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 | Death in the Forest | pannastra | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.31 | May 17, 2010 |
Summary:My writing penchant is humour, so this one is unusual for me, but had to be written. Whether I should have posted it on tNBW is another matter.
I find the saturation promotional advertising of up-coming tv programs to be extremely irritating. One in particular that was doing the rounds really p'd me off. As I lay in bed one night trying to sleep I got quite incensed. I could not sleep until I had grabbed my laptop computer and wrote down what was bounding around inside my skull.
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| The Lesson rewritten repub | flowing pencil | Short Story | Memoir | 4 | 0.31 | May 1, 2010 |
Summary:A trip to the bus stop with my five year old grandson Jack who has Aspergers and how it can change your outlook on a dismal day.
In my writing at times I repeat certain passage on purpose.
"he calls me Ma.. is one..
Apparently this piece has been showing up as one huge block and I was unaware.
Has been edited so hopefully better.
This is one of my works that has special meaning to me. It is a gifted memory to Jack as an adult so want it perfected.
Any help will be so appreciated. I worked on tense.. punctuation etc..
Be strict on this piece. On all my pieces.
Jack is nine now as still pure magic!
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