Content: man

Summary:

This a re-post. I didn't get a lot of views the first time around (only about 10 actually, it says 30, but at least half of those were me) so I was hoping to get some more feedback this time. I didn't change much. I fixed some errors that my original reviewers mentioned and I added a paragraph at the end. Thanks! This is my take on an expressionist-crime story about a dead man who wanders the world in search of his killer. It's part of a collection of short stories I'm writing between work and law school. Hope you enjoy it.

Chapters:

Summary:

I think this describes itself?

Chapters:

Summary:

This short story is planted in the Haven series of novels I have published here. I hope you enjoy reading it. The story is published with Amazon and is doing fairly well. I would like to polish it a bit more and would definitely appreciate any punctuation nits.

Chapters:

Summary:

Any and all feedback is always welcomed.

Chapters:

Summary:

The chase and executing of Bin Laden.

Chapters:

Summary:

Any comments suggestions always appreciated

Chapters:

Summary:

There was a time when writing caught up with me. I simply did not know where else I could go. I no longer wanted to be political or social or cultural or sexual. I didn't even want to hear music anymore. I needed a hero far greater than I could imagine. I just needed to feel like a child again, wide eyed, and hopeful. So I wrote a baseball Saga, titled A Legend Of Sleepy, followed by this poetic Novel (Prosetry). I hope someone on this site likes it.

Chapters:

Summary:

I'd better explain a couple of things which may have you scratching your head. Muti = Af for medicine, poison, etc etc. Sun-downer = a drink (or 3) imbibed at about the time the sun’s going down, being 5:30 – 6:30 around these parts. I look forward to comments.

Chapters:

Summary:

This is a simple piece inspired by the TITLE of a song written by my singer/songwriter son Brad. Rework it as felt is terribly lacking and cliche. This piece is meaningful to me so any help is much appreciated. Point out cliches... where you grimace! ha. Is it better? Much appreciation

Chapters:

Summary:

I have done a few minor alterations/editing, I think it reads a little easier. Still some work to do though. Young man involved in horse breedng, works with his father who dies whilst out riding. Tale of how the young man buys a new stallion. Then it is stolen, recovered, he is threatened, and shot at. Until eventually he discovers who the horse is and why people want him. There is also romance in the air when he meets a young woman and falls in love.

Chapters:

Summary:

Does duty preclude a young girl coming of age? Where is the line drawn between common sense and public opinion? Feedback welcome

Chapters:

Summary:

chaiku_nature_competition Simplicity Any an all feedback We are different.. nature is expressed in differences also.. This took a rather political turn ... why not a robin and a sparrow... a pig nurses a motherless puppy?

Chapters:

Summary:

This is an abbreveated version of a story my grandfather used to tell many years ago. I just transcribed it into something resembling a poem. As most of you know, I am a HORRIBLE poet! But thanks to those of you brave enough to read this. Its only intention is put a smile on a face or two. Any comments you'd care to make are most welcome.

Chapters:

Summary:

This is a true story about the Godliest man I have ever known. He runs his church the way Christ wants it run. We don't run our churches like this in the US. We should.

Chapters:

Summary:

wandering into the sunset.... a manly man to go hand-in-hand with 'all woman' ...perhaps!!!

Chapters: