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![]() | A Samurai's suicide poem--part of my novel Executive Samurai | Dur Shacho | Poetry | Religion and Spirituality | 0 | 0.83 | Mar 15, 2010 |
Summary:This suicide poem of a Samurai is an attempt to underscore the cultural differences between western culture and eastern culture. The west is largely Christian. In Japan Christians amount to less than 3%. The culture is largely agnostic--Buddhism and Shintoism are the primary 'religions' although they are more philosophies than religions.//Imagine not believing in a supreme being and contemplating the end of your life as an absolute ending, by your own hand?//This poem is the creation of the author's imagination and is not at all authentic. I'm not Japanese but I've lived in Japan for nineteen years over a thirty five year period from the mid fifties to the late eighties. I graduated from a Japanese grade school in 1964.//The Japanese have a deep sense of honor. They are particularly sensitive to anything that reflects negatively on themselves, their family or their company. Most suicides in Japan are over issues of honor.//Personally, I'll never forget receiving a hand delivered wedding invitation on Monday, only to have it have it retrieved the following Monday, because the father of the bride opposed the marriage, and executed his wife, son and daughter with a Samurai sword, and then took his own life. The groom was the President of a large Japanese distribution company.//This poem, and many other cultural differences and nuances, are what inspired me to write the novel Executive Samurai.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | On Persimmon Road | CatWrites22 | Novel | Literary Fiction | 2 | n/a | Mar 8, 2010 |
Summary:Synopsis - In Celia Reynolds eyes, life is perfect. She has a wonderful loving family including a sister that is her best friend. Her career is skyrocketing and she has more male admirers than she can keep up with. Then, her world is shattered when her sister Gabi takes her own life. As she questions her sister’s suicide and peels back the layers of her ideal life, she realizes that life is not perfect nor is it meant to be. Her journey of self discovery takes her from an elegant 20th floor apartment in New York City to Washington, DC and the Islands of South Carolina. Along the way she learns a family secret that forces her to see her self and her sister in a different light - all with help from some unlikely sources - an orangutan named Nikkee and a Voodoo Priestess named Mira. *** Requests - All I can ask for is honest feedback. Give it to me straight ; ).Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | A Neat Guy | slh0906 | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 12 | 0.30 | Feb 5, 2010 |
Summary:Shortened to < 500 words.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | The Darkest Light | Arsenius | Novel | Young Adult | 4 | n/a | Sep 22, 2009 |
Summary:This is a story for anyone who likes to contemplate life's biggest questions... Because they don't come any bigger than those addressed in this book. Whilst I'm classifying the work as fiction, the story is built around my own personal experiences, and incorporates occult knowledge of the highest order. As such, I know that this project has the power to change lives - and liberate minds. Join me, then, as I embark on a journey that very few have taken, and even fewer have written about. "To rid ourselves of our shadows - who we are - we must step into either total light or total darkness." - Jeremy Preston JohnsonChapters: | |||||||
![]() | Executive Samurai | Dur Shacho | Novel | Action and Adventure | 2 | n/a | Sep 13, 2009 |
Summary:This novel takes place in the mid to late 1970's in the US and Japan. Bill Sanford is a young CPA working for the Tennessee Fried Chicken Corporation. He was brought up as a Foreign Service brat and had spent three years in Japan and four years in Europe. He had dreams of an international career but, his wife would have no part of it.// Ray Easton, TFC's Regional VP, Far East, is a cunning scoundrel and consummate liar. Ray is a master of insider trading of stock, and spreads the wealth to gain favors. He has always stayed one step ahead of the law.// Inoue San is an executive with one of Japan's major trading companies. He was a war hero who had been captured on Saipan and learned English from a U.S. Marine Officer. He launches a plot to bring a major U.S. fast food company into the Japanese market, relying on a high school chum who runs the Osaka Yakuza (mafia) to establish a chain of industrial espionage.// Strategic Planning is taking corporate America by storm. TFC'S CEO has caught the bug. He brings in a hot shot to produce and lead a corporate-wide strategic planning initiative. Resistance to strategic planning and the new hot shot builds, and the corporate politics accelerate, with battle lines being drawn.// Japan has been through post war reconstruction and is becoming a world class economic power. Some of its former military leaders are determined to achieve economically, what they failed to accomplish militarily.// Two trading company giants, Mitsugawa and Sawamura, become embroiled in a struggle for dominance of the exploding, western style, fast food market.// The cultural differences between Japan and the U.S. complicate matters for both sides. The inner workings of Corporate America and Japan are revealed in all their successes, but also, their corruption and greed.// Personal conflicts and deep seated vendettas, some originating during World War II, unfold.// Seduction and love affairs are an integral part of the plot. They illustrate the differences in social views of sexuality between the East and West.// Industrial espionage involving two highly competitive U.S. fast food companies, two Japanese Zaibatsu and the Japanese underworld unfolds.// Many of the key characters were involved in WWII and their individual experiences influence their business behavior.// Cultural differences subtly emerge, and the exploitation of others to achieve one's ends is front and center.// Personal ethics, or the lack there of, and the constant tug between good and evil are interspersed throughout.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | The Morgue Drinking Club | S.E. Boldt | Novel | Young Adult | 1 | n/a | Jul 17, 2009 |
Summary:***Updated on 4-22-2009 with edits. Thanks for all the feedback so far!** 19-year-old Diane Macauliffe's dreams are haunted by a walking, talking skeleton--and that's the least of her worries! First, she must survive basic training at Fort Devon's Army Base. With an inspection looming, she and fellow med-tech trainees Jack and Susie have been assigned clean-up duty in Devon's hospital morgue, which is rumored to be haunted. Jack comes up with a plan to smuggle in beer so that they can drink while they work, risking expulsion from the Army if they are caught. The three friends meet Edgar, a creepy janitor with a dark past who often lurks nearby. Edgar becomes trouble when he discovers what the young trainees--who have dubbed themselves "the morgue drinking club"--are up to. Is the morgue really haunted by ghosts, or merely by someone of flesh and blood who wants to keep them away? Diane must also face the thing she is most afraid of--the repressed memory of the way her father died. Along the way, she learns that she is not alone. After all, everyone's afraid of something; some of us are just better at hiding it than others. This is a young adult novel for readers ages 14 and up. I would like feedback on what works in this story and what doesn't, and how it could be made better. I think the characters are solid and I'm happy with the dialogue (however, please feel free to disagree--one agent commented that he thought the female characters sounded too old for 19, but I think their dialogue rings true. I'd be interested to learn what other writers think). I think the plot needs tightening, and I'm concerned that there may be too many times in the book where the characters are just talking--are these scenes boring? Also, I suspect that the plot may need more tension to drive it forward--maybe more creepy scenes with Edgar and Diane? Finally, does the plot go off on too many tangents? Any suggestions and feedback on these and other aspects of the book would be welcome.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | Empty Chairs: A High School Life of Heart Attacks, Heartbreak, and Suicide | Chester Baker | Novel | Memoir | 1 | n/a | Jul 17, 2009 |
Summary:I began this as a project to just put my feelings down. But, I found it very soothing and so far I have enjoyed writing this memoir. It's about my years of high school. In freshman year my grandpa died, in sophomore year my uncle died, in junior year my dad died, and in the summer before my senior year my 22 year old brother committed suicide. Yet, through all of this, I was still able to live a normal life with great friends and a lot of fun. I hope to show people that life is for the adventures, and as much as we want to hold onto the past, we need to let ourselves shine, and not let pain define us. This is nowhere near done, I actually skipped to my brothers suicide, and still have alot of work to do. But I just wanted to get some other people reading it. Its about 14000 words now. Thanks.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | 8 Times Lydia | BukowskisMuse | Short Story | Humor | 10 | 2.61 | Jan 30, 2009 |
Summary:A tale of eccentrics in a hospital for similar reasons, albeit different stories and paths of pain. I want to iron out any errors or awkward/non-flowing sections. My version has an indent before each start of dialogue or new paragraph, but this thing formatted it all wrong. So try to ignore that. (Revised 4/20/09)Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | Nanotech Angels- Introduction | jbrown527 | Novel | Thrillers | 5 | n/a | Nov 14, 2008 |
Summary:This is the intro/prologue to a novel I am working on. This scene introduces the primary antagonist, Uriel. I was born without an ego :), so please feel free to tell me anything you like about this, either from a technical perspective or a "feeling" perspective. The story is ultimately about the Holy Church pairing nanotechnology to psychically gifted priests and using them as "living angels" to act as agents, both for good and evil, depending on who is pulling the strings.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | Survivor's Carnival | arianna cordelle sofer | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 1.50 | Aug 23, 2008 |
Summary:Warning: this is a little on the messed up side. This is another poem that one of my "characters" wrote. He is deeply traumatized, 22 years old and has pychotic breaks/flashbacks. I don't want to give too much away because this is from book 3. The character has constant suicidal thoughts, but is unable to act on them. I'm really trying to work on refining the poetry style, becasue I've never written poems before.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | Bed for My Sorrows | arianna cordelle sofer | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.53 | Aug 20, 2008 |
Summary:I am not a poet at all, but one of my characters is. He has a large role in book 2 and book 3. At the time in his life where he writes this poem, he is an abolute mess. His family was murdered, and he was beaten nearly to death. Before the tragedym he was a quiet gentle hearted artist, who wrote and sang songs for children in his spare time. Now he's unstable and a ittle psychotic.------------------- Feel free to rewrite the poem if you'd like, as long as all his thoughts stay in it. I'm not talented enough to pull off poetry, and I want him to sound talented.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | Violence, Repentance, and Closure | John E. Wood | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 8 | 0.39 | Mar 26, 2008 |
Summary:This a piece that I have had for a long time and hope to find a home for it so others can give me feedback. It is about a very sad man that has been a very bad man and needs to find closure.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | The Last Stanza | Brenda Michele | Poetry | Non-Fiction | 9 | 1.12 | Aug 24, 2007 |
Summary:The poem recounts the events of my suicide attempt in 2004 (I'm fine now). I'm open to any feedback, but you needn't refer me to any psych services (no, really...I'm fine). I would not recommend it for children or immature teens. I hope any who consider such an irrational act will reconsider, as I've attempted twice and survived to live a new and happier life.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | Corporate Samurai (Competition Entry) | Dur Shacho | Novel | Action and Adventure | 12 | n/a | Mar 24, 2007 |
Summary:The working title of this novel is Corporate Samurai "love begets hate, trust begets betrayal, lust leads to death"// This novel takes place in the mid to late 1970's in the US and Japan. Bill Sanford is a young CPA working for the Kentucky Fried Chicken Corporation. He was brought up as a Foreign Service brat and had spent three years in Japan. He had dreams of an international career but, his wife would have no part of it.// Ray Easton, KFC's Regional VP, Far East, is a cunning scoundrel and consummate liar. Ray is a master of insider trading of stock, and spreads the wealth to gain favors. He has always stayed one step ahead of the law.// Mike Adachi is an executive with one of Japan's major trading companies. He was raised in San Francisco and speaks English as a native. He launches a plot to bring a major US fast food company into the Japanese market, relying on a complex chain of industrial espionage.// Strategic Planning is taking corporate America by storm. KFC'S CEO has caught the bug. He brings in two hot shots to produce and lead a corporate-wide Strategic Planning initiative. Resistance to strategic planning and the new hot shots builds, and the corporate politics accelerate, with battle lines being drawn.// Japan has been through post war reconstruction and is becoming a world class economic power. Some of its former military leaders are determined to achieve economically, what they failed to accomplish militarily.// Two trading company giants, Mitsubishi and Sumitomo, become embroiled in a struggle for dominance of the exploding, western style, fast food market.// The cultural differences between Japan and the US complicate matters for both sides. The inner workings of Corporate America and Japan are revealed in all their successes, but also, their corruption and greed.// Personal conflicts and deep seated vendettas, some originating during World War II, unfold.// Seduction and love affairs are an integral part of the plot. They illustrate the differences in social views of sexuality between the East and West.// Industrial espionage involving two highly competitive US fast food companies, two Japanese Zaibatsu and the Japanese and Mexican underworld unfolds.//The head of the Yakuza (Japanese mafia)is an effective eliminator of problem people.// Many of the key characters were involved in WWII and their individual experiences influence their business behavior.// Cultural differences subtly emerge, and the exploitation of others to achieve one's ends is front and center.// Personal ethics, or the lack there of, and the constant tug between good and evil are interspersed throughout. View table of contents..Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | Brian, my hero, my love. | claire_celeste | Short Story | Literary Fiction | 4 | 0.86 | Jan 28, 2007 |
Summary:This is a story of a tragic loss, and the acceptance of the one who loved them.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | New Year's Celebration | medic38 | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 10 | 0.06 | Dec 18, 2006 |
Summary:The Golden Gate Bridge has about one suicide jumper a month - that we know of. It is 435 feet to the water and, 99.9% of the time, will do the job. The fire department and Coast Guard hear of most. The call goes out as a "Bay Rescue". About five to ten minutes later the call is cancelled announcing the Coast Guard doing a body recovery. It is never "billed" as a suicide. I do not make light of this subject. I understand it. Posting this makes me nervous as it acknowledges parts within me which are frightening.Chapters: | |||||||
![]() | Final Dressing | Jayce Cole | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.38 | Jul 20, 2006 |
Summary:A woman about to commit a savage act of war in the name of religion....a dark comparison to the seamingly routine dressing of a woman.Chapters: | |||||||

