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 | Wheel of Season: Frostheart | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Poetry | 3 | 0.76 | Nov 19, 2008 |
Summary:Second of my haiku collections.
This one is about Winter.
Feedbasck Desired:
English is not my native language, so I'm still having a problem counting an amount of syllable in word such as sleep,snow,and so forth. If anyone can identify this for me, it would be the most appreciate. Thank!
Nasp.
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| Feinador--Life of Gala | Nasp Semeku | Novel | Fantasy | 0 | n/a | Nov 18, 2008 |
Summary:(1st revise)
Name: Galadorie De Abyssal
Status: A mascot dragon of the Feinador's retreat
Situtation: Kicked out from the castle and forced to live in the stable, Galadories must complete a requisiton until we earned enough prestige to be sent back to the castle once more.
With friends and foes along the ways, Gala will embarks on his late rite of passage to learn about friendship,his lost identity,and everday life of those who lived the cresent coast region and beyond.
Current Horoscope: "You have no luck with piercing object"
Fate: "Too much to tell"
Feedback: Comment on Plot,Character,nit,and credibility will be the most appreciate. Chapters: |
| Nature's cry | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.52 | Oct 25, 2008 |
Summary:A very old poem I wrote in my highschool year about nature.
I couldn't remember which style I wrote back then, but anything on grammar and verb tense error would be the most appreciate.
Hope you like this,
Nasp.Chapters: |
| My leg-ache | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Romance | 3 | 0.07 | Oct 24, 2008 |
Summary:My first attempt on Haiku about love,so please have mercy on my soul. Chapters: |
| Goodnight Draglen, Good Morning Dragoness | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Fantasy | 4 | 1.03 | Oct 19, 2008 |
Summary:Summary:
The song singing by the dragon to his mate. It recalled the day he meet her as the wounded draglen, not yet a dragoness,and the starting the song on the night when She was fully recover and was about to leave him.
Feedback:
Like always, any comment on grammar,verb tense, etc would always be the most appreciate.Chapters: |
| Haiku: Emotion and Beyond... | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Poetry | 3 | 0.45 | Oct 2, 2008 |
Summary:My haiku collection. This one is about everything that does not relate to season theme.Chapters: |
| For love of the land from the rainforest. | Nasp Semeku | Short Story | Fantasy | 2 | 0.00 | Sep 25, 2008 |
Summary:The short children story I started since the day I wrote 'The polar bear and the missing northern lights', and finished it today. It's life story according to one who appreicated the rainforest the most. Chapters: |
| The Polar bear and the missing Northern lights (Revised). | Nasp Semeku | Short Story | Fantasy | 1 | 0.72 | Sep 23, 2008 |
Summary:A Children story.The Polar Bear searching for The Northern lights when it went missing from the arctic. This is the first revision and I would like people to look at tense, grammatical error, and the meaning of this story, for I would like to know whelther if it carried my message to a younger audiences or not. Chapters: |
| Lullaby of a dragoness raised child. | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Fantasy | 2 | 0.00 | Sep 23, 2008 |
Summary:Summary:
A dragoness raised child sang his made up song to get an attention from his Dragon Mistra.
Feedback:
This is a children verse I intended to put it into my brainchild work.Any comment on tense,line flows, and grammar will always be appreciate.
Note:
Snowpour-Snowstorm. It was an intended mistake made by my character.
Mistra-The Drakarian term,a made up dragon tongue I had been working on it for awhile See also Feinador--Life of Gala). The term express emotional meanings so complicate it was tranliterated into this poem as the actual meaning is up for anyone to interpret.
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| White flower dance | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Fantasy | 1 | 0.00 | Sep 4, 2008 |
Summary:Summary:
Second part of Umbra's song series(See also: Twilight till night).
The minstrel ballad based on the winter festival of the Umbras, celebrating on the day when the moon was brightest.
A Female Umbra will clad in white robe to represent the moon as Male clad in black tunic, representing night that embraces the moon with twilight.
In short, The female will sing and the male will response within the verse of song before they join in the dance in the moonlight.
Feedback:
Unlike the prior poem, I want to make this one a festive song for a winter festival.
I had never tried on this sub-genre as well so any feedback would be the most precious and most appreciate.
Nasp Semeku,
Wished Thailand would be as peaceful as one's writing...Chapters: |
| Perplexed alchemist's complication | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Fantasy | 2 | 0.00 | Aug 26, 2008 |
Summary:An alchemist listed ingredients for his mysterious potion in poetry form.
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| Hunz and Little Robo | Nasp Semeku | Short Story | Fantasy | 3 | 0.59 | Jun 1, 2008 |
Summary:Summary:
When his puppy died at the hand of 'Death', Hunz leaves his home in search of someone who could mend his wounded heart.
A/N:
This is my rough revision thus far.The story was intended for young adult and 15+ audience.
I'm still looking for one to two more reviews on story and grammar before I can make another revision.
Thank you for your help. I'm really appreciate it. Chapters: |
