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 | Fool's Paradise (2) | edwaed shafik | Novel | Thrillers | 5 | n/a | Apr 12, 2012 |
Summary:The chase and executing of Bin Laden.Chapters: |
| SHADOW IN FLIGHT | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 0.23 | Sep 19, 2011 |
Summary:Okay, being very honest regarding this piece. Was going to only post the first verse as it is the one that simply came to me and I had to run and grab a pen and throw it down.
Thinking how hard it is for reviewers to simply review one short verse, I created the next two verses. Do they take away from the strength and honest of the first verse? Do the second and third come out too cliche or forced. They weren't forced at all, but they didn't just flow from that magic place we all know.
Any feedback on this is appreciated. Chapters: |
| Listen To The Music | jpb2ndchance | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 1.48 | Nov 9, 2010 |
Summary:Not sure it works, these things rarely do for me. All comments welcome.Chapters: |
| Dew Drops Haiku | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.10 | Jun 25, 2010 |
Summary:Simple Haiku... three verses
Any an all feedback... Chapters: |
| IN YOUR EYES | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.25 | Apr 27, 2010 |
Summary:Any and all feedback is desired. Those who fight reviewing poetry it is simply 'what is felt reading the words' 'what visions flash?' That simple. If none? That is also a legitimate review. Poetry will not affect all the same nor reach deep enough to enjoy.
I write whatever comes to me. Sometimes sad and deep while other times silly nonsensical dribble!
This is a subject that has haunted me since small as while never 'starving' I did know hunger and painful pangs of it.
While we spend fortunes to kill we allow hunger to spread and diabolical horror on those without protection. While some can emotionally tuck these images in a mental drawer this writer can't. Empty eyes scream hopelessness.Chapters: |
| EMBRACING DAWN | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.21 | Feb 3, 2010 |
Summary:A simple quick gathering of thoughts and flowing words.
That's it folks! Any and all feedback.Chapters: |
