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 | Ragged Edges Rewritten | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 11 | 0.31 | Mar 18, 2012 |
Summary:All feedback is welcome. Technical is desired as weak point.
This is a simple piece about 'feelings' I know! Overdone subject but alas.. they do follow us closely. This is a piece that took two minutes and to be honest have no idea where it came from. This is how I write. I cannot 'create' like so many of the talented writers on this site.
REVISITING THIS PIECE I SAW A LOT 'WRONG' WITH IT. Hopefully I have improved since first posting.. that is the feedback I would love to have. Improved? Not so self serving as not my intent. What I writer I feel is experienced by many.
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| Happy Father's Day | Monsar | Poetry | Non-Fiction | 4 | 0.58 | Jun 20, 2010 |
Summary:an expression of gratitude and love for a man who stepped in when he was needed. for a man who became more of a father than we had ever had before. Chapters: |
| Not Advocating Violence | kat nove | Poetry | Humor | 9 | 0.97 | Nov 7, 2008 |
Summary:I'm the manager of a book department and yesterday my helper called off because her septic tank exploded. Two elderly women pissed me off so much, I'd have preferred to switch places with my helper. It would have been more fun to clean shit off the walls than wait on those ungrateful bitches. Ah, now I feel better.
This one is for Pamela, Jill and anyone who has worked retail without resorting to violence.
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| Did I ??? | Miss Anni | Poetry | Religion and Spirituality | 9 | 0.54 | Sep 17, 2006 |
Summary:I haven't written anything in awhile, and I was resting after our Wed. Nite service. These words just came to my head, and I felt they needed to be put on paper.Chapters: |
