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 | Ghost of Addiction | Zer0 | Short Story | Literary Fiction | 3 | 0.63 | Dec 24, 2011 |
Summary:The plight of an addict. All comments welcome. Chapters: |
| Two Fragments | Zer0 | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.50 | Dec 23, 2011 |
Summary:Another shitty free verse poem. All feedback is welcome. Chapters: |
| THE LEAST OF THESE | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.46 | Jun 30, 2011 |
Summary:Lot going on in today's news and the wide and widening gap of those with and those without. Since I am only a sentimental Putz ... my stand is that of a softhearted idiot who would indeed share her last meal or go without if that meal would feed two.
The gap is going to get even wider if certain parties bring down the economy to destroy this Presidents chance of a second term. Think it crazy? Take a another look. Am I happy with Obama? Not on all levels but smart enough about politics to know, hands get tied...
Any and all feedback on how this is written.. is it strong, did I capture what I was going for?
DO I THROW ALL RICH PEOPLE IN ONE HUGE PILE ... NO NO NO
My uncle was rich in his day and gave to many in need as do many. This is for those who hold being poor in contempt and due to something lacking in the 'makeup' of the being in question. Chapters: |
| Heart in Hiding # | janine | Poetry | Poetry | 4 | 0.22 | Mar 16, 2011 |
Summary:um...yep it's PICTO of a heart! not a happy heart i s'pose but just the way love sometimes goes...Chapters: |
| Untouched | farfinagle | Poetry | Other | 2 | 0.00 | Mar 9, 2011 |
Summary:This poem is written about someone I have loved dearly - but who does not (and cannot) love me. Personality disorders are a strange and sad affliction, and I find myself at a loss to understand how a person can be incapable of feeling real love or empathy for another human being. But there are many people who do just that. I consider the loss of my relationship with this person to be one of the greatest tragedies of my life. Even so, I have to believe their loss is far greater.Chapters: |
| The Faceless Boy of Lucid Dreams | Zer0 | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.55 | Feb 19, 2011 |
Summary:I'm not sure how to condense it into a summary so just read the poem.Chapters: |
| The Veil of Love: Memoir of a Demon(revised) | Zer0 | Short Story | Literary Fiction | 8 | 1.49 | Feb 18, 2011 |
Summary:A story about love, loss, death and damnation. I have revised this entirely with many of the altercations recommended by those who have already reviewed it. I would very much like some fresh feedback. Chapters: |
| MY MAN DONE LEFT ME / SERANADE | flowing pencil | Poetry | Humor | 9 | 1.34 | Feb 9, 2011 |
Summary: My Apology for posting the wrong piece! My Beluved" was not the piece I meant to post. It was one in many trying a song approach. MY ATTEMPT AT WRITING A SONG My son will be jealous.
Many have already read this and the little changes will add nothing so please do not leave a review.
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| Distant Rumblings | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.30 | May 12, 2010 |
Summary:My concern with this is it is too predictable. Nothing original? Tried my best to make it my own as this one is personal though will come home to many who read it.
Something good can come along and the past can threaten
Any and all feedback.. It is written by me and through me as this one I actually sat down and created. May not be a great idea!! haaaaa My muse may not be amused!Chapters: |
| She is the Dissonant Romantic | Odin Roark | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.64 | Feb 9, 2010 |
Summary:As the day of the year approaches where one is challenged to gather and share oft overlooked, but never forgotten, appreciations, I thought these few words might resonate. For many, a muse is a fantasy. For some a reality. This is a dedication to the value, either way.Chapters: |
| What Is A Heart To Do | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 14 | 0.37 | Dec 7, 2009 |
Summary:Questions for those without a significant other. A lover
A wife A husband A simple sweetheart
How it feel sometimes on your own as a woman. Perhaps as a man also?
Mainly what emotions evoke and any technical help offered is always welcome as a mere student of writing.
What about punctuation? I have some but not all the way through. To me it cluttered it. Due to one very late reader I added a comma and thank her very much! Help!
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| A Dance with the Enemy | Buffalotales | Short Story | Historical Fiction | 2 | 0.00 | Sep 7, 2009 |
Summary:Does duty preclude a young girl coming of age? Where is the line drawn between common sense and public opinion?
Feedback welcomeChapters: |
| When A Heart Is Willing | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 14 | 0.34 | Aug 18, 2009 |
Summary:Observation from years of living and observing. This is not always the case as many 'willing hearts' are never snatched up by another. But once in awhile... love comes calling.
Technically help is always needed but top priority is always the 'vision and feelings' evoked. Can always 'fix' the technical but if emotionally void it is useless Chapters: |
| Tin Relationships | TirzahLaughs | Poetry | Poetry | 5 | 0.38 | May 5, 2008 |
Summary:Stanza three--is the last line workable? Is it too much alliteration? This is a play on the idea of the Tinman.Chapters: |
| Heavy Heart # | janine | Poetry | Poetry | 4 | 0.34 | Feb 23, 2007 |
Summary:one for the broken hearted, i suppose, and sorry... yes it's another PICTO (yawn.... )Chapters: |
| The Invisible Giant | Michael Kent | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 11 | 0.36 | Jul 2, 2006 |
Summary:A heart attack in exactly 600 words.Chapters: |
