Content: helpless
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 | BEYOND REACH | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 11 | 0.24 | Sep 12, 2011 |
Summary:Just expressing that helpless feeling when you know a soul is in peril and there is nothing you can do to help? We can all help those we know or give to organizations but once in awhile I feel the pull of a one soul so very far away, Most likely my imagination but maybe not. Maybe just a symbol of many I cannot reach nor help.
Any and all feedback welcomed.
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| Water Rising Rewritten/Republished | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.33 | Sep 26, 2010 |
Summary:Please do not feel the need to leave another review. The first piece was actually posted accidentally and while it was well received it was not the piece I had in mind and was only a outline of sorts. I didn't even know I had posted it until the I saw a review! aaaaaagggghhhh.
I am conscious of reviews and rankings so a little uncomfortable doing this. Will work that out later.
I have saved the original.. But this was what I saw. I is metaphorical in nature.
I see many in this peril.. It saddens me. I have no rope to cast...
Any an all feedback always embraced. I hope you find this one as emotionally impacting as I wanted it to be.
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