Content: horribly wrong wedding

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Minor changes from the story I enterred in the contest last summer. I am workshopping this next spring, and am looking for feedback.

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This story is about a wedding that that doesn't go exactly as planned-- depending on who you talk to. Any constructive criticism is appreciated.

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When I found out about the 'Wedding Gone Horribly, Horribly Wrong' Contest, I knew what I was going to enter. Most of the story comes from a scene in my novel "Petal Pushers", but I changed it around a little and turned the humans into fairies and gave them a much cooler setting. I had fun with it and hope you enjoy it.

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In the shadow of an overbearing father, a young man will go to any lengths to win his father's pride.

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Did you like the main character in this story, or what about the pixie/dwarf creature types?

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This isn't the subject matter or style that I usually write, but I had a lot of fun doing it. Take a look and tell me what you think. :~)

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Welcome any and all feedback. Even if it's just a line or two, please review. I sure hope you enjoy it!

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Any feedback, good and bad is appreciated. That said.... It started with a honey bear and a pizza

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I didn't intend to enter this contest. I have so little quality writing time that I have to pick and choose my projects. But since I am getting married soon (9 days, 3 1/2 hours from now), I decided to put this story together just for the heck of it. I wrote it pretty quickly and it's my first attempt at a humorous story. I enjoyed writing it and I hope that some of you enjoy it too. Please give any and all feedback. And thanks for reading! (re-submitted 8/30 to clean up some errors and stuff)

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To what ends will people go for the most outlandish wedding? Looking for feedback quick as this is my entry for the new contest. New & hopefully final edit, August 24, 2009

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A 'Romance' hormone cocktail, administered by hypodermic needle, has become commonplace among the wealthy and the not-so-wealthy for the enhancement of the attachment process -- especially on the day of the happy nuptuals. The families of the bride and groom have spared no expense to ensure the future happiness of their children (and the financial solidarity that their union will secure). The mothers of the bride and groom, especially, are congratulating themselves for taking advantage of this new scientific breakthrough that will result in a unique inebriation that is sure to guarantee an attachment and happiness that neither of their parents can boast. I would welcome any feedback or assistance.

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Warning: This contains Purple! who am I kidding? its a velvet indigo cushion with tassels and gold trim. :D My first title choice was 'What's in a Name?' but it was taken. This place/event/characters are from my fantasy world. Although it does not take place in the current time frame of my novel. I hope you enjoy it.

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The gentle feline/human inhabitants of a small star prepare a wedding celebration.

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Princess Vala is about to marry a man during an event which happens every thousand years. Things don't go well at all.

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My first try at a real short story. Nervous? ha! Haven't a clue what I am doing! All feedback feared! I mean welcome. ha..

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All feed back is welcome. This story is violent and sexual -it contains content for a mature audience only.

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Ally's biggest problem wasn't that she couldn't get to the altar for her wedding--It was working her way through the land of M before anyone notices she's gone.

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On advice of his friend Jose, Al Palowski visits Aphrodite's Temple, thinking it's a strip club. Bad mistake. Jose to the rescue!

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I have hard skin. I love criticism, lay in on me. Always looking for grammatical issues, cuts suggested moving the story along, POV errors, and tense issues. Thank you...

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Okay, so i gave up trying to describe a sex scene, lol. May add it in before the contest judging, but here is the story. See what you think! All feedback appreciated, thanks!

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Something that popped into my head when I read about the short story contest. I simply couldn't NOT enter, since it specifically asked for a fantasy or scifi element. This is a silly, light-hearted twist on the fairy tale. Hope you enjoy. Feel free to give me any and all feedback.

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Most Martian weddings are rather nondescript and far from entertaining. In fact, most of them are just plain boring. This one, however, fits a different mold. Stories about this particular wedding are still among some the favorite old tales being told a hundred years later. In fact, Phfaschtja's bra is one of the most celebrated displays at the local museum. And the story of Pfhaschtja's father's face being trapped between his mother-in-laws knees is still a knee slapper. Any thoughts, nits, suggestions, comments appreciated. I've never before written anything in a fantasy setting (other than D&D adventures). I'm not even sure this is the kind of story the contest is seeking. Anyway, here it is....I'VE DONE A SIGNIFICANT REWRITE!!!

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