Content: patience

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This is potentially a beginning to a YA novel I have been dreaming of for a very long time. I would like to know if this seems/sounds like a strong enough beginning to build upon or any constructive criticism you may have. Thanks for stopping by!

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I'm reading a Stephen White novel and a character makes the statement "time will tell." I thought it was simple, but profound. I was trying to take a nap, and the poem came to me quickly, so I jotted it down on a bill envelope on the nightstand. It's based on a cliche, of course, but cliches are often based on truth. Let me know if you can get past the cliches and appreciate it, and find truth in it, too.

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Wakeful hours tending to a fire of the belly. If you wait out the night, the day will surely come.

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