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 | Fool's Paradise (2) | edwaed shafik | Novel | Thrillers | 5 | n/a | Apr 12, 2012 |
Summary:The chase and executing of Bin Laden.Chapters: |
| A CONSCIOUS HEART FORMERLY WRITER'S HEART. | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.58 | Oct 10, 2011 |
Summary:Writing and criticism or worse, just ignored
How a writer might feel if someone close simply reads and offers nothing. A hmmmm or .. interesting... nothing truly encouraging.
NEW TITLE.. THANKS ODIN.Chapters: |
| They Write | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 26 | 1.23 | Apr 10, 2010 |
Summary:Many have read this. Reposting more for all who haven't read it. New members who may feel their work isn't heard. It is!
Just a reflection of what I see on this site day to day. Redone as want it perfected so all advice is welcome
No need to leave review as truly not done for that ... it will grow in time as is written in dedication to all of you who write on this site. Chapters: |
| The news came suddenly | po | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 1.43 | Sep 17, 2009 |
Summary:my first cousin died recently of a drug overdose. This poem is how I dealt with the grief.
I am interested in how the style is perceived as this is a comfortable writing style for me.
This is the first time I have posted work on this forum and I am grateful for the reviews. I am grateful for the editing comments by kiwi & ulli as I have incorporated them into my piece. My first time listening to constructive editing advice. There maybe hope for me yet. To you other kind people, thanks for your comments. I will be sharing this poem at a family reunion today. Hopefully it will bring perspective & healing...
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| A Dance with the Enemy | Buffalotales | Short Story | Historical Fiction | 2 | 0.00 | Sep 7, 2009 |
Summary:Does duty preclude a young girl coming of age? Where is the line drawn between common sense and public opinion?
Feedback welcomeChapters: |
| Pen Against Parchment Rewritten/republished | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 15 | 0.58 | Mar 25, 2009 |
Summary:This was written over forty years ago.. stuffed inside a drawer. Few got a glimpse of it but I wasn't encouraged.
Right before I joined this site and the reason I joined is due to a kind review from the author Thom Hartmann of Air America..
You never know where you might receive encouragement from and it might lead to no more 'hiding' of your work. Good or bad.. at least you have found the courage to write and gingerly push it out there for readership.
I want this perfected. My hope is that is serves as an encouragement to new writers to pull that work out of hiding. You are your words in a way.
It is also a lesson in perfecting what you have started before going on to something else. When I see "Perfection" typed in a review of this. I will know growth has taken place.
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