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 | My Grandmother's Watch | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 16 | 0.48 | Aug 12, 2011 |
Summary:I just had my grandmother's old Gruen watch repaired as the main spring broke so many years ago I can't remember.
She was my port in the storm so to speak.
I will wear the watch when I want to be near her.
No sure regarding punctuation ... To go all the way through with it or leave it as is.
It simply isn't meant to read too formally.
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| THE SCENT OF LAVENDER Tribute To Mike2439 | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.30 | Feb 16, 2011 |
Summary:A simple tribute to my dear friend and fellow writer Mike2439
I cannot do him justice but he will understand. I think he will feel the words.. where ever he treads.Chapters: |
| Water Rising Rewritten/Republished | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.33 | Sep 26, 2010 |
Summary:Please do not feel the need to leave another review. The first piece was actually posted accidentally and while it was well received it was not the piece I had in mind and was only a outline of sorts. I didn't even know I had posted it until the I saw a review! aaaaaagggghhhh.
I am conscious of reviews and rankings so a little uncomfortable doing this. Will work that out later.
I have saved the original.. But this was what I saw. I is metaphorical in nature.
I see many in this peril.. It saddens me. I have no rope to cast...
Any an all feedback always embraced. I hope you find this one as emotionally impacting as I wanted it to be.
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| Death in the Forest | pannastra | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.31 | May 17, 2010 |
Summary:My writing penchant is humour, so this one is unusual for me, but had to be written. Whether I should have posted it on tNBW is another matter.
I find the saturation promotional advertising of up-coming tv programs to be extremely irritating. One in particular that was doing the rounds really p'd me off. As I lay in bed one night trying to sleep I got quite incensed. I could not sleep until I had grabbed my laptop computer and wrote down what was bounding around inside my skull.
This is the result.Chapters: |
| The news came suddenly | po | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 1.43 | Sep 17, 2009 |
Summary:my first cousin died recently of a drug overdose. This poem is how I dealt with the grief.
I am interested in how the style is perceived as this is a comfortable writing style for me.
This is the first time I have posted work on this forum and I am grateful for the reviews. I am grateful for the editing comments by kiwi & ulli as I have incorporated them into my piece. My first time listening to constructive editing advice. There maybe hope for me yet. To you other kind people, thanks for your comments. I will be sharing this poem at a family reunion today. Hopefully it will bring perspective & healing...
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| Ms. Flo's Finishing School | flowing pencil | Poetry | Humor | 13 | 0.86 | Sep 7, 2009 |
Summary:OK.. Flo has run amok! Too much Sake? No man around to fool around with so guess who gets me? ha.. you!
This is just for fun and really not r rated but ornery.
I know.. shocking.
all laughs are welcome...Chapters: |
