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 | Windows to the Heart | CatWrites22 | Novel | Commercial Fiction | 0 | n/a | May 8, 2008 |
Summary:Synopsis - In Celia Reynolds eyes, life is perfect. She has a wonderful loving family including a sister that is her best friend. Her career is skyrocketing and she has more male admirers than she can keep up with. Then, her world is shattered when her sister Gabi takes her own life. As she questions her sister’s suicide and peels back the layers of her ideal life, she realizes that life is not perfect nor is it meant to be. Her journey of self discovery takes her from an elegant 20th floor apartment in New York City to Washington, DC and the Islands of South Carolina. Along the way she learns a family secret that forces her to see her self and her sister in a different light - all with help from some unlikely sources - an orangutan named Nikkee and a Voodoo Priestess named Mira.
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Requests - All I can ask for is honest feedback. Give it to me straight ; ).
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 | Sisters - I was me and you were you | Pamala J | Poetry | Memoir | 6 | 0.61 | Apr 10, 2008 |
Summary:Resubmitted after rewriting a poem about sisters who started out like twins but separated traveling down different roads of life.Chapters: |
 | I was me and you were you - Sisters | Pamala J | Poetry | Memoir | 3 | 0.58 | Apr 7, 2008 |
Summary:Fifty years can change many things including sisters.Chapters: |
 | CHAUCEY | Justi Moody | Novel | Historical Fiction | 9 | n/a | Jan 20, 2008 |
Summary:This is my first attempt at a novel and I am certainly open to any criticism. The novel begins in January 1924 a little less than 60 years after the Civil war and five years before the Great Depression. The main character is getting married today. She describes her home, her life to this date in some of her mannerisms and dialog because she is expecting to take on a totally new life after the wedding vows. She breaks Southern Tradition is sort of a feminist. There is an element of super natural in each chapter. It is so subtle until it may not be apparent until much later in the book. Chapters: |
 | Just Pray Sugah | Justi Moody | Poetry | Poetry | 11 | 1.65 | Nov 15, 2007 |
Summary:This is a scene from the Old South in the language of the rural people who are talking about God and church as it is relative to their lives. It is a grandmother, mother talking as is remembered by a grandchild. Chapters: |
 | The Bitch Brigade of Bridgeton (title change) | jediprincess | Novel | Young Adult | 12 | n/a | Mar 31, 2007 |
Summary:When a shy, black, ballerina from a poor neighborhood is thrust into the affluent yet equally dangerous world of the prestigious Bridgeton academy, she is forced to overcome her insecurities in order to defeat the three most ruthless and vindictive girls in the school.
I have an agent for this book and I'm on my final edit before he submits it to a publisher. Any help is welcome. Even chapter jumpers are welcome if you comment on grammar, especially commas and verb tense, and whether the overall writing style hooks you. Also, if chapter jumpers could comment specifically on what I can do to make it more engaging, that would be greatly appreciated.
Please note: You never find out the main character's name. Not until book three anyway.Chapters: |
 | Little Sister Adore | Sapsorrow | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.59 | Nov 21, 2006 |
Summary:The unique sentiment and memories bound to a sisterly love.Chapters: |