Content: simplicity
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 | CELESTIAL SENTRIES | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 4 | 0.12 | Sep 11, 2011 |
Summary:Short but my muse is selfish these days. Actually had the nerve to say, "take it or leave it!" I took it as I am selfish for a posting!
Observations of someone with time on her hands!
Any feed back is always welcome.
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| My Grandmother's Watch | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 16 | 0.48 | Aug 12, 2011 |
Summary:I just had my grandmother's old Gruen watch repaired as the main spring broke so many years ago I can't remember.
She was my port in the storm so to speak.
I will wear the watch when I want to be near her.
No sure regarding punctuation ... To go all the way through with it or leave it as is.
It simply isn't meant to read too formally.
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| RELEASE ( A SENRYU ) | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.06 | Jun 27, 2011 |
Summary:FOR JACKSON! I love it when a writer takes a leap and show us something different. One is driven to try it. At least me! Come on poets... give it a go. Jackson did great with his first {I think his first!}
Simple haiku but about humor nature than nature
I am unfamiliar and couldn't check to see if these can be multi versed.
I know! The review takes more words than the piece! Just repeat ... good.. indifferent.. not so bad ... excellent...
one of these words fifty times!!! haaaaaChapters: |
| The Lesson rewritten repub | flowing pencil | Short Story | Memoir | 4 | 0.31 | May 1, 2010 |
Summary:A trip to the bus stop with my five year old grandson Jack who has Aspergers and how it can change your outlook on a dismal day.
In my writing at times I repeat certain passage on purpose.
"he calls me Ma.. is one..
Apparently this piece has been showing up as one huge block and I was unaware.
Has been edited so hopefully better.
This is one of my works that has special meaning to me. It is a gifted memory to Jack as an adult so want it perfected.
Any help will be so appreciated. I worked on tense.. punctuation etc..
Be strict on this piece. On all my pieces.
Jack is nine now as still pure magic!
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| Simple Haiku | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.04 | Mar 3, 2010 |
Summary:Haiku nature solitary figure night
seventeen syllables total
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| Haiku Original Style for Sonny | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.04 | Feb 26, 2010 |
Summary:AN EXAMPLE OF A PURER EXAMPLE OF JAPANESE HAIKU.. DEDICATED TO A REVIEWER WHO TOOK THE TIME TO TEACH ME THAT IN ITS TRUE FORM IT IS NOT TITLED NOR ARE THERE MORE THAN THREE LINES IN TOTAL.
STILL MORE TO LEARN AS NOT AS SIMPLE AS I THOUGHT.
MY YARD WAS FULL OF ROBINS AND WHILE I HEDGED ON THE RAVAGED OAK AS IT WAS ACTUALLY A HYDRANGEA BUSH I THOUGHT IT GAVE THE PIECE A MORE POETIC READ.
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| TEDDY | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.26 | Oct 13, 2009 |
Summary:Again.. a lesson in how to take a simple item and see it differently than what it is.
Perhaps stirring a memory for the reader of a beloved personal item. Hopefully so for this writer.
Any technical and emotional feedback always welcomed.
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| Slow Burning Candle | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.34 | Oct 12, 2009 |
Summary:Poem about life also the use of allegories in expression in poetry or any writing.
Hope is to get readers who hesitate reviewing poetry to take a leap in faith as there is no wrong way to review if you say how a work 'feels' 'provokes' or if it doesn't. Still good feedback and can help enrich one's own writing.
Poetry is not my favorite genre. I don't even own a book of poetry except for my mothers. Only poetry I read in on this site. I write it as do not feel confident in other genres. I too am learning to try though. To stretch oneself is to grow and stay flexible.
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