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This is something I wrote for my father when my mother passed away, well it was for me to practice as well. comments are welcome

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This little piece is about accepting the people you love... warts and all. Tear it up please:)

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An experiment. Comments welcomed.

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This is an experiment. After reading 100 literary journals it seems they like life's underbelly best. Pls let me know general impression, the usual nits, but also about consistency in her voice - uneducated. I haven't used the compulsory f-word but if its needed, advise where to insert. Thanks!

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This novel follows a year in the life of a recently divorced, software consultant, Edward Kale. Written in the style of a romantic comedy, Edward finds himself flung headlong into a mid-life crisis, despite his best intentions. He sees it coming and yet seems unable to resist its allure. These experiences prove beneficial ultimately, as they allow him to move on from the divorce, and come to terms with his ex-wife, his daughter, and his career. I welcome any insights or feedback, particularly as they relate to character development or credibility.

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just some common sense.

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This is a very rough, very raw, still evolving work in progress. The characters are communicating effectively in my mind, I just hope to translate their interactions effectively onto paper. ***** Chandler Jones and Dino DiGallo open a cafe at the ripe age of 22 years of age. Their similarities are many, having been best friends for the past 17 years, but their ideas and motivations for success develop different paths, opening a gap between them. Cappuccinos, lesbians, multinational wannabe gangsters and a murder investigation follow, adding chaos to deteriorating relationships, both personal and professional. How will it all end? Based loosely on my own experience, this is a departure from what I consider my 'typical' style / genre. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated - please be brutally honest about what you like / dislike and areas of improvement. Thanks. Allen

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I swear, this is the last memoir type poem for a good long while. Comments always welcome.

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INTERSECTIONS is about Win and Juno Skalicky, an ordinary Midwestern couple whose marriage comes to a tragic end in a car accident that leaves Juno dead. But when the suicidal Win returns to the accident scene to kill himself to be with Juno, he’s astonished—and unbelieving—when he finds Juno there. Juno, who’s not fully convinced she’s dead, recruits their little dog Sam, to help her persuade Win that she’s real—as is her plan to reverse time so the two can resume their life together. I would like any and all honest feedback on anything that doesn't work for you! Thanks.

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Memories are precious, especially when the act is difficult to give. To all you fathers who’ve impacted and nurtured your children’s lives by stepping out of your comfort zones to dance, whether it be in mind, body or soul - this one’s for you! You are the choreographer that gives a child the courage to stand on the center stage of life

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for a friend who's relationship has recently ended, a decision she did not make.

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Still working on older work. This doesn't rhyme as I have a problem in losing the power of it trying to rhyme. "Sorry Mom!" She made it look easy!! I am more interested in emotions evoked.

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A new short story I've been working on over the past 4 days. Any help is fine...nits or overall ideas. It's not meant to be funny like my usual fare, so beware. Hey, that rhymes. I'm a dork.

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It grows on you and you begin to anticipate it.

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It is a tough road to navigate with someone, but when done in synch with the other, it is this perfect, difficult dance.

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Flow in the fourth stanza still bugs me. I eliminated words I really wanted to use, to help the flow, but point out to me what else may be the problem.

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Lamenting more than a fling.

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Waiting, waiting, waiting. Email me already!

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Just thinkin' bout my baby one night.

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Just one musing over love.

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