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 | SEABOUND, LANDBOUND | nonimou | Poetry | Poetry | 2 | 0.00 | Jun 18, 2008 |
Summary:A poem related to how time carries us forward through life's trials and tribulations toward the horizon and the small light of hope.
Does this poem work? Is there a flow simulating a rocking back and forth as one might feel if on the sea either floating or in a small boat? All comments welcome. Thanks, Chapters: |
| Tin Relationships | TirzahLaughs | Poetry | Poetry | 5 | 0.38 | May 5, 2008 |
Summary:Stanza three--is the last line workable? Is it too much alliteration? This is a play on the idea of the Tinman.Chapters: |
| Honeymoon | Estelle | Short Story | Literary Fiction | 9 | 1.49 | Feb 16, 2008 |
Summary:I tried to capture the intensity of childhood rivalry and jealousy. In this case it has leeched so deeply into the psyche of the protagonist that it has dominated the way she has led her life.
I welcome any feedback on the telling, organisation and effectiveness.
ThanksChapters: |
| The Sayonara Heart | Bob Stanton | Novel | Romance | 1 | n/a | Jan 25, 2008 |
Summary:Chapter one of The Sayonara Heart introduces Ken Hamrick, a carrier of the Sayonara Heart, to the beginning of the end of his life, guided by the actions of his Sayonara Heart. In chapter one, he deals with a crushing realization he is all alone with the death of his mother during his senior year of high school. He spends the rest of his life trying to escape from being all alone, only to be cut off by the unknown actions of his heart. It is a ficticious story based on many of the experiences of the author through his 22 yers of U S Naval service. I think the major request I have on review of this chapter is would the reader be encouraged to want to read subsequent chapters. However, I will accept ALL reviews and critiques with an open mind.Chapters: |
| Heavy Heart # | janine | Poetry | Poetry | 3 | 0.34 | Feb 23, 2007 |
Summary:one for the broken hearted, i suppose, and sorry... yes it's another PICTO (yawn.... )Chapters: |
| The Invisible Giant | Michael Kent | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 11 | 0.36 | Jul 2, 2006 |
Summary:A heart attack in exactly 600 words.Chapters: |
