's all about love or money. Can one ever get too much?

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An attempt at the time capsule droubble. This time a wee bit serious attempt. Does it work, does it have all the rules etc!

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Time travel to the beginning of everything. Will the serpent still seduce Eve to take a bite?

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If you read it - Please review it.

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To save lives, to prolong a struggle, to do the right thing, if you could - would you? Was it the right thing to do?

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A private in the U.S. Army comes back and changes history!

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If you could go back in time and make love to one woman in all of history, who would it be? This is my choice...

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Time travel

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A man tries to right a wrong.

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Just a droubble. Time travel can be hazardous to your health.

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My first post to this site. My goal is to earn my living by writing - so any suggestions are welcome!

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A 200 word version of an anecdote. Born and raised in Haifa. His British English was problematic in Cambridge, Massachusets.

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Grrrrrrrrrrr aaaaahhhh. Heeeeeeh boooooorh. DO NOT TAKE THIS AS A SERIOUS PIECE. HA the ending is Medic's fault!!!!!

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Never look back has always seemed a good motto. Experiences, good or bad, are never the same when repeated. That is, however, with the exception of one.

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This has been updated to better show (I hope) the relationship between Blake, and his daughter.

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So really, where do we come from . . . and how?

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I try to rectify a wrong from a long time ago. This is based on fact. Jean-Paul Mulders and Marc Vermeeren did DNA tests on 39 relatives of Adolf Hitler and found a common link - a chromosome called Haplogroup E1b1b1 which is found among Ashkenazi and Sephardic Jews.

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A trip back in time to save a young woman's life... Any comments are welcome.

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I had to sneak Stanley in the contest.

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Writing a droubble is intimidating. Just thought I'd give it a shot and have some fun. I hope you enjoy this short piece and all suggestions / feedback is appreciated.

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What if you were wrong?

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Hmmm. What would it be like to be a certain type of tourist? - A Time Machine Droubble entry -

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Yes, I plagiarized half the story... So sue me! According to the little box this website provides, I wrote EXACTLY 200 words. Wasn't easy. And I think the story suffers for the rules. Nevertheless, the law is the law. If you've ever heard the song, Lennon sings: YOO-HOO at one point. So that's the WORD! and the end, little girl. Meaning the mad scientist purposely blows the four minute window because he says he has to take a wiki-leak... :) Yeah, I know... Pretty stupid, right? But it's meant to be a condemnation of the whole idea of imposing on history... Pretty profound, right? Right? :)

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Life on the event horizon. Dealing with time in the quantum physics realm.

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observations from someplace unimportant

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Hi everyone. This is a droubble contest entry. I had a thought that, maybe, if I could, I would try to change history. But sometimes history is just too big and complicated. Any and all feedback is appreciated bigtime. Thanks!

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Time machine droubble. Can I get in trouble for this?

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I’m hoping to draw some depth of thought.

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My entry in the Time Machine Droubble Contest. Warning: the content is graphic, but I believe historically accurate. The real horror of this story is in knowing that the types of attrocities described here, and worse, actually happened in these places in Europe, like where George leaped. He thought he set the time machine's dial to 'Australia', but he landed somewhere else that started with an 'A'. Any and all feedback is welcome and very much appreciated.

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