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 | IF I WERE TO LOVE YOU | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.50 | Sep 22, 2011 |
Summary:Sentimental pondering was how I described this when I first wrote it. Well.. miracles do happen and at advanced age! ha.
The subject of this poem is now my husband. The piece was written before we met. We had communicated through a dating site. These were my feelings. I hope to all seeking love this gives you hope. to all those who have love, understand each word.
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| OBSERVATIONS ON A CLOUDY DAY | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.36 | Jul 12, 2011 |
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Title actually says it all. I have a hard time with depression at times and never quite know why or when? BUT
what I have learned is this... "I WILL NOT BE ITS VICTIM.. I WILL USE IT AND ABUSE IT!.." I WRITE .. therefore I am.
Any and all feedback Still learning!Chapters: |
| YOU AIN'T NO FRIEND | flowing pencil | Poetry | Humor | 9 | 0.34 | Jun 19, 2011 |
Summary:Just an observation from somewhere specific!!! haaaa Ron.. if you read this..
Watching the battle for the bird feeder! My interpretation of what I saw.Chapters: |
| Six Yellow Roses Palindrome Haiku | flowing pencil | Poetry | Humor | 13 | 0.07 | Apr 16, 2010 |
Summary:Okay... my own form of poetry! If one can invent one so can I! Top this..Dan!
NO ONE IS PICKING UP ON THE FACT.. YOU MUST READ EACH LINE BACKWARD!!!! GEEZ..
This is for Nadine. Haiku.. Not just an ordinary one though.Chapters: |
| Dark Day Descending | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.20 | Jan 15, 2010 |
Summary:Weather related Haiku... observations... taking advantage of a not so advantageous day. Turning nasty weather into poetry. Using Mother Nature!
Any an all feedback...
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| Slow Burning Candle | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.34 | Oct 12, 2009 |
Summary:Poem about life also the use of allegories in expression in poetry or any writing.
Hope is to get readers who hesitate reviewing poetry to take a leap in faith as there is no wrong way to review if you say how a work 'feels' 'provokes' or if it doesn't. Still good feedback and can help enrich one's own writing.
Poetry is not my favorite genre. I don't even own a book of poetry except for my mothers. Only poetry I read in on this site. I write it as do not feel confident in other genres. I too am learning to try though. To stretch oneself is to grow and stay flexible.
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| My Soul Screams | flowing pencil | Poetry | Other | 16 | 2.75 | May 6, 2008 |
Summary:Sticks and stones can break your bones but words can kill the soul.
Old wounds reopened by mistrusting truth. Read my words but don't judge my soul, my spirit or my intentions.
Physical wounds you can show their scars but wounds of the soul are invisible.Chapters: |
