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 | IN YOUR EYES | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.25 | Apr 27, 2010 |
Summary:Any and all feedback is desired. Those who fight reviewing poetry it is simply 'what is felt reading the words' 'what visions flash?' That simple. If none? That is also a legitimate review. Poetry will not affect all the same nor reach deep enough to enjoy.
I write whatever comes to me. Sometimes sad and deep while other times silly nonsensical dribble!
This is a subject that has haunted me since small as while never 'starving' I did know hunger and painful pangs of it.
While we spend fortunes to kill we allow hunger to spread and diabolical horror on those without protection. While some can emotionally tuck these images in a mental drawer this writer can't. Empty eyes scream hopelessness.Chapters: |
| What Is A Heart To Do | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 14 | 0.37 | Dec 7, 2009 |
Summary:Questions for those without a significant other. A lover
A wife A husband A simple sweetheart
How it feel sometimes on your own as a woman. Perhaps as a man also?
Mainly what emotions evoke and any technical help offered is always welcome as a mere student of writing.
What about punctuation? I have some but not all the way through. To me it cluttered it. Due to one very late reader I added a comma and thank her very much! Help!
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| Slow Burning Candle | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.34 | Oct 12, 2009 |
Summary:Poem about life also the use of allegories in expression in poetry or any writing.
Hope is to get readers who hesitate reviewing poetry to take a leap in faith as there is no wrong way to review if you say how a work 'feels' 'provokes' or if it doesn't. Still good feedback and can help enrich one's own writing.
Poetry is not my favorite genre. I don't even own a book of poetry except for my mothers. Only poetry I read in on this site. I write it as do not feel confident in other genres. I too am learning to try though. To stretch oneself is to grow and stay flexible.
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