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 | SPRING ETERNAL | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.32 | Dec 29, 2011 |
Summary:Ever had the need to write though you know it is an unfinished rather imperfect piece? Of course you have!
So bear with me. The need overcame the reality that it lacks
that finished touch. It will come when it come but for now it is birthing.
Spring...Chapters: |
| BLUE RAIN Reformatted | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 2 | 0.61 | Oct 24, 2011 |
Summary:This is just a piece for all who have moments of separation from hope.
If you have read and reviewed this.. I just want to know if format better. comment in forum ... The format was not like my own work so I finally went back and reformatted in to verses and changed a few simple words. I tried to single space it but it still appears double? Does the double spacing hurt it? Again ... if you have reviewed this before. Just leave comment in forum.
We have so many new members that I would love to have feedback from some of them.
This most likely will be the first piece I 'send out' haaaaaa... I know! I am such a wimp! I don't even care if I get rejected so why the fear? Just me!
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| Poetry of Life | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.26 | Apr 9, 2010 |
Summary:Observations of living for over a half century. Well over may I add!
Using an altered Haiku format.
Definitely not in best writing form but sick or not ... a writer writes!!
Critical commentary always welcomed as here to better my writing.Chapters: |
| Horns (Original) | k_s_talyn | Short Story | Fantasy | 3 | 2.15 | Jun 16, 2009 |
Summary:This is the first version of Horns, the 'talking' version. A mother protects her son from the ever present threat of hunters. I've had this version likened to a children's story, though some felt the morals were coming off as a bit preachy. A second version, one without any animal dialogue, and an added scene, can be found here: http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/library/index.html/read/32283 Chapters: |
| Horns (Second Version) | k_s_talyn | Short Story | Fantasy | 4 | 2.02 | Jun 14, 2009 |
Summary:This is the second version of Horns. The only dialogue is spoken by the human characters, and the dove scene was replaced by two new ones. A mother protects her son from the ever present threat of hunters. The original version can be found here: http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/library/index.html/read/32364Chapters: |
| The Gift | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 23 | 0.45 | May 5, 2008 |
Summary:Something wrote forty years ago and tucked in a bible. It is crude as just wanted to release pain and disappointment once again at unreturned love.
I am not going to edit it or change it's form as this was who I was then and to change it would lose something of me!Chapters: |
| A Note From Raven | flowing pencil | Poetry | Other | 16 | 2.50 | Mar 15, 2008 |
Summary:This is just a loving message to a hurting heart. It can be a message to many who too have experience this heartache.
I have taken the liberty to grow quiet and try to put myself in the beautiful spirit of the one called Raven. It is a responsibility I don't take lightly but if I go deep enough, try to change places and hear the messages is painful yet beautiful as in Cool Breeze Blowing. The remaining partner is this love story
said it was exacting like hearing from his beloved.Chapters: |
