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 | Alice's Wunderland | 1_word_at_a_time | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.93 | Jan 7, 2012 |
Summary:Taking a break from Ruby Rose and feeling reflective, so thought I'd give poetry a crack. Not because I'm any good at it, but I wanted to play around with interpretations/double meanings.
I know as a poem this is really awkward - clumsy rhyming, lousy rhythm, annoying experimental pace ... so I'm looking more for suggestions on how to improve, rather than pointing out what I already know is crap.
I'm particularly looking for feedback on the content - I'm trying for the interpreting-alternative-meanings concept without being too obvious or too obscure ... walkin' the line, I guess.Chapters: |
| Time for Tea # | janine | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.99 | Feb 2, 2011 |
Summary:on a bit of a roll at the mo, for why i dunno, but here's another PICTO! yep, first the sock...then the (ahem) rabbit...then the hammer...then the spider...and now a teapot!!! best read at a pace (rhythm does all flow if you get it right!) in a "sarf london" accent...cafe pronounced "caff" by the way...Chapters: |
