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Just for fun! An oldster doing a rap.. poem? Or something like the sixties.. although I was delivering babies not.. brownies or happy tobaccy! Ha... my turn to be on a stool at a coffee house?

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Just thinking, always in my head events that I see the what the world used to be. It's this simply what comes into my head I write on paper.

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I was going to title this INTERWOVEN but decided to pick one poet instead so I went with a poet I haven't really read much but the couple I have impressed me and had me asking questions and wondering about her and her life. It could be any writer! Any feedback greatly appreciated

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Just words about observing the night and the moon and what it reflected in my imagination. Any and all feedback welcome The title just doesn't fit but I had used the one I wanted!

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OKAY, serious minded today as always am when my belly hurts? Why is that? Is my muse 'pain' Just s thought I have had many times and written down many timed to simply put it away or throw it out. Not sure it shouldn't be but as same time it makes a bit of sense to me as I understand what I am saying. Will the readers though?

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Nothing more than sharing instant thoughts. No giving thought to whether right or wrong or technically good. All I believe to be a good exercise for all writers. Constricting one's poetic energy in the effort to get it right might cost one a nice piece of writing. Plus it can just be for the writer. Any and all critiquing ...

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I HAVE A WONDERFUL TEACHER WHO IS TRYING TO WORK WITH ME. MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT A SONNET well.. apparently my lesson didn't take. BUT I rise to attempt another. but not right now. My brain is still wrapped around the rules of a sonnet. So.. My little wanna-be sonnet Any and all criticism.. direst to Shakespeare!!!

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Sentimental pondering was how I described this when I first wrote it. Well.. miracles do happen and at advanced age! ha. The subject of this poem is now my husband. The piece was written before we met. We had communicated through a dating site. These were my feelings. I hope to all seeking love this gives you hope. to all those who have love, understand each word.

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Turn_Away_It_Still_Exists Ethereal_Angel animal_cruelty animal_welfare animal_rights

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Didn't know how to classify this. You can tell how desperate I am to post something! :) As the title says, simply observation. Any and all feedback is appreciated. Hopefully a smile or two.

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A simple experience I had this morning. Paying close attention to what I saw and how I reacted inwardly. I do a lot of this lately and I feel it enriches writing. Any and all feedback ... mostly the emotional impact

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When nothing works! Nothing comes forth to put on paper or to type. Frustration to a writer who lives to create. Doesn't rhyme doesn't have any particular order as it signifies I can't think of a damn thing to write.

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INSOMNIA MOSTLY... sometimes we unwittingly allow ourselves to become vulnerable by the words of others and it can dredge up old wounds... Having said that, insomnia also plays a role so no pity party for my entering a ring of discussion and opinions.. Not a child but ... these words were born and that is what I do, take the crap and write a poem.. good or bad! I have a hunch more than myself have had a night or two like this

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Another rambling thought. Word springs? Do we all have little wells of words swimming around trying to latch on to others forming a thought? I don't know but they seem to me like little children who are going to be heard whether you like it or not. Sorry for the word count!

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As the title suggests. Randoms ramblings is simply about words I cannot control and at times too rapid to try and make sense of. I would imagine within them, lies more truth than even I can recognize? Sometimes almost a 'verse?' Sometimes a line or two is all I get and I don't add other words that needed 'creating' ... as that would be planned. Make any sense?

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This not a novel - This is / will be a pocket book of poems. All and every feedback will be gratefully accepted.

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Simple Haiku... three verses Any an all feedback...

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Reposted at Flowing Pencil's behest. Since writing this poem, I've made it the first page of the novel, Good at Dying, also posted here on TNBW at the inspired suggestion of s_thatcher.

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A simple quick gathering of thoughts and flowing words. That's it folks! Any and all feedback.

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chaiku_nature_competition Simplicity Any an all feedback We are different.. nature is expressed in differences also.. This took a rather political turn ... why not a robin and a sparrow... a pig nurses a motherless puppy?

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All feedback is welcome. Technical is desired as weak point. This is a simple piece about 'feelings' I know! Overdone subject but alas.. they do follow us closely. This is a piece that took two minutes and to be honest have no idea where it came from. This is how I write. I cannot 'create' like so many of the talented writers on this site. Why my work is sporadic.

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This was written over forty years ago.. stuffed inside a drawer. Few got a glimpse of it but I wasn't encouraged. Right before I joined this site and the reason I joined is due to a kind review from the author Thom Hartmann of Air America.. You never know where you might receive encouragement from and it might lead to no more 'hiding' of your work. Good or bad.. at least you have found the courage to write and gingerly push it out there for readership. I want this perfected. My hope is that is serves as an encouragement to new writers to pull that work out of hiding. You are your words in a way. It is also a lesson in perfecting what you have started before going on to something else. When I see "Perfection" typed in a review of this. I will know growth has taken place.

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It grows on you and you begin to anticipate it.

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Short, sweet... maybe fun? Happy New Year, and a happy year of writing to everyone!

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Observation from a leather couch! Ouch! Just realized I am sitting on a butchered cow! Now that is really making me feel like a hypocrite! My special mother's day card from MaMa Nature.

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