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This is the sequel to "The Devil's Grin", a Victorian crime novel published in September 2012 and workshopped here. Although being a sequel, this novel should be able to stand alone. The heroine - Anna Kronberg - is a German woman who is hiding in the Sussex Downs until she is abducted and used for the development of germ warfare by London's greatest criminal, James Moriarty.

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Beale meets a radical islander and undergoes a life change.

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Bob McDoogal is the name, and sex, food, and making fun of EVERYTHING (even in the face of danger) is his game. Born with Cerebral Paulsy and a speech impairment, watch him as he transforms into the verses first A.D.D. inflicted, anti-superhero! He, along with his beautiful girlfriend Lusha, find out the meaning of life, kill aliens the way only they can, and travel the galaxies far and wide.

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An ad agency Creative Director questions his worth as a CD and as a person at his bosses funeral.

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This is a story I wrote a long time ago and about two years ago, I re-wrote it and posted it here. Well, they say third times charm, so we'll see. I'm rewriting it again. It was lousy the first time around. The second time, I improved it a little. This time, I hope I've improved it more. I'd really like to get it good enough for publication. Those of you who read it the first time, don't feel obligated to read again unless you just want to. Also, if you do review this time around, please DO NOT refer to the original ending as I don't want my new readers to know where the story is going. I took all your advice to heart. I've changed a lot about the story. I've added many new chapters and it has a different ending. The story plot remains the same. College smart girl, Maggie Fielding, begins to tutor jock playboy, Jace Sloan, and they realize opposites do attract. Begins as a sweet love story, but gets steamy later on.

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Six brothers, the same yet each different. They are Varwick’s. Born with a rare mixture of blood. Human yet so much more. The six Durandus men are unique in their own ways, who find a happy medium with being different. Step into the world of Dominic Durandus. The oldest of the six who will follow his Father as the King of Varwick’s. All kings must have a queen but Dominic was convinced that there would be no other woman as his mother who could handle such a position. Until Toni Kendrick. His first encounter with the mysterious woman had him wanting, no needing more of her. There had never been a woman who had pulled at his heart as Toni had. The evil that lurks in this world had them thrown together again and from that day Dominic vowed from he would find a way for her to accept his way of life and stand at his side as his Queen.

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A night at the drive in theater, turns to a night in the woods. I had this dream and it became a story.

As of Saturday, August 05 2012. I have Renamed this book.I have also written chapters 6-10, but have not decided to release them to you, or if I should hold off for just a little longer.

I know my grammar is not the best.I will soon have an editor revise all my work, as soon as I finish chapters 10-30.

Keep in touch I may release more of this story.Just to keep my readers happy.Tell me how you feel about this title, and of course keep helping me revise this adventurous story. Thank you readers I'll definitely acknowledge you all in the final product!

As of Friday, August 10th. I am going to release a new version of Ch.1. The new release has a lot of the same aspects. A lot of the same "parts", yet I am just doing what all you readers love most. I have added even more detail so....stay tuned to the new release of my chapter!

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Anna McAlister was near desperation until she found the ad that changed her life in the employment section of the paper. Accepting the position things in her life begin to change for the better until her past comes crashing down around her. Any help/suggestions are welcome.

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Casey Lang is a 34-year-old lawyer whose personal life doesn't interfere with her rising star status at a large Manhattan law firm. A high-profile case with large fees will secure her career. Celebrity chef John Zambelli hires Casey after his wife has kicked him out of the house and barred him from the kids, courtesy of a court order. As the case escalates into a full-blown custody battle, Casey and John’s attorney-client relationship heads into mea culpa territory. Casey is on a fast track to self-destruction. But she can't forget that in a custody case, there are kids to consider.

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Israel's king is near death, and his care-givers seek out the most beautiful young woman in the kingdom to warm him in his bed. The beautiful Abishag has a twin sister that doesn't look at all like her, but the two of them are taken to Jerusalem to the palace of King David. While Abishag, brought to the king as his comforter, finds herself in a forbidden love, Deborah, in the service of Queen Bathsheba, falls in love as well, and uncovers the roots of a rebellion agains the king and his chosen successor. I want to know how you respond to the main characters, whether and where the story drags, where it is not believable.

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Abstract Waiting on a Woman is a story of sculpting friendship and magnetic love that draws together two individuals obliviously drifting in the proverbial sea of people, places and passions, revealing their journey from the moment they converge in a divine accident, to the moments that become eternally etched on their hearts. In the face of the headwinds of life, the lovers discover the secret to their soul connection in a pair of crystal wings that enables them to overcome obstacles and soar to each other’s arms. The book is an invitation to both the lovers as well as the reader to don their own crystal wings and join in the exhilarating ride upon which to discover self, love and life. please hurl every literary insult at me. Thank you.

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features of intimacy in the face of piracy...

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Rarely, every now and then I hit a poem in left field. You might need a leather glove to catch this one. For thirty years, I promised myself to never write bedroom poetry. Please forgive me for this one retraction. Okay I'm embarrassed already. This poem will have to explain itself.

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Lost In Transition is the story about relationships. It is the story of a non traditional family whose Father is in the process of gender transformation to become a woman, while his wife is becoming a man. Caught in between is a precocious 13yr old girl who cannot stand either of them. Believe it or not, this story is based on a true life family in Wyoming. It is a tragic story in reality, but I have chosen to lighten it up and it is largely a sarcastic comedy told from the POV of the teen daughter Christye. My primary concern here is that Christye sounds like and acts like her age, and not that of a man of any age. I would like to know if my story is compelling. If it hooks you, what hooked you? What works and what doesn't? If you would like to edit as well, I would be happy to learn from you. Hopefully it won't be too much of a mess. This is my attempt to return to the group after a long absence, and I appreciate any and all readers. Cheers, Lost Soul

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A writer of romance novels has problems in bed. A 3K word story, complete in this posting.Input please on character, pace. Is it a good read? Many thanks.

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a painfully short love story...

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This is an experiment. After reading 100 literary journals it seems they like life's underbelly best. Pls let me know general impression, the usual nits, but also about consistency in her voice - uneducated. I haven't used the compulsory f-word but if its needed, advise where to insert. Thanks!

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One of my favorite haikus, published by Boston Literary in a chapbook with others. Originally a science article somewhere but I stole the idea for haiku. Haiku is mostly punchline. Short and sweet.

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An obese man in search of love finds something else. Does the story hold your interest? How do you feel about the MC? Candid input appreciated.

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You very kind reviewers helped me improve on this story I'd long buried at the back of my computer. But now a competition has come up and the theme is 'journeys'. This story is the only thing I have that is anywhere near related so I have dusted it down and would love some further feedback. I've written right up to the 2,000 word limit so can't add anything but if there is anything that could be improved by changing it then please let me know! Thanking you in advance, Keen

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I recently wrote this for a competition and would love some general feedback before I send it in. Many thanks in advance, Keen - Spelling, as always, is in UK English

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here in the uk we have a kinky undies and sex toy store that is also renowned for home parties...yes i hosted one recently...a good girlie night of wine, nibbles and giggles as we passed around the latest lingerie and varied collection of vibrant vibrators...beats watching tv any day i must say!

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Just discovered this old story and realise I never fully finished it. Does it work the way I've left it or could it do with more plot, or simply a better conclusion? Any feedback welcome. UK English as always. Cheers, Keen

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Pamela Miller, flutist, is about to return to Australia after a concert tour in the UK. As she approaches Cardiff for her last performance, a seemingly innocuous incident occurs on the train, which appears to have no bearing on her future. After the concert, Pam and her cousin, Marigold, hire a car and drive to Cardigan where Goldie visits friends, while Pam tours the nearby Iron Age Fort where she is attacked.

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A botched drug raid took her father’s life when she was 7. On her 13th birthday she witnessed her mother’s murder. Alone in the world, Jennifer Blade set out to even the score. At 33, enmeshed in a game that knows no rules, she is about to fulfill her quest when everything unravels. Fleeing for her life, she heads to the mountains of upstate New York, where she unexpectedly finds new reason to live and a threat to die. Steve Sanders, a 38-year-old psychologist with a predictable life, is on a fishing trip in the mountains. Little does he know that all vacations are not created equal. Catch and Release, a 76,000-word romance/suspense novel, is the story of two lives from vastly different backgrounds, drawn together by fate and a common love of the great outdoors. The crossing of Jennifer’s and Steve’s paths releases an explosion of love, passion, adventure, and ultimately a reason for a shared journey. Within 24 hours, they catch a few trout, have a passionate affair, shoot and kill a man, are involved in two gun battles, receive wounds, and end up in Miami, Florida. All this, and as Steve says, they still have six days of vacation left. Their relationship touches long-buried feelings in Jennifer, and shatters the mundane existence suffocating Steve.

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Sometimes as a senior citizen I'm questioned or chided about the effects of time on intimate aspects of life. Here is a retort, of sorts. Comments welcome.

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“God won’t bother with plagues and floods. He’ll just send me.� When a serial killer is murdered while in the act of enjoying his latest victim, former LAPD detective, Hale Parrish, is asked to use his supernatural talents to investigate. His search is short-lived, because the vigilante, referring to himself as “Judgment,� tracks Hale down to reveal a life-changing secret: both of them are members of an elite bloodline created to enact divine wrath upon the wicked. While Hale decides whether his birthright is a blessing or a curse, shadows from his past emerge, forcing him to face his demons, protect his family, and take back control of his destiny.

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Love and all that nonsense - used the S word. Pretty liteweight, though if you're easily offended pass this by. For others, I know I've messed up the lines here and there and would appreciate some guidance. Otherwise, hope you enjoy it. I enjoyed writing it.

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Revised 12 Aug. 2010 Please don't read the reviews before you read the poem you will short change yourself if you do. Feedback is always welcome.

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In Search of Mr. Wonderful, The Journey from Myth to Madness Romance / Adult To Invite Love, You Must Love Yourself First Syvanna Lee knows what she wants—an everlasting love, her own “Mr. Wonderful.� Yet in her precarious quest to find such a man, she refuses to listen to the truth of her inner voice and ends up disappointed time and again. Each “Mr. Somebody� Syvanna becomes involved with opens a new chapter in her life. Each new relationship causes her to look at herself from a different perspective. Each new lover unveils previously unexplored facets of her own personality. She is ready for love, but will she ever realize that to give love, receive love, or even demand love, she must love herself first? And if Syvanna would only take a moment to listen to her inner voice, she might learn an important truth. As the tale unfolds, an ominous secret from Syvanna’s childhood rises to the surface, a secret that may ultimately kill her. In Search of Mr. Wonderful is a tale of heartbreak, self-destruction, desperation, and, ultimately, of transformation and discovery. Ms. Bouvier has written a novel of intense beauty and introspection that will stay with you long after you’ve turned the final page. REVIEWERS PLEASE NOTE: I will be adding chapters daily until the whole manuscript has been submitted. There are a lot!!! Stay tuned!!

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Correne Johnson, 18, is all the things most women never want to be: Overweight, illiterate and unloved. And she is being molested by her Aunts fiance. She uses her addiction to the Oprah Winfrey show and Oprah's TV wisdom's to challenge her Oppressor. These actions could either end her life or save her.

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Sex, religion, and fear (not necessarily in that order) in the mind of an 8 year old boy. A few tricky parts in the narrative. Does it hold your interest? Is it clear? This is a single 11,500 word story posted in two parts because it has to be; there is no real natural break; it's best read continuously. Frank comments welcome.

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Same as part 1.

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Poets and sex. A less than fruitful union.

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This is a new piece that is short and I hope sweet for erotica. I believe it could use some more character development but wanted to keep things short to get back into the game after a few months away from writing.

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Companion poem to previous submission.

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The exquisitely beautiful Angelica (Angie) is voyaging by great ocean-liner to rejoin her husband Jeremy (Jemmy) after five months' separation.

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This poem is about sex, straight up. Its a little softer piece than some of my work. I have plenty more where this came from and intend to post as often as I can. Feedback Desired: Raw sensuality erotica written by me. I am looking for feedback, good, bad or even indifferent. I write mostly dark or erotic, or even darkly erotic poetry.

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This is an intimate tale of two lovers that have been together for twenty years and still have some magic left.

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ok, so happy holidays everyone!....done with stuffing the turkey an' all that....now thinking of sunnier climes....picturing (in a PICTO) gimme gimme some fun summer times....maybe i just need to meet a man named stan with a campervan????!

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Some things lead to others. A friend sent a long email and photos of himself kiteboarding. I meant to write a haiku about the pictures, the water, the colors, how I imagined it felt to be right there-- and this intercepted those thoughts. Strange.

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The humorous story of an attractive forty-something woman, labeled by some in society as a "cougar," trying to succeed as the public relations manager to a sex-crazed Mayor in the world of Philadelphia's city politics. The wild antics of her dates, co-workers, and especially the mayor, add up as she tries to keep the mayor out of trouble and successfully land her dream job as a White House public relations manager. Things really get out of control when a religious foreign diplomat comes to town, accompanied by his beautiful twenty-two year old "party down" daughter.

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Does this stand on its own? Ending abrupt? A girl leaves a boy after a wild night together.

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I'm interested lately in doing strong brief pieces. Yet, does this stand on its own? Would you change anything? This is on the edge of erotic so I'm warning you now. It doesn't cross over but it is close.

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I have often wondered if telephone operators don't become tired of the verbal abuse they have to endure? Please give me feedback on the style in which this is written, does it work for this piece? I have revised the end. I was starting to feel sorry for mister Abrahams myself, lol.

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i was gonna do a PICTO of an innocent nagging wagging sorta tongue ...but it somehow turned out as a ruder mouth shagging version!

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The working title of this novel is Corporate Samurai "love begets hate, trust begets betrayal, lust leads to death"// This novel takes place in the mid to late 1970's in the US and Japan. Bill Sanford is a young CPA working for the Kentucky Fried Chicken Corporation. He was brought up as a Foreign Service brat and had spent three years in Japan. He had dreams of an international career but, his wife would have no part of it.// Ray Easton, KFC's Regional VP, Far East, is a cunning scoundrel and consummate liar. Ray is a master of insider trading of stock, and spreads the wealth to gain favors. He has always stayed one step ahead of the law.// Mike Adachi is an executive with one of Japan's major trading companies. He was raised in San Francisco and speaks English as a native. He launches a plot to bring a major US fast food company into the Japanese market, relying on a complex chain of industrial espionage.// Strategic Planning is taking corporate America by storm. KFC'S CEO has caught the bug. He brings in two hot shots to produce and lead a corporate-wide Strategic Planning initiative. Resistance to strategic planning and the new hot shots builds, and the corporate politics accelerate, with battle lines being drawn.// Japan has been through post war reconstruction and is becoming a world class economic power. Some of its former military leaders are determined to achieve economically, what they failed to accomplish militarily.// Two trading company giants, Mitsubishi and Sumitomo, become embroiled in a struggle for dominance of the exploding, western style, fast food market.// The cultural differences between Japan and the US complicate matters for both sides. The inner workings of Corporate America and Japan are revealed in all their successes, but also, their corruption and greed.// Personal conflicts and deep seated vendettas, some originating during World War II, unfold.// Seduction and love affairs are an integral part of the plot. They illustrate the differences in social views of sexuality between the East and West.// Industrial espionage involving two highly competitive US fast food companies, two Japanese Zaibatsu and the Japanese and Mexican underworld unfolds.//The head of the Yakuza (Japanese mafia)is an effective eliminator of problem people.// Many of the key characters were involved in WWII and their individual experiences influence their business behavior.// Cultural differences subtly emerge, and the exploitation of others to achieve one's ends is front and center.// Personal ethics, or the lack there of, and the constant tug between good and evil are interspersed throughout. View table of contents..

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here's another experiment --a depiction of bossoms broadly in the realms of erotica ....a teeny-weeny bit rude!

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yes, this is about BJ as in 'blow job' ....experimental, tongue in cheek (of course), fairly explicit, rude and bordering on the crude ....you have been warned!!!

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