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This was originally 8000 words, now 5500. Originally this was in my novel, The Swiftness of the Sea. And in this story, the sea is swift. ≈≈≈≈ This is story four, of ten, for my Short Story-Script project. ≈≈≈ Robert and Aya are the same characters as in my, Locked-In, story. The girls speak in a pidgin English (not grammatical errors) ≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈

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How would it feel? Can we really imagine the depths of guilt and mourning?

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◊ - denotes telepathic communication. ≈≈≈≈Developing into a three part novel. Part 2/Chapter 5 - ≈≈≈≈ Part 3/ Chapter ? - The hero returns. ≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈≈

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I sat down one day and wrote my first science fiction. I PLEASE READ NOVEL INSTEAD: THE MIRACULOUS ---I thought it foolish and pulp-fiction. I sent out a second draft and it was published. http://www.kalkion.com/category/author/max-keanu This is a new and interesting science fiction site with some sharp Indian scientists running the code and strategy behind it. Here is a rewrite I need feed-back on if you have a moment. I am thinking of taking character Captain Guider and writing a story about his first voyage as a youthful space wander in 3910. A.D. I am jazzed and motivated about this and thank Keen for his help. Hey! Thanks Bob.

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Here is my (crappy) query. Obviously not ready to send to agents, but enough to give y'all a sense of what my ms is about: One by one, the Shepherd is collecting lambs and sacrificing them up to the heavens. His temple is slowly filling with the blood of his sheep. It is with these offerings that he is trying to gain favor with the Lord he has disappointed in the past. Everything is falling into place. His flock is growing. He is getting stronger and closer to achieving spiritual fulfillment. But something has changed. The house next door, vacant for the past ten years, is now occupied. A strange but beautiful new neighbor has moved into his quiet neighborhood, complicating his plans and putting his life’s mission on hold. She is a distraction. And yet, feelings are being stirred within him that he thought had died years ago. He is torn between letting her help forget his pain to embrace a new life, or letting the fever inside him take over. -Hello! I am new to this site and happy to be a part of a new writing community. I've been working on this novel for almost two years and hope it's close to being ready for query. Looking forward to all you eagle eyed critters giving my ms your once over. Thanks!

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I thank the writer who loaned me the title word- yestermorrows. I dreamed about this word. Theme came from a Henry James novel. I had to ask myself, am I this guy? Maybe all men are this guy? ALL revision/comments/suggestions welcome... I'm an amateur at this, but I feel I'm on a good course. =================================================

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Become what you detest most (meant in humour. Maybe).

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