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I am happy overall with this story except for two small things. The opening is problematic I think and that for some reason it doesn't appeal to publishers. If you have an idea why, I'd love to hear it.

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A boys family is slain and he is abandoned. As he ages he becomes quite powerful and must choose vengence or forgivness - unless it has been chosen for him.

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Survival stories are a dime-a-dozen, people get lost in the woods and are normally rescued after a few weeks of surviving the dangers of the great outdoors, This story will come with a twist,, a supernatural twist — at least I think that's where it's heading. Let me know what you think of the story line so far, please. Does it peak your interest? Do you want to read more? I would appreciate any and all critiques regarding all components of the story. And please, don't be afraid to be brutal — I can take it!

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When everyone around her starts dying and a mysterious young detective working the case, Siera struggles to understand the unexplainable with her time quickly running out..... I'd greatly appreciate any feedback people can give me, i've never written a novel before. I also tend to post the chapters before much editing, so I know they need to be (mainly because i'm crap at grammar and english rules, so i'm learning from your comments as i go!!). I'd really like any comments on the flow of the chapter, content, anything that stands out etc....All feedback is welcome!!

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My entry to the Halloween competition, inspired by a weird dream I had. Not sure it quite counts as a proper "haunted house" story, but it was fun to write anyway. All feedback welcome and craved!

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Harper Southwood thinks she is a changeling, switched at birth and dropped into a human family so her troll family could raise an attractive child. She is, of course, not really a troll--she's a teenager. She fits in nowhere, not with her beautiful family or her beautiful best friend or on this planet at all, as far as she's concerned. She has one power, or sense, which involves an awareness of when people are getting sick, but she can't sense that her mother has an extremely serious illness or her best friend suffers from a serious depression. It takes Harper dealing head on with the things she can't sense and learning to MAKE sense of them before she can renounce her trollhood and find her place in humanity. I'd like feedback about how successful I am in portraying the voice of Harper and other characters, as well as how the pacing is working--are enough things happening and enough questions remaining unanswered as you go to build suspense as to what is going to happen next?

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Ariadne's a girl who wants a bit of excitement and Forbes looks a likely lad. The only problem is that he is mortal and she is a fairy.

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Warning: this novel has at least four levels, is full of sex and violence, and is very fast paced. The Well of Women is at risk, as is the Tourney which Rhiannon wishes to use for pride and peace. But there are riots against offworlders, who the people blame for the rash of mother hate that is spreading through the land. And there is the mysterious Maelan--supposed guardian of the Well, whose malfunction may explain the evil that is afoot.

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He fell through a portal to encounter a strange world. He sought vengence on those who were responsible. This is going to be an entry into a flash fiction contest, so please let me know what you think. Thanks in advance.

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This is my novel-in-progress about a woman, her dead best friend, and all the trouble he causes her. I hope you get a chuckle from it.

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