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Casey Lang is a 34-year-old lawyer whose personal life is an epic failure, but she is a rising star at her large Manhattan law firm. A high-profile case with large fees will help cement her career. Enter celebrity chef John Zambelli, who hires Casey after his wife has kicked him out of the house and barred him from the kids, courtesy of a court order. John's case escalates into a full-blown custody battle as a crooked judge slams him with a series of punishing orders. When Casey and John’s attorney-client relationship heads into mea culpa territory, Casey is on a fast track to self-destruction. And then her career, and John’s case, face an even bigger threat – the truth. Because in a custody case, there are kids to consider.

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This is a tale which is based on a true story. And by TRUE, I mean FALSE. It never happened. And yet, it did happen. It is a love story (Well, my version of one) And I must say that I had one hell of a time writing it. And so I hope that YOU have one hell of a time reading it. Thank you. K.D.

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Rarely, every now and then I hit a poem in left field. You might need a leather glove to catch this one. For thirty years, I promised myself to never write bedroom poetry. Please forgive me for this one retraction. Okay I'm embarrassed already. This poem will have to explain itself.

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Here is a story about some really happy people. Enjoy!

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A pg version of this poem has been made into a video and is posted on Youtube at this link ---- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ceijq_z48Y4 ----- I had to water it down a bit for Youtube. So I renamed it By the Sea It would be super cool if you took a look at the video and left a comment on Youtube. Some people like the pg version better and some like this one - a comparison of the two would also be nice to know. Thanks in advance if you do go to Youtube. I will do several reviews of your writing in return if you subscribe to her channel or comment on the poem on Youtube. It takes quite a bit of work to do a video poem, and it's my friend's channel, so it would be nice to know if our idea on video poems is an idea worth continuing!

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I guess I'd like to know what do you think??! Too graphic??

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Any and all comments would be greatly appreciated if that is, you haven't listen to my warning in the title.

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Lost In Transition is the story about relationships. It is the story of a non traditional family whose Father is in the process of gender transformation to become a woman, while his wife is becoming a man. Caught in between is a precocious 13yr old girl who cannot stand either of them. Believe it or not, this story is based on a true life family in Wyoming. It is a tragic story in reality, but I have chosen to lighten it up and it is largely a sarcastic comedy told from the POV of the teen daughter Christye. My primary concern here is that Christye sounds like and acts like her age, and not that of a man of any age. I would like to know if my story is compelling. If it hooks you, what hooked you? What works and what doesn't? If you would like to edit as well, I would be happy to learn from you. Hopefully it won't be too much of a mess. This is my attempt to return to the group after a long absence, and I appreciate any and all readers. Cheers, Lost Soul

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What some people might do looking for love.

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I tend to write fairly graphic erotica, but posted some of my mild poems here in the erotica section because I wasn’t sure if I could post the way I usually write. I saw some graphitic work here so I got brave and I think I’m all right. It takes me a while after I write something to see the rough spots in the poem. I have only had this 4 or 5 days so I’m not sure yet what I need to change. I know it is a bit long, but with erotica that isn’t so bad. There is no wondering about the so deep meaning hidden in the poetic lines. This is a straight out story, bordering on porn. I usually try to have some story so it isn’t just about sex, even if the story part of the poem is brief. So is there any redeeming value in this poem and what are your general opinions. Is this poem, too graphic or is it arousing? Also comments about punctuation and style are also desired. thanks

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After an absence of two decades, a trip back to his native Romania is both daunting and irresistible to Luca Leontin, a Boston architect, accomplished artist, and libertine. Stirred by memories, he flies to Zurich in August 2001 and embarks on a train bound for Bucharest. During the trip, he becomes enmeshed in the designs of a group of characters that prove to be more than travel companions. Meanwhile, a personal memoir he has been writing, and now rereads between train stops, takes him on a parallel journey into his own past, raising both memories and questions. What has become of Daria, the goddess-like creature of his adolescence? Where is Alecu now, the brilliant artist whom Luca could never quite accept as a mentor? And what of Maia from his college years, who left him for a better prospect? Luca’s homecoming is far from what he’d anticipated. What he remembers as a city of austerity and simple habits has died with the fall of the Iron Curtain. In the new Bucharest, the boulevards shine with glitz, and decayed buildings are veneered with the symbols of Western glamour. Drab-looking restaurants with two-item menus have been replaced with stylish lounges where almond-shaped eyes glimmer in semidarkness and long, bronzed legs set Luca’s heart racing. No sooner does he set foot in his native city than his recent travel companions use his weakness for female beauty to lure him into an undercover operation that nearly costs him his life. Luca is shocked to learn that his ordeal has occurred through the agency of one person—Alecu, the man who has never forgiven him for a long-ago act of audacity. Luca’s brush with death makes him aware that he owes his predicaments to a lifelong indulgence in his desires. As his vacation nears its last days, a shocking confession, an unexpected gift from Alecu, and the aftermath of the 9/11 tragedy bring about the resolution Luca has always yearned for—the awakening of his long-dormant character.

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A writer of romance novels has problems in bed. A 3K word story, complete in this posting.Input please on character, pace. Is it a good read? Many thanks.

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a painfully short love story...

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Free form verse, mildly erotic. I welcome critical reviews.

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Being immersed in each other regardless of others around you Critical feed back encouraged.

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A supernatural tree in a secluded valley is discovered by the Tierra Tribe. The tree produces a healing fruit, but only after joining with the Tree Woman. The tribe is split and goes to war over whether the Tree Woman should be venerated or vilified.

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okay... im going to attempt to write this in very small chapters, one per day. This is a crime story set in the fictional town of Cotton Creek, Texas. Part murder story, part character drama and part love story, it's a look at the clash between traditional values, modern times, and the unfairness of fate. I hope you enjoy it! i appreciate your feedback on the form as well as the content, naturally.

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This is an experiment. After reading 100 literary journals it seems they like life's underbelly best. Pls let me know general impression, the usual nits, but also about consistency in her voice - uneducated. I haven't used the compulsory f-word but if its needed, advise where to insert. Thanks!

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One of my favorite haikus, published by Boston Literary in a chapbook with others. Originally a science article somewhere but I stole the idea for haiku. Haiku is mostly punchline. Short and sweet.

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This is the start of a novel I've had in my head for awhile, I am looking for feedback!!Especially when it comes to the title and of course story line, I have placed this as a Restricted rated novel but I'm not sure if it should be...I know at the beginning its not much but the story does get much more adult content wise, please let me know if I should change the rating as we go along!! Thanks in advance to everyone!!

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An obese man in search of love finds something else. Does the story hold your interest? How do you feel about the MC? Candid input appreciated.

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You very kind reviewers helped me improve on this story I'd long buried at the back of my computer. But now a competition has come up and the theme is 'journeys'. This story is the only thing I have that is anywhere near related so I have dusted it down and would love some further feedback. I've written right up to the 2,000 word limit so can't add anything but if there is anything that could be improved by changing it then please let me know! Thanking you in advance, Keen

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I recently wrote this for a competition and would love some general feedback before I send it in. Many thanks in advance, Keen - Spelling, as always, is in UK English

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here in the uk we have a kinky undies and sex toy store that is also renowned for home parties...yes i hosted one recently...a good girlie night of wine, nibbles and giggles as we passed around the latest lingerie and varied collection of vibrant vibrators...beats watching tv any day i must say!

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Just discovered this old story and realise I never fully finished it. Does it work the way I've left it or could it do with more plot, or simply a better conclusion? Any feedback welcome. UK English as always. Cheers, Keen

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Pamela Miller, flutist, is about to return to Australia after a concert tour in the UK. As she approaches Cardiff for her last performance, a seemingly innocuous incident occurs on the train, which appears to have no bearing on her future. After the concert, Pam and her cousin, Marigold, hire a car and drive to Cardigan where Goldie visits friends, while Pam tours the nearby Iron Age Fort where she is attacked.

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A botched drug raid took her father’s life when she was 7. On her 13th birthday she witnessed her mother’s murder. Alone in the world, Jennifer Blade set out to even the score. At 33, enmeshed in a game that knows no rules, she is about to fulfill her quest when everything unravels. Fleeing for her life, she heads to the mountains of upstate New York, where she unexpectedly finds new reason to live and a threat to die. Steve Sanders, a 38-year-old psychologist with a predictable life, is on a fishing trip in the mountains. Little does he know that all vacations are not created equal. Catch and Release, a 76,000-word romance/suspense novel, is the story of two lives from vastly different backgrounds, drawn together by fate and a common love of the great outdoors. The crossing of Jennifer’s and Steve’s paths releases an explosion of love, passion, adventure, and ultimately a reason for a shared journey. Within 24 hours, they catch a few trout, have a passionate affair, shoot and kill a man, are involved in two gun battles, receive wounds, and end up in Miami, Florida. All this, and as Steve says, they still have six days of vacation left. Their relationship touches long-buried feelings in Jennifer, and shatters the mundane existence suffocating Steve.

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Sometimes as a senior citizen I'm questioned or chided about the effects of time on intimate aspects of life. Here is a retort, of sorts. Comments welcome.

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“God won’t bother with plagues and floods. He’ll just send me.� When a serial killer is murdered while in the act of enjoying his latest victim, former LAPD detective, Hale Parrish, is asked to use his supernatural talents to investigate. His search is short-lived, because the vigilante, referring to himself as “Judgment,� tracks Hale down to reveal a life-changing secret: both of them are members of an elite bloodline created to enact divine wrath upon the wicked. While Hale decides whether his birthright is a blessing or a curse, shadows from his past emerge, forcing him to face his demons, protect his family, and take back control of his destiny.

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Love and all that nonsense - used the S word. Pretty liteweight, though if you're easily offended pass this by. For others, I know I've messed up the lines here and there and would appreciate some guidance. Otherwise, hope you enjoy it. I enjoyed writing it.

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Revised 12 Aug. 2010 Please don't read the reviews before you read the poem you will short change yourself if you do. Feedback is always welcome.

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In Search of Mr. Wonderful, The Journey from Myth to Madness Romance / Adult To Invite Love, You Must Love Yourself First Syvanna Lee knows what she wants—an everlasting love, her own “Mr. Wonderful.� Yet in her precarious quest to find such a man, she refuses to listen to the truth of her inner voice and ends up disappointed time and again. Each “Mr. Somebody� Syvanna becomes involved with opens a new chapter in her life. Each new relationship causes her to look at herself from a different perspective. Each new lover unveils previously unexplored facets of her own personality. She is ready for love, but will she ever realize that to give love, receive love, or even demand love, she must love herself first? And if Syvanna would only take a moment to listen to her inner voice, she might learn an important truth. As the tale unfolds, an ominous secret from Syvanna’s childhood rises to the surface, a secret that may ultimately kill her. In Search of Mr. Wonderful is a tale of heartbreak, self-destruction, desperation, and, ultimately, of transformation and discovery. Ms. Bouvier has written a novel of intense beauty and introspection that will stay with you long after you’ve turned the final page. REVIEWERS PLEASE NOTE: I will be adding chapters daily until the whole manuscript has been submitted. There are a lot!!! Stay tuned!!

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Correne Johnson, 18, is all the things most women never want to be: Overweight, illiterate and unloved. And she is being molested by her Aunts fiance. She uses her addiction to the Oprah Winfrey show and Oprah's TV wisdom's to challenge her Oppressor. These actions could either end her life or save her.

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Sex, religion, and fear (not necessarily in that order) in the mind of an 8 year old boy. A few tricky parts in the narrative. Does it hold your interest? Is it clear? This is a single 11,500 word story posted in two parts because it has to be; there is no real natural break; it's best read continuously. Frank comments welcome.

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Same as part 1.

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Poets and sex. A less than fruitful union.

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This is a new piece that is short and I hope sweet for erotica. I believe it could use some more character development but wanted to keep things short to get back into the game after a few months away from writing.

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A prose poem. No meter, rhyme scheme. Just capitalization, metaphor and image. Not saying whether this really happened. Just so you know.

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Companion poem to previous submission.

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This is rhiannon on Rhiannon expanded; as suggested. It has an ending, is either more truthful or it is not. Remember when I tell you anything about this story that "I am Lying Now."

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A Re-boot of the Rhiannon series. It rewrites the first Rhiannon story (published elsewhere)The Gorgon. It is deliberately inconsistent with other stories published or workshopped. Rhiannon is more complicated, Rosalyn has a different status, it is in 3rd person. It has themes of transformation,the loss and reclamation of important things (although they are not what the characters or readers think at first). A word on its setting: this is not set in medieval Europe. It takes place on a world that is about 11th century in terms of its social and technological development, but is 30 lightyears away from Earth, which is occupied by a world (Terra) with 21st century development. It takes place in our future, but in that world's (worlds') past. One culture is corrupted by Terran society, others are not. Oddities like the characters using slang from the US c. 2009 is thus explained. It is the tale of the fall and rise of Rhiannon, the ever so great descendent of the lengendary woman/goddess of the same name. All feedback is appreciated. Thank you.

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The exquisitely beautiful Angelica (Angie) is voyaging by great ocean-liner to rejoin her husband Jeremy (Jemmy) after five months' separation.

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This poem is about sex, straight up. Its a little softer piece than some of my work. I have plenty more where this came from and intend to post as often as I can. Feedback Desired: Raw sensuality erotica written by me. I am looking for feedback, good, bad or even indifferent. I write mostly dark or erotic, or even darkly erotic poetry.

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This is an intimate tale of two lovers that have been together for twenty years and still have some magic left.

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ok, so happy holidays everyone!....done with stuffing the turkey an' all that....now thinking of sunnier climes....picturing (in a PICTO) gimme gimme some fun summer times....maybe i just need to meet a man named stan with a campervan????!

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I asked HavePenWillScribble to toss me a topic so if you hate this blame him. If you like it, I've never heard of him.

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Some things lead to others. A friend sent a long email and photos of himself kiteboarding. I meant to write a haiku about the pictures, the water, the colors, how I imagined it felt to be right there-- and this intercepted those thoughts. Strange.

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Aldersmith suggested my destiny is to write 55ers since I was born in 1955 and I'm almost 55. Har! Nancy, you're so funny. Since I'm highly suggestible, I'm writing another of these and await my stoning.

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I'm having flashbacks to the bad poetry contest. This poem sucks and I think that may be the point.

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The humorous story of an attractive forty-something woman, labeled by some in society as a "cougar," trying to succeed as the public relations manager to a sex-crazed Mayor in the world of Philadelphia's city politics. The wild antics of her dates, co-workers, and especially the mayor, add up as she tries to keep the mayor out of trouble and successfully land her dream job as a White House public relations manager. Things really get out of control when a religious foreign diplomat comes to town, accompanied by his beautiful twenty-two year old "party down" daughter.

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Does this stand on its own? Ending abrupt? A girl leaves a boy after a wild night together.

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I'm interested lately in doing strong brief pieces. Yet, does this stand on its own? Would you change anything? This is on the edge of erotic so I'm warning you now. It doesn't cross over but it is close.

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This novel-length memoir details the growth and emotional shifts that occur when a thirtysomething woman decides to turn her husband's sexual fantasy into reality. While there will certainly be some vivid descriptions of sex as the story progresses, it is intended for a mainstream audience. The more detailed the critique, the better. I can take it!

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I would like to start submitting this to publications such as Ladies Home Journal, Reader's Digest and Oprah, but have discovered that our parents told us nothing but the truth - you will go blind if you continuously edit stories about masturbation. Any help I can get will be appreciated. Perhaps if you read it quickly you won't grow hair on your palms.

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In the forum, R.A. Keene posted a website for mature writers and Mishmont suggested someone should write some geriatric erotica. Then she just had to challenge Dill and me to rewrite the famous staircase scene from Gone With the Wind. I'd love to see a version by Dill, but until that time, my apologies to Margaret Mitchell. I've quoted the poor woman several times in this story. A bit of info for those who never read Scarlett. Rhett and Scarlett did get back together and had a child named Cat. Hmmmm...I'd be about the right age. Har! I'm not sure if they ever remarried but I'm assuming they did. They are married in my story. They planned to travel the world and I'm also assuming that's what they have been doing all these years. Thanks Bob and Michelle!

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I posted this a long time ago and dragged it out again in honor of Sumthiniwrote's brilliant piece "Brosna's Double Dog Dare", which everyone should take a look at as an example of fine writing under pressure. "Perspective" is jointly written with a good friend of mine. A few years ago we had one date and I sent him the beginning and middle of this piece and he sent me back his perspective of the date. "Dysfunctional Dating" could have just as easily been the title of this piece.

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STOP RIGHT HERE! If you are easily offended by foul language, sexual acts, degradation of women, the slaughter of animals and/or politics don't read this. Otherwise, dive right in and see what I deal with on a daily basis.

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The first line of this story is the absolute truth. It has been suggested that when I originally posted this I rambled a bit too much. While working to correct that, it seems I've taken rambling to new levels. I would ask any reviewer who cares, to come up for a name for my UOE.

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After a writing class in which we discussed how to write about sex (street terms vs anatomical), I came home and wrote this piece of nonsense using every anatomical term I could find. Strictly for fun. Rphil205

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i was gonna do a PICTO of an innocent nagging wagging sorta tongue ...but it somehow turned out as a ruder mouth shagging version!

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I'm such a sweet person until I sit down in front of a keyboard. My latest target? Narcissistic pretty boys.

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The working title of this novel is Corporate Samurai "love begets hate, trust begets betrayal, lust leads to death"// This novel takes place in the mid to late 1970's in the US and Japan. Bill Sanford is a young CPA working for the Kentucky Fried Chicken Corporation. He was brought up as a Foreign Service brat and had spent three years in Japan. He had dreams of an international career but, his wife would have no part of it.// Ray Easton, KFC's Regional VP, Far East, is a cunning scoundrel and consummate liar. Ray is a master of insider trading of stock, and spreads the wealth to gain favors. He has always stayed one step ahead of the law.// Mike Adachi is an executive with one of Japan's major trading companies. He was raised in San Francisco and speaks English as a native. He launches a plot to bring a major US fast food company into the Japanese market, relying on a complex chain of industrial espionage.// Strategic Planning is taking corporate America by storm. KFC'S CEO has caught the bug. He brings in two hot shots to produce and lead a corporate-wide Strategic Planning initiative. Resistance to strategic planning and the new hot shots builds, and the corporate politics accelerate, with battle lines being drawn.// Japan has been through post war reconstruction and is becoming a world class economic power. Some of its former military leaders are determined to achieve economically, what they failed to accomplish militarily.// Two trading company giants, Mitsubishi and Sumitomo, become embroiled in a struggle for dominance of the exploding, western style, fast food market.// The cultural differences between Japan and the US complicate matters for both sides. The inner workings of Corporate America and Japan are revealed in all their successes, but also, their corruption and greed.// Personal conflicts and deep seated vendettas, some originating during World War II, unfold.// Seduction and love affairs are an integral part of the plot. They illustrate the differences in social views of sexuality between the East and West.// Industrial espionage involving two highly competitive US fast food companies, two Japanese Zaibatsu and the Japanese and Mexican underworld unfolds.//The head of the Yakuza (Japanese mafia)is an effective eliminator of problem people.// Many of the key characters were involved in WWII and their individual experiences influence their business behavior.// Cultural differences subtly emerge, and the exploitation of others to achieve one's ends is front and center.// Personal ethics, or the lack there of, and the constant tug between good and evil are interspersed throughout. View table of contents..

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here's another experiment --a depiction of bossoms broadly in the realms of erotica ....a teeny-weeny bit rude!

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yes, this is about BJ as in 'blow job' ....experimental, tongue in cheek (of course), fairly explicit, rude and bordering on the crude ....you have been warned!!!

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Warning: this novel has at least four levels, is full of sex and violence, and is very fast paced. The Well of Women is at risk, as is the Tourney which Rhiannon wishes to use for pride and peace. But there are riots against offworlders, who the people blame for the rash of mother hate that is spreading through the land. And there is the mysterious Maelan--supposed guardian of the Well, whose malfunction may explain the evil that is afoot.

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Rhiannon, prodigal daughter of the king of New Fairy, has suffered a terrible curse. Having humiliated a witch, she must suffer a unique shame--she must go naked, regardless of the weather or social situation. These are the stories of how she reclaims her dignity and fights the evil of men, and her own inner conflicts. Many of these are more light hearted than Rhiannon's Ordeal, and show Rhiannon in the heroic capacity that emerged in her post-curse life. Rhiannon's relationship with Rosalyn is more ambiguous--at least to Rhiannon; I don't think the reader was ever fooled. There are other differences, but I don't think that should matter to the reader. Rhiannon's still her dear, sweet, naked self.

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