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 | BLENDED DAYS | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.48 | Mar 9, 2011 |
Summary:After silliness came reflection. Old theme that keeps nagging me. Hope those who read my work do not go.. "oh God... not the Swing!" I know!..
Trying to stretch a bit with my writing ... take more chances
I am not a fan of rhyme and this time am embracing not being held captive by it.
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| What Is A Heart To Do | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 14 | 0.37 | Dec 7, 2009 |
Summary:Questions for those without a significant other. A lover
A wife A husband A simple sweetheart
How it feel sometimes on your own as a woman. Perhaps as a man also?
Mainly what emotions evoke and any technical help offered is always welcome as a mere student of writing.
What about punctuation? I have some but not all the way through. To me it cluttered it. Due to one very late reader I added a comma and thank her very much! Help!
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| When A Heart Is Willing | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 14 | 0.34 | Aug 18, 2009 |
Summary:Observation from years of living and observing. This is not always the case as many 'willing hearts' are never snatched up by another. But once in awhile... love comes calling.
Technically help is always needed but top priority is always the 'vision and feelings' evoked. Can always 'fix' the technical but if emotionally void it is useless Chapters: |
