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I am happy overall with this story except for two small things. The opening is problematic I think and that for some reason it doesn't appeal to publishers. If you have an idea why, I'd love to hear it.

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Ellen learns her doctor is the reason she's in the hospital.

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I came up with the perfect excuse for why I'd be spending so much time with Gabe. Okay, so with Sam there could never be a good reason for me spending time with Gabe, but this would have to do: The Tri-County Martial Arts Tournament. I would explain to Sam that I have a burning desire to kick some serious tail at the tourney and Gabe was going to be my own private tutor. Yikes. He would hate it. But it beat telling him the truth. Hey, Sam, guess what? Gabe is actually a higher being. He was sent here to find me. My migraines - well, I've been meaning to tell you this, but I really do see dead people, and all sorts of scary stuff, but it's okay, because you see, Sam, I'm The Seer. That's right, I'm The Seer. And I'm the only thing standing between a race of higher beings that you've never heard of before and utter annihilation. I have to spend hours with Gabe every week because I'm the Obi-Wan to their Princess Leia. I'm their only hope. He'd call for the Straightjacket Brigade immediately. Who'd believe a story like that--especially with a history of mental illness in the family? No, The Tri-County Martial Arts Tournament would have to do.

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Knighthawk and I are co-writing this "urban fantasy" novel. The main character (Oli) is from my previous novel which some of you may have reviewed. This is a whole new story. We're doing a lot of front-end work - establishing three acts, outlining the scenes, developing and nailing down character arcs and through-lines before doing the real nitty gritty of developing the prose. But we were eager to see your reaction to the "tone" of the story, the prose style, and if you find it compelling. In other words, would you buy it? Any and all feeback is welcomed.

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A group of boys find what they think is buried treasure using a home-made map and a made-up "Pirate's Spell". What starts out as a fun adventure between four friends soon turns into a struggle for their lives with an ancient evil. An evil that should have never been found, let alone unearthed. This will probably become my strongest start entry so any and all help is welcome. Thanks for reading and enjoy.

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A spooky ride with a saintly fellow named Chuck. Another attempt at a good story of less than 5K words for contest. Is it "fleshed out" enough? There are still about a thousand words I can add, what does it need more of?

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When everyone around her starts dying and a mysterious young detective working the case, Siera struggles to understand the unexplainable with her time quickly running out..... I'd greatly appreciate any feedback people can give me, i've never written a novel before. I also tend to post the chapters before much editing, so I know they need to be (mainly because i'm crap at grammar and english rules, so i'm learning from your comments as i go!!). I'd really like any comments on the flow of the chapter, content, anything that stands out etc....All feedback is welcome!!

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See Part One.

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Teller had spent many years as a security guard, but his new job at a high-end luxury hotel was more than just being a security guard. He was now a Loss Prevention Officer. Maybe he should have just left well enough alone. Sometimes ambition can be a bad thing.

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Her was army beaten and forced to plunge from the sheer cliffs to their deaths. A thousand years later, they have arisen in a new world determined to conquer and enslave it. They are led by their eternal leader, a woman draped in red - Monarch. The small, suburban town of Wellow Falls becomes the breeding ground for this alien evil. Preston Dregor, the town bully must see if he can redeem himself for his past sins, summon the courage to rescue the girl he has grown to love, and stop Monarch.

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This is my entry for the Haunted House competition. Any feedback aimed at polish before the deadline would be most welcome! Boo.

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In a clearing deep in Horror Woods, there lies a knife forgotten lost. It lies among its creator’s remains rotting slowly with bones and rags. It’s waiting for a helping hand to pick it up and clean its blade... If you see the knife just go right pass, cause I need your hands to review this plot. This is a tale from Horror Vill submitted for the Halloween contest. It’s a horror tale, yes, blood and gore, as good and evil keeps a date. Katrina Bates and Houris Tate both had a date with destiny. Both mortals are to die this night...one will be glad, the other sad.

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A brother's search for his sister leads to more questions than it answers..... Just an idea that I had on the bus today.

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Every Halloween they conduct a dare, the local haunted house was the perfect choice ... or was it? I welcome whatever comments anyone is kind enough to make!

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Not sure what to do with this, probably works better as a short story, but decided to try it as a poem. I would appreciate any helpful feedback. It needs lots of tweaking.

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I'm on a role

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Appendages rubbed raw a bright bloody red...

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Xuxiki you have inspired me again with your piece "together forever."

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Eva Camilla seeks immortality through an oblivious Hotrodder/a short from a series of shorts all interlinked by her, The Queen of the Damned.

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Author Lady is back for another snarky review of the writing world. It has nothing to do with anyone on this site or any review given to me or anyone I know or have seen – well, okay, I was talking to Dewey about descriptions. He told me I need to work on mine – which is true – So I get to write another short story and I hope I get the descriptions right, hang the characters and the plot! I just want to work on my descriptions – or is word painting a better descriptive phrase? (WARNING – BLOOD AND GUTS – COULD BE A BIT DISTURBING)

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Taking a page from Poe...shades of The Tell-Tale Heart and The Black Cat.

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Every now and them I like to try my hand and pen at horror, so here we go.

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A man is offered a new life to replace his old one.

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What happens when you meet someone in a bar, and sexually transmitted desease is the LEAST of your worries? This is my first attempt at straight horror. Please be very honest in your review! This has been revised using all the wonderful feedback I've received on this site! Warning - Strong language and violence.

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'He was listening to Mozart as he operated on me.'

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NOT YOUR USUAL DINNER AT EIGHT

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Our world is changing faster than most of us notice. In one small town in the heart of the U.S.A., one young woman comes face to face with a horrible reality she is not prepared to deal with.

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I knew this boy when I was a child. My dad and I would go on a dove hunt every year at a friend's farm. The family described in this story lived on his farm as tenants. The boy in the story was a fetcher of killed doves for us. He told me his father and grandfather were the same. I felt compelled to write this because since he died I'm sure no one has thought a second about him.

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NEVER SWIM ALONE AT NIGHT

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Nothing is more important than feeding your children.... I reworked the ending a bit, it's a tad longer, but I think it's better.

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Cheating can be deadly. Please be as frank as possible, if it's horrible tell me why, I'll never get better otherwise.

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A young woman is found dead inside a locked house. Is it a natural death or is there something sinister involved?

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Warning: this novel has at least four levels, is full of sex and violence, and is very fast paced. The Well of Women is at risk, as is the Tourney which Rhiannon wishes to use for pride and peace. But there are riots against offworlders, who the people blame for the rash of mother hate that is spreading through the land. And there is the mysterious Maelan--supposed guardian of the Well, whose malfunction may explain the evil that is afoot.

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The small quiet guys are the ones you have to watch for. (This was the best title I could come up with, any suggestions would be appreciated."

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“When the need arises, God won’t bother with plagues and floods. He’ll just send me.” Someone is murdering L.A.’s most depraved criminals. As a favor to the LAPD, former drug-runner, turned cop, turned millionaire playboy, Hale Parrish, agrees to use his supernatural talents to investigate. His search is short-lived when the vigilante, referring to himself as “Judgment,” tracks Hale down to reveal a life-changing secret: both of them are members of an elite bloodline chosen to enact God’s wrath upon the wicked. While Hale decides whether his birthright is a blessing or a curse, shadows from his criminal past emerge, forcing him to face his demons, protect his family, and reclaim control of his destiny. At 90,000 words, Light of Judgment is a dark, gritty, fast-paced thriller with spiritual undertones.

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Rhiannon, prodigal daughter of the king of New Fairy, has suffered a terrible curse. Having humiliated a witch, she must suffer a unique shame--she must go naked, regardless of the weather or social situation. These are the stories of how she reclaims her dignity and fights the evil of men, and her own inner conflicts.

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The sounds of shattering glass, a brief scream, and a hollow ‘thunk’ looped continuously in his mind like the background music for a cheap porno.

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