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 | THE GAUNTLET | PJ-MACK | Poetry | Non-Fiction | 5 | 1.12 | Feb 17, 2013 |
Summary:I think this describes itself?Chapters: |
 | RUSTLING LEAVES | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.16 | Apr 20, 2012 |
Summary:Lost entire piece and title but somehow undid all the damage? I dunno how.. won't question.. wouldn't be prudent! No one is as surprised as I was.. Some how lost piece somehow undid?
Wha hoo.. Now only hope my laptop forgives me for hitting it!
I do a lot of reflecting and most likely readers are getting sick of it. But perhaps can set into motion some reflection of their own.Chapters: |
 | TULIP IN RED | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.08 | Apr 11, 2012 |
Summary:Breaking my own rule of double posting but the last was a 'woe is me' and I am not really like that... so... this is
about a tulip.. outside my living room window, I have been watching for two days. NO >> not straight! Yesterday the sun was brilliant and warm.. Ms.. tulip opened her arms wide embracing the warmth.. today it is cloudy and she has wrapped her petal close...
So.. I writeChapters: |
 | WINGS ON HIGH | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.36 | Jan 9, 2012 |
Summary:Simply a captured thoughts I don't take time to rewrite or make these 'correct' etc as I think the become stilted or begin to sound overworked.
Any and all feedback.
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 | The Lowly Caterpillar | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.42 | Aug 17, 2011 |
Summary:Death... mourning.. hope.. waste...beauty... retitled and reworked. Is the punctuation better? Good... bad?
One I was going to send out this Spring but health interfered.
Is it getting good enough to try some magazine?
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 | I Have No Wings Republished for Fathers Day | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 5 | 0.56 | Jun 19, 2011 |
Summary:I have no poem for Fathers Day and had no Father for this day so will share what I have seen through others Fathers. Okay.. Have been getting pressure to write! I say I can't unless the words simply come. This most likely will sound trite and song like. In a way it is meant to sound that way. Not trite! But like a song
It is a simple piece about a father who cannot give his family much. Out of work etc.. But he realizes he can bring his boy joy if only for awhileChapters: |
 | A Moment In Time | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.13 | Nov 22, 2010 |
Summary:I have been trying to encourage writers... especially poet to capture moments and put them down. While short and simple they can sometimes tell a huge story.
While this is short and I understand the problematic issue of a fifty word review... buck up! ha..
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 | Oh My | ulli rische | Poetry | Poetry | 4 | 0.14 | Jun 9, 2010 |
Summary:No soul should be alone.Chapters: |
 | Lily | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 0.10 | May 21, 2010 |
Summary:Haiku taking a little liberty with two verses What I saw in my yard yesterday. How one can perhaps look a littler closer? See and imagine more? Food for words?
Any and all feedback always welcome. Chapters: |
 | It Was Another Time | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.27 | May 10, 2010 |
Summary:Memories prompted by sights, aromas sounds etc.
I don't pick the subjects I write about. They pick me.
Any and all feedback welcomed. I didn't punctuate on purpose. Simply don't like it in my own work 'most of the time'Chapters: |
 | Slow Burning Candle | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.34 | Oct 12, 2009 |
Summary:Poem about life also the use of allegories in expression in poetry or any writing.
Hope is to get readers who hesitate reviewing poetry to take a leap in faith as there is no wrong way to review if you say how a work 'feels' 'provokes' or if it doesn't. Still good feedback and can help enrich one's own writing.
Poetry is not my favorite genre. I don't even own a book of poetry except for my mothers. Only poetry I read in on this site. I write it as do not feel confident in other genres. I too am learning to try though. To stretch oneself is to grow and stay flexible.
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 | Hot Summer Days | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 14 | 0.26 | Aug 8, 2009 |
Summary:Summer childhood memories. Times were simpler.. imagination was greatest ally. chaiku attempt
All feedback welcome..Chapters: |
 | I WRITE THEREFORE I AM | flowing pencil | Short Story | Memoir | 8 | 0.75 | Jul 7, 2008 |
Summary:My Writing Life.... Hopefully a better writer after being on this site and paying close attention to feedback and the work of others.
Many have read this already so for those who haven't that might want to.
All feedback is welcome.
We all have our stories about how we feel about writing and how writing affects us and those we reach out to. I encourage all writer to do this exercise. Why do you write?Chapters: |
 | Big Mom | flowing pencil | Short Story | Memoir | 14 | 0.71 | Mar 4, 2008 |
Summary:This is a work about the person who loved me the most as a child.. who taught me the most and provided a safe haven where I could be a child.
It is full of small simplistic acts that made me whole.Chapters: |