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 | Megazaur: The 13th Omada | apatos13 | Novel | Fantasy | 0 | n/a | Oct 7, 2008 |
Summary:This is novel set on the world of Zauridia: a warm tropical planet where man and dinozaur exist together. There are two nations of men called omadas. The 12 Omadas and the 13th Omada. This is world where man is able to control certain dinozaurs with his will. The civilizations are a combination ancient greek and barbarian. Swords and spears are the primary weapons of man.
I'm looking for any feedback, I can get. But I really need them nitpicked line by line. I'm more of a storyteller than a writer. This is the 2nd draft of a novel; I have been working on for 2yrs. Also your reviews will teach me how to do the same on the reviews you need.
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 | -------The Flight of Legends------- | Dyankovich | Novel | Action and Adventure | 0 | n/a | Sep 14, 2008 |
Summary:The President of the United States had a big decision to make that night... sitting in the Situation Room with two conflicting intelligence reports; It was vividly aparent he had to act immidiately... What he didn't realise was everything he thought he knew about the past was wrong, and the world was going to tear open at the seams and launch itself into a global war of old school good versus evil.
This is the story of several people who come together and rise when all hope seems lost. Everything you've ever heard about death and legend... is true.
I know the grammer in this may not be the best... If you do proof it, please be kind... I haven't exacly polished it the way it should be yet. Chapters: |
 | Shadow Fall: A Tragedy in Five Parts (Part 2 of 5) | knighthawk | Short Story | Fantasy | 6 | 1.66 | Sep 10, 2008 |
Summary:Kiel Thrice-Loved chooses to spring a trap set for him in hopes of solving the mystery of his mother's resurrection . . .Chapters: |
 | Blindfolded | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Fantasy | 5 | 1.68 | Jul 26, 2008 |
Summary:Summary: The poetry on reality and fear.
Feedback: I intended to make this poetry a story with mythlogical essence.I'm also looking for a way to simplify the wordings and prevent readers from getting confuse with the flow of the poetry.
Again, any comment would be the most appreciate.
Nasp Semeku,
Not your average fiend.Chapters: |
 | Monster Girl | Ethereal Angel | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.30 | Jun 26, 2008 |
Summary:Become what you detest most (meant in humour. Maybe).Chapters: |