Content: self-discovery

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Synopsis - In Celia Reynolds eyes, life is perfect. She has a wonderful loving family including a sister that is her best friend. Her career is skyrocketing and she has more male admirers than she can keep up with. Then, her world is shattered when her sister Gabi takes her own life. As she questions her sister’s suicide and peels back the layers of her ideal life, she realizes that life is not perfect nor is it meant to be. Her journey of self discovery takes her from an elegant 20th floor apartment in New York City to Washington, DC and the Islands of South Carolina. Along the way she learns a family secret that forces her to see her self and her sister in a different light - all with help from some unlikely sources - an orangutan named Nikkee and a Voodoo Priestess named Mira. *** Requests - All I can ask for is honest feedback. Give it to me straight ; ).

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I am looking for feedback on this essay, which was a blog entry a week or two ago. Someone who stopped in on my blog gave me a huge shout out on it. So I may submit it to the Home Forum at the Christian Science Monitor. They accept personal essays of 900 words or less that must have a theme present, "that take the reader on a journey with you on a journey of self-discovery." Does this fit the bill? How can I make it stronger? Just edited this a.m. 8/27, per the suggestions of my first five reviewers. Tnanks for the help. Any other ideas?

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When Kayla and her best friend’s husband nearly start an affair she realises that now is the ideal time to go on a journey of self discovery, but how far will she get before circumstances force her to return home to more than she bargained for?

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