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|Murder on the Sunday Gulch||deb||Novel||Mystery and Crime||1||n/a||Sep 15, 2014|
Summary:Jo Hedrick, a recurring character from An Unfortunate Death takes a sabbatical in the Black Hills of South Dakota and discovers the lifeless body of a young girl on the Sunday Gulch Trail. Any and all feedback is welcome and appreciated.
|Over My Dead Body||James R. Callan||Novel||Mystery and Crime||2||n/a||Sep 5, 2014|
Summary:When Father Frank refuses to believe a death is suicide, he must seek evidence to convince the police it was murder. There are plenty of suspects: relatives after the estate, the large corporation that wants the land, a past business partner, even a state judge. In the process, the priest comes under emotional and physical attack, narrowly escaping death, before he eventually captures the true killer.
|McShane #3 - Hurricane or Homicide||j l mo||Novel||Mystery and Crime||2||n/a||Sep 4, 2014|
Summary:A Mini-Mystery for grown ups. This story will be complete in five chapters, and come in around 13000 words. I need help with any/all nits; from grammar, spelling, syntax, etc. ****I'm in need of those with sharp eyes for continuity. Are the characters in the right places from chapter to chapter?**** Of course, even if you don't "review", thanks so much for reading.
|The Ghost Pirates (Book Review)||tallow||Short Story||Editorial and Opinion||2||0.00||Aug 20, 2014|
Summary:A review of a short novel I recently finished called The Ghost Pirates.
|A Sign of Retribution||S. Tennyson Taylor||Novel||Mystery and Crime||4||n/a||Aug 14, 2014|
Summary:This is a new WIP I am working on. I am only a few chapters in but I would appreciate any and all comments. Grammar, flow, character development, structure, anything!
|The Midnight Man - Part II||Linkun Chen||Novel||Mystery and Crime||2||n/a||Jun 14, 2014|
Summary:Part 2 of my mystery Novel - The Midnight Man. The story takes place after the MC from Part 1 returns to his original body and regains his memories of his past life as Nicolai Ivanoff. You don't need to have read Part 1 to appreciate Part 2, but Part 2 would probably be more enjoyable if you had already read Part 1.
|Mystery of the Black Hollow||theLink||Novel||Young Adult||2||n/a||Jun 2, 2014|
Summary:SUMMARY: Three young friends are determined to discover the truth about the mysterious Black Hollow that plagues their clan. Patrollers near the Hollow are regularly disappearing, but the clan’s Elders seem unable to do anything about it. EOD is the female leader of the group, wise for her age, inquisitive, balanced, and a peace maker. WOC, also a girl, is her best friend. Energetic, impulsive, brave, and intuitive, Woc is the driving force behind their commitment to face the Hollow. STRAH, a boy, is bright, logical, cautious, and fearful. The trio seeks the help and counsel of ODO, an old hermit who long ago lost two offspring to the Hollow. To ensure the three are ready to face the dangers ahead, Odo requires them to meet several difficult challenges, most of which the reader can participate in. After each success, Odo shares a clue about the Hollow in the form of a riddle. Together, the trio faces his challenges, sorts out the clues, and visits the Hollow. They watch in horror as another clan brother is taken by a large beast, they figure out what lures the patrollers into the Hollow, and they face a beast, themselves, head on and survive. They leave the Hollow armed with sufficient knowledge to ensure that no clan member will ever again be taken, but some of the Hollow's mysteries remain for the Elders to decipher. All three come into their own as they together face the hermit’s challenges and the harsh realities of the Black Hollow. In the process, their friendship deepens and matures, and each one is changed. But, as the surprise ending reveals, all is not as it seems.
|An Unfortunate Death||deb||Novel||Mystery and Crime||6||n/a||May 27, 2014|
Summary:Some of the members at tnbw will be familiar with this novel - it was published here in its entirety a year or so ago. I'm s.till refining it. The names of the characters and the setting have been changed. Any and all feedback is appreciated!
|The House on the Hill||deb||Short Story||Mystery and Crime||11||3.25||Apr 28, 2014|
Summary:I'd like to know if the story holds your interest and if it's clear to the reader what is happening. Of course, it's always nice if someone finds a typo or two. Thanks!
|SALT LIFE||Nathan B. Childs||Novel||Mystery and Crime||13||n/a||Jan 24, 2014|
Summary:Former private investigator takes a demeaning job and is looking for a way to get his state license reinstated.
|Stormy Weather||tallow||Novel||Horror||2||n/a||Dec 8, 2013|
Summary:This short story is actually the first chapter, or story arc, of my upcoming novel Driftwood, but I wanted to give myself and my readers a small taste of the novel, which I view as sort of a mystery, horror epic.
|Henry's Shadow||tallow||Short Story||Mystery and Crime||6||2.34||Nov 3, 2013|
Summary:A recently divorced middle-aged man moves into a new small town and discovers to his surprise and confusion, that there is already someone living there who looks and sounds exactly like him and is apparently far more violent and cruel as well...
|Light of Cymru||Ceridwen||Novel||Commercial Fiction||6||n/a||Nov 2, 2013|
Summary:Nora Morgan, an enormously gifted teenager, discovered that her paranormal abilities might come from both sides of her family, not just one.
|The County Fair - Reposted||deb||Short Story||Mystery and Crime||9||1.63||Sep 23, 2013|
Summary:I am submitting this for an anthology of short (3000 word) mystery stories by the Sisters in Crime, to be published in 2014. I'd like to know if there is enough of a "mystery" aspect. Not entirely sure of the genre. horror/suspense/mystery/crime?
|Resurrection, Colorado||Don_P_Chambers||Novel||Mystery and Crime||7||n/a||Sep 16, 2013|
Summary:Resurrection Kristin Culpepper is a reporter for the Denver Post, sent to do a fluff piece on a the sheriff of Las Animas County, Tyler Young, who also happens to be stinking rich and owns a ghost town, Resurrection, which he has rebuilt into an environmental paradise. When they are attacked by four gunmen and barely survive, she decides the story may be more interesting. Then they discover the men were not after Tyler, and the clues they follow lead them to Las Vegas and a secret from Kristin's father's past.
Update 20 July 2014 - This was networked here last year and thanks to all the great comments and feedback, it has been finished, edited, and is now available as an e-book on the Kindle at: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00IBKV03C I'm keeping the first two chapters up on the site. If you like them and want to read more, shoot me an email and I'll send you the PDF or a copy of the e-book. Cheers, Don
|The Acts of Academia||amy s||Novel||Fantasy||6||n/a||Sep 15, 2013|
Summary:There are always politics and games to play in Academia, but Chief Apprentic Anver has to navigate through the unknown as he protects the other students. Master Kha is dying and orphaned students might be divided between the other six Masters presiding over the Guild. This can't be permitted because the other teachers are cruel, self-centered and just plain bad at teaching. To make it worse, Master Kha was the only one who accepted children. What happens to the Littles if Anver fails? Alone and unsupported, Anver manages to find unexpected trouble. A mystery begins to unravel. Welcome to magical academia!
|Murphy's Skull Rewrite/Revised||JudyS781||Novel||Mystery and Crime||7||n/a||Sep 6, 2013|
Summary:I've started a rewrite/revised version of Murphy. Thanks to all who were kind enough to read and review. I've made a few changes to the story, and hopefully fixed the nits. I still appreciate all comments and suggestions. Nora Carroll's quest for peace and quiet in her new Montana mountain home is shattered when her Irish Wolfhound, Murphy, unearths a skull under the back porch. Along with Deputy Bob Dillon, Nora is thrown into a seventy year old mystery involving murder, betrayal, stolen Nazi gold and an elusive artifact.
|The Mirrors --- strongest_start_seven||Nathan H.||Novel||Science Fiction||8||n/a||Jun 22, 2013|
Summary:My novel is a science-fiction mystery/ thriller. I am using the epistolary style, so as to maximize the suspenseful mood. Without giving too much away, it is set in a secret research facility in which things start to go subtly, and then dramatically wrong, eventually leading to a sinister crisis of identity in which no-one can be trusted, and the nature of humanity itself is questioned. It is highly sciency, and much serious physics study has gone into this. Inspiration for the tone came from Rebecca by Daphne du Maurier, and Dracula by Bram Stoker. I would like to receive feedback particularly on the flow of the plot, characterization, and mood/ tone of this novel. Of course, anything you want to remark on is welcome feedback!
|About Face||Hazy Shades of Me||Novel||Literary Fiction||2||n/a||Jun 19, 2013|
Summary:Lenore Nashun knows she has one of those faces. Not the kind people think they know from somewhere, nor the kind that welcomes conversation, but the kind that makes some people avert their eyes, the kind that can cause many to avoid her in a crowd, the kind that, in its natural state, makes people sum her up before even a word is exchanged; she-devil. With her cool exterior causing a disconnect most of her life, Lenore is more than tickled when delectable Nate Dahl takes an unsolicited interest. But just over two years after falling very in love, Lenore is buried by her work as a mannequin stylist and doesn’t notice her boyfriend’s downward spiral into the depths of despair. She comes home from work one morning, after pulling an all-nighter, to discover he’s vanished. No explanation in sight, not a crumb left behind. Feeling as though someone has stolen a piece of the puzzle she’s taken a lifetime to complete, Lenore struggles with whether she should get down on her hands in knees in search of it, or simply throw the lid over the leftover fragments. Sick with worry, fear and the inability to shake the feeling she’s being watched, Lenore relies on her best friend Nikki for sanity and her new found friend Liam for safety. Nikki, as always, is an amazingly reassuring support, while Lenore is confused at finding herself yearning to be around Liam for more than protection. In the meantime, she finally hears from Nate via a facebook message where he confesses the demise of his career, hitting the bottle, an affair and even worse, fleeing from it all, hiding from Lenore; leaving her to worry, wonder and wait. Had she been living under a rock? Amidst her confusion, Lenore somehow finds herself embarking on a fresh way of seeing things, a new career and an innovative verve. In the end, it’s not the humans; oddly it’s the dolls…her mannequins that give her what she’s really been looking for most of her life; expression and a fundamental freedom from its hold.
|Tor Loken and the Death of Chief Namakagon||James_A_Brakken||Novel||Historical Fiction||3||n/a||Jun 12, 2013|
Summary:TOR LOKEN AND THE DEATH OF CHIEF NAMAKAGON is book two in the Chief Namakagon trilogy. This engaging novel is a stand-alone mystery-adventure based closely on historical records. It explores the 1886 murder of the Ojibwe leader who was found near his secret silver mine. This mine has yet to be rediscovered in spite of 13 decades of treasure hunters' efforts. Mining, railroading, and timber harvest during northern Wisconsin's wild and lawless 1880s are the background for this twisting, turning mystery centered around 19 year-old Tor Loken, his girl, Rosie, and the men from the lumber camp. Rich characters, each based on someone the author has encountered in the great north woods, fill out the cast. Events documented in the local 1880s press provide many sub-plots that become key to the dramatic conclusion of the book, soon to be published by the author/illustrator, James Brakken, who was born and raised near Lake Namakagon and who still searches for the old chief's treasure as part of his extensive research for the trilogy. The author will include, among forty original illustrations, a map showing dozens of mines, both silver and gold, active in the late 19th century near the lodge of Chief Namkagon. Book 1, THE TREASURE OF NAMAKAGON, was a general fiction semi-finalist in the 2013 ABNA competition, the equivalent of being tied for second place out of 10,000 novels entered. The author is an award-winning conservationist, poet, and outdoor writer. Although fiction, his "Chief Namakagon" series is already regarded as a solid historical account of events that took place during Wisconsin's formative years. The treasure is real as are the facts used to support this exciting wilderness mystery-adventure.
|Saving Gracie||Lucy Rice||Novel||Commercial Fiction||8||n/a||May 26, 2013|
Summary:This is pretty close to done, so I'll take any feedback from general impressions to nits. If you're confused, please tell me. Thank you in advance for reading. :)
|Dawn||J.T.Twerell||Novel||Thrillers||3||n/a||May 19, 2013|
Summary:France “lost” five nuclear warheads. North Korea “found” five nuclear warheads. A young woman from Brooklyn is the only one who can stop World War III…..and she doesn’t even know it. In a world that seems to teeter on the edge of self-distraction, this story of international intrigue follows Dawn Laskey,a thirty-three year old fashion designer, who simply went on vacation in Paris. A romantic fling leaves her in a literal flight for her life as warring forces believe she has the key to missing nuclear weapons. From the beauty and romance of Monmontre Paris to a brutal prison cell in America, Dawn is caught in a web of evil from which she seemingly can not escape. Her one hope is Detective Gerald Denton of NYPD, the only person who seems to truly believe Dawn is innocent. His challenge is to keep her alive before malicious powers destroy her and possibly the entire human race. Looking to see if the opening chapters catch the reader or if they need a stronger impact
|The Box (by LC)||Linkun Chen||Short Story||Mystery and Crime||9||0.65||Apr 27, 2013|
Summary:This a re-post. I didn't get a lot of views the first time around (only about 10 actually, it says 30, but at least half of those were me) so I was hoping to get some more feedback this time. I didn't change much. I fixed some errors that my original reviewers mentioned and I added a paragraph at the end. Thanks! This is my take on an expressionist-crime story about a dead man who wanders the world in search of his killer. It's part of a collection of short stories I'm writing between work and law school. Hope you enjoy it.
|Bluenose Intrigues - Tilting at Windmills||alkemi||Novel||Mystery and Crime||8||n/a||Apr 7, 2013|
Summary:A grisly murder introduces newly recruited detective Simon Goodyear to the peaceful little town of Barrettsport and sends him on a three month long search for a master manipulator who entangles much of the town in his nefarious schemes. Along the way, the town, a school teacher and a young graphic artist draw Simon into their much more personal intrigues. This story is both a romance and a mystery. I really appreciate all the comments I've had from reviewers, and have made numerous changes that I think have improved the story. I feel like I've added a googolplex of commas (I know that's not possible), and look forward to some new reviews of the revised text.
|The Ringling Chronicles||able anders||Novel||Young Adult||2||n/a||Jan 27, 2013|
Summary:Imagine an 11 year old girl, the daughter of a museum director, discovers the ability to go back in time to meet some of the greatest artist of the Renaissance. Now imagine the chaos she would create if she went back and they find out she's from the future. As for feedback- not too worried about nits. This is a rough draft. Unedited. Just looking for feedback on story, theme, plot, character development, over all flow, etc.
|Manhattan Sting (working title)||Jordan04||Novel||Mystery and Crime||2||n/a||Oct 6, 2012|
Summary:**This is my first novel and the story is finished. I'd like to publish someday so any outside thoughts or edits would be great. Thanks!** Matt Caddigan is a 30 year old real estate agent living in Long Island. Once a talented college athlete, the negatives in Matt’s life are piling up. He finds himself in debut and stuck in a dead end job. By chance, he meets a strange woman; Isobel Kloss. A gifted artist and a cunning businesswoman, she may also be a master theif responsible for snatching a famous painting from the walls of a museum. As her world clshes with his, Matt’s life gets turned upside down. With the FBI and Isobel’s sinister employer closing in on him, Matt finds his life at risk, but he also finds new reasons to fight for it.
|The Darkest Area of The Night||KousKous||Novel||Erotica||1||n/a||Jul 24, 2012|
Summary:A night at the drive in theater, turns to a night in the woods. I had this dream and it became a story.
As of Saturday, August 05 2012. I have Renamed this book.I have also written chapters 6-10, but have not decided to release them to you, or if I should hold off for just a little longer.
I know my grammar is not the best.I will soon have an editor revise all my work, as soon as I finish chapters 10-30.
Keep in touch I may release more of this story.Just to keep my readers happy.Tell me how you feel about this title, and of course keep helping me revise this adventurous story. Thank you readers I'll definitely acknowledge you all in the final product!
As of Friday, August 10th. I am going to release a new version of Ch.1. The new release has a lot of the same aspects. A lot of the same "parts", yet I am just doing what all you readers love most. I have added even more detail so....stay tuned to the new release of my chapter!
|The Misadventures of Writer Annie Buntin: Death on an Antique Persian||Writer1Chick||Novel||Commercial Fiction||9||n/a||Jun 19, 2012|
Summary:Annie Buntin is a successful mystery writer, but her real life keeps interferring with her writing. The novel starts out with humor, but as is true with any person's life, bad things also come into play. Annie balances the bad with the funny to keep her sanity. Feedback: Idea of the story, characters, plot and what ever else you would like to offer. Also, comments on the title would be greatly appreciated.
|Into the Fog, Dawn of the Tiger||C J Driftwood||Novel||Commercial Fiction||12||n/a||Jun 12, 2012|
Summary:Kelly Broden is a ten-year-old with a knack for trouble, but a fresh perspective on the world around her. In her wanderings she befriends the town drunk (an ex-BOI agent), witnesses a blackmailing by a mobster, and becomes a prime witness in a murder investigation. Life in small town Middleton may seem quiet and secure, but an undercurrent of evil runs through both its past and future. Chief Broden, Kelly’s father, must discover the source and put the pieces together as a rash of murders plague the nearby train depot and eventually a citizen of his town. However, he doesn’t know his daughter is hooked into this undercurrent. In her nightmares the killer presents himself as a tiger out for blood...in the end, her blood. This is the first of a Trilogy. It has not been professionally edited. I would appreciate any feedback.
|Off the Hook||J.T.Twerell||Novel||Romance||1||n/a||May 14, 2012|
Summary:At thirty three, Laura has achieved success in business, but failed miserably in her romantic relationships. Leaving behind her latest quest, she is mystically led into an adventure that is filled with challenge, intrigue, and the hope for success in filling the void in her love life. This is romantic novel providing practical insights into both pragmatic living and spiritual journey. All input is welcome.
|Borderlands||TELawrence||Novel||Mystery and Crime||1||n/a||May 3, 2012|
Summary:A prominent cat is murdered in a world of talking animals.
|Fragile Demons||Erndog||Novel||Science Fiction||2||n/a||Feb 3, 2012|
Summary:If you are a Star Trek fan, particularly for “The Next Generation” (TNG) series, I think (hope) you will enjoy this novel. You can expect a solid story from the TNG genre that follows the TNG universe; the same familiar cast of characters and bad guys. I did not stray from guidelines set by Paramount. ........................ Synopsis ........................ Captain Picard and crew are assigned the simple mission of escorting two alien diplomats,from a recently discovered planetary system, back to their home planet to ratify a charter with the Federation of Planets to legalizes their entry into the Federation of Planets. As the aliens board the Enterprise, Counselor Troi senses some undefined evil about the two diplomats and warns Captain Picard. However, the diplomats prove to everyone, except Troi, their intentions are good and there is no evil (or is there?). Enter the Romulans, who are also vying for an agreement with the diplomats home planet, because they hold the key to the survival of the Federation of Planets. The Romulans assisted by the Tal Shiar are working toward the subjugation of the Federation and the Alpha Quadrant. Picard must unravel Troi’s mystery as she is driven to near insanity by an undefined evil, and is ultimately faced with saving the Federation of Planets from extinction at the hand of the Romulans. The diplomat's planatary system provides the key to survival, but the battle to save the Federation is grim as Picard becomes embroiled with the aliens over an attack on their religion, the deaths of military a military contingent, and being charged with breaking the Prime Directive. NOTE: Chapter 1 is at the bottom of the chapter list. All feedback is welcome.
|The Price of a Miracle||TELawrence||Novel||Young Adult||7||n/a||Jan 20, 2012|
Summary:A young girl is reunited with her older brother, three years after he mysteriously disappeared.
|The Midnight Man - Original||Linkun Chen||Novel||Mystery and Crime||3||n/a||Dec 5, 2011|
Summary:My first novel about a Seattle writer who seeks to unravel the mystery behind his bizarre dreams.
|Burundi Gold||jaksnipe||Short Story||Mystery and Crime||12||2.86||Oct 4, 2011|
Summary:a little detective story for your afternoon reading pleasure. introducing my new favorite action crime-fighting hero i just invented right now today! too obvious on the crime execution??
|Must (Prequel)||kaleigh castle-maguire||Novel||Commercial Fiction||2||n/a||Oct 2, 2011|
Summary:This is the part of the longer story that precedes the part I already posted as a short story (Muse by Kaleigh M). I know some people want to know what happens next and I'll get to that as soon as possible, but I'm really interested to know what people think of what I had planned in the story before the night in David's house where Fran sees the painting for the first time. This "prequel" comprises two parts - one featuring Fran alone and one featuring David. I'd be particularly interested to know if people think they're in the right order ie I keep thinking about switching them so we start out with David painting and then go back to Fran in the coffee shop. Any thoughts appreciated.
|Machinery||jaksnipe||Novel||Science Fiction||4||n/a||May 25, 2011|
Summary:Machinery introduces the reader to an amazing scientific possibility through a rather... controversial (if not apocryphal) narrative. This installment is an introduction of sorts, hoping to spark your curiosity about both the science and the narrator. I appreciate your most brutally honest feedback. Thanks!
|Just Desserts||Stindo||Novel||Mystery and Crime||13||n/a||Mar 22, 2011|
Summary:This is a very rough, very raw, still evolving work in progress. The characters are communicating effectively in my mind, I just hope to translate their interactions effectively onto paper. ***** Chandler Jones and Dino DiGallo open a cafe at the ripe age of 22 years of age. Their similarities are many, having been best friends for the past 17 years, but their ideas and motivations for success develop different paths, opening a gap between them. Cappuccinos, lesbians, multinational wannabe gangsters and a murder investigation follow, adding chaos to deteriorating relationships, both personal and professional. How will it all end? Based loosely on my own experience, this is a departure from what I consider my 'typical' style / genre. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated - please be brutally honest about what you like / dislike and areas of improvement. Thanks. Allen
|Infected||vsworld||Poetry||Thrillers||0||1.13||Mar 15, 2011|
Summary:From the Ballad of the Bullet novel, A poem Anthony wrote in his bedroom as he prepares to confront Cree. Again, thank you and g-luck:)Z
|Signal 30||J.T.Twerell||Novel||Mystery and Crime||3||n/a||Dec 6, 2010|
Summary:CODE 30, the police designation for crime scene with extreme or imminent danger, is a riveting mystery about the intricacies of a major crime investigation. The terror builds as the investigators follow the unknown path of an insane bomber who continues to move one step ahead of their search, forcing them to face the reality of living in a time of terrorism. Detective Shane Murphy, a 40 year old senior officer with Special Case Investigations, is thrown into the maze of confusion as he attempts to sort out the facts before the perpetrator strikes again. While his personal life crumbles around him, as his wife informs him of her decision to pursue a divorce, Murphy finds assistance with the arrival of Stacy Landou, a 38 year old Special Agent with Alcohol, Tobacco and Firearms. The case becomes more complicated when the local press begins to hound Murphy and suggests he is failing in his investigation. With Shanes's career, marriage, and reputation seemingly out of control, the bomber continues to move one-step ahead of the investigation. Signal 30 is published in eBook and paperback and I am looking for reviews.
|Torino Dreams||NMwritermom||Novel||Romance||15||n/a||Nov 23, 2010|
Summary:Snow in the high desert can only lead to one thing, one car smashing into another. That is Kate's last thought before her truck slides down a hill into a very expensive looking BMW. Even better is how the guy yells at her and basically calls her an idiot for not knowing how to drive in the snow. So why does she offer to fix the damage to Sam's car for free? Well, Sam wanting to call the cops and report the accident might have something to do with it. Kate has a serious aversion to law enforcement, and for good reason. Not that she's about to explain that to Sam. All she wants to do is fix his car up and forget it ever happened. The problem with that is that once Sam calms down and apologizes she can't seem to get him out of her head. It's dangerous for her to get close to anyone. The closer she lets him in, the more likely he'll figure out exactly what she's hiding. ***This is my first ever NANO project so any and all feedback is appreciate. Is it interesting enough to keep going with. Is the romance too slow? Are you intrigued by the secrets Kate's hiding? ***I'm posting edits so my poor new readers don't have to see the mess! Thanks for reading!
|Willing Flesh||farfinagle||Novel||Horror||2||n/a||Sep 30, 2010|
Summary:This story is too long to be a short story, but too short to be a novel. Novella is probably the right term. The first installment was published a while back. It has been reworked and is now being reposted.
|Dangerous Distraction||Anne West||Novel||Romance||6||n/a||Jun 28, 2010|
Summary:Art historian Wiley Jones enjoys a mundane existence in the protective cocoon of academia. Surrounded by volumes of manuscripts and dusty artifacts, her carefully orchestrated life is thrown into chaos when she is encouraged to join an art recovery project based in Croatia. The moment she and her unwanted protector, undercover FBI agent Scott McCormick leave Chicago they quickly find themselves immersed in a shadowy world of dead ends and misdirection. Scott enjoys the thrill of the chase as it relates to both Wiley and their ensuing investigation. On the surface it appears a cache of pre-World War II art and artifacts have been uncovered during the demolition of an old school. But as Wiley and Scott dig deeper they soon realize that many of the pieces in the collection don’t belong. Rather that they appear to have been recently added to the find. When Frank Hamilton the current project director winds up dead, they find themselves in a race against the clock to unwind the mystery before they are either forced to leave the country or wind up dead themselves. As they struggle to sort through the confusion surrounding the art work and their relationship they come to realize that the only safe harbor may be each other and that leaves far more at risk than they thought. Thank you for any feedback. I am particularly intersted in story line continuity and voice.
|In a Different World||momcanact||Short Story||Commercial Fiction||8||1.40||Apr 15, 2010|
Summary:Here is a chapter from a larger work in progress. Originally written as a theatrical play, this story is inspired by actual events. I like to bring it out once a year or so and play with it... searching for an ending. Any feedback would be appreciated!
|House of Dolls||Eileen Elkinson||Short Story||Flash Fiction||5||0.41||Apr 6, 2010|
Summary:A dollmaker meets some interesting children who are fans.
|Ghosts of the Heart||Danielle_B||Novel||Romance||3||n/a||Nov 30, 2009|
Summary:A writer and copy editor for The Denver News, Tarin McGyver lives alongside a small, picturesque lake in the heart of the Rocky Mountains. A chance encounter with the lead singer of a popular rock band, Jonathan Parker, leads to an unlikely relationship between the two. In the process Tarin finds herself entangled with Jon's manipulative and scheming business manager, Tommy Wyndham. She quickly becomes determined to expose the manager's thievery and deceit to both Jon and the music industry. But Wyndham has plans of his own and will stop at nothing to keep her out of his client's life. Add to it an apparent stalker in her hometown and our heroine faces danger on two fronts. Follow the action as it culminates in murder, kidnapping and a daring mountain rescue during a blinding blizzard. Other than that, nothing much of interest takes place.
|The Cloud - Love Grows In The Shadows Of Impending Doom||Sideman||Short Story||Romance||14||3.27||Sep 11, 2009|
Summary:This is my entry for the "The Cloud" writing competition. It was originally over 6000 words, so I had to pare a lot to get it under 5000 (4977). As an eerie and mysterious cloud hovers over Las Vegas for months, it renders havoc on everything and everyone below. In spite of all the tragedy and gloom, love finds a way to grow and flourish. Any and all feedback is appreciated. Thank you in advance.
|Peacock Blue||Rose Mandan||Short Story||Fantasy||7||1.90||Apr 16, 2009|
Summary:John forces himself to go to yet another boring ball as escort to his widowed aunt...never imagining that it would lead to the adventure of his life!
|Vicarious Consent||Dtank5224||Novel||Thrillers||3||n/a||Mar 29, 2009|
Summary:Novel based upon many of the circumstances we find ourselves in as parents and step-parents in today's divorce-ridden society. I am looking for constructive criticism.
|Cow Castle Mystery||Sherman Law||Novel||Young Adult||8||n/a||Jun 20, 2008|
Summary:The story of a Kansas farm family and a mystery that develops around the ruins of an old barn on their land.
|Search for Wimpy Bumbuster Ch. 10||opsimath||Novel||Literary Fiction||3||n/a||Apr 4, 2008|
Summary:In this chapter, the Captains Thurston start a new kind of boat charter, and take on new clients.
|A Revelation||michael webb||Short Story||Religion and Spirituality||5||1.55||Dec 3, 2007|
Summary:I don't know how to do this without giving too much away. A man loses everything, including his faith in God. His sister is there, never waning, to help him. His life changes and if you believe him...so could yours. There, how's that for a hook.
|KEN CARTER AND THE EMERALD POOL MYSTERY Chapter one||rlvs||Novel||Young Adult||4||n/a||Sep 25, 2007|
Summary:An adventure story for young readers when Ken Carter and Allison Smith discover the secret mystery of the emerald pool.
|Buried Secret||Bethany||Novel||Thrillers||10||n/a||Aug 28, 2007|
Summary:Sophie has a secret. A secret she buried seven years ago. At least she thought she did.
|A World Within||BukowskisMuse||Novel||Literary Fiction||5||n/a||Nov 18, 2006|
Summary:In this era where science fiction is becoming science fact, technology is mixing with strongly held myths, and art is blending the chaos to shine a light on the rapid changes, we will either destroy ourselves or else learn to live in peace, without and within. This is the story of a particularly gifted young psychic, Aurora Swift, and the psychiatrist who tries to unravel her worlds, and in doing so unintentionally comes into contact with interconnected universal mysteries, dimensions, ancient beings and civilizations. Mixture of fantasy and reality genres. Mainly, the two settings are the modern day present with a bit of government conspiracy, and a sort of underworld that Aurora calls the Night World she escapes into to keep her sanity intact what with the pressures of her life. We meet a lot of other psychics in Aurora's circle and travel all over the U.S. and the world in search of some type of salvation. ** The first six or so chapters are non-linear and deliberately jarring as Aurora is experiencing a crossover of dimensions and times that will be sorted out in later chapters.// If I were to summarize the emotional stew or message of the story, it might go something like this: It is easy to wonder if our lives are worthless and actions are pointless because all will be forgotten one day. If every inventor, thinker, artist, intuitive being, and scientist followed through with this line of thinking, we’d still be in the Dark Ages or perhaps cause a new one. In this time of flourishing light, we need not allow the darkness of short-sightedness envelop us. The power is within us to make this world whatever we want it to be and become. And yes, one can make a difference with a little help from her friends.// **NOTE: I am on this site for constructive criticism. If you believe my work is only worthy of a 1 or 2 and feel like writing a snide scathing review or telling me how to write according to you, go somewhere else. My work isn't perfect, but I what I don't need is people who wish to feel superior by cutting me down or taking out their bad day on me. If you "don't get it" either ask me why something is written as it is or read something else. That I've had to explain this is sad, but there are plenty of A-holes in the world and that is reflected by similar percentages on this site. For those of you here to learn and grow and offer positive suggestions: Welcome. ---- (4/23/09 Currently reposted Chapter 1-3 and more coming soon for fans old and new).