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 | Scarlet Fever | jpb2ndchance | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.48 | Apr 4, 2013 |
Summary:Lately I've been preoccupied with dreams and their impact on various aspects of life. This poem came out of that thinking. Comments welcome.Chapters: |
 | Letters From Batman And Robin II (Final Chapter) | Ellis | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 4.34 | Feb 19, 2013 |
Summary:After Part 1 a TNBW reader requested another episode. It would take a year just to even consider it. After this issue, I am closing the pages of this painful series. I just don't know if I can go back there ever again to East Nichols Avenue. Still a second reader mentioned that they experienced a similar pain in childhood. I can only hope that someone is saved. I dedicate this to my brother, Kevin.
Of all the characters mentioned in this story only two are still alive. I apologize in advance for all typos. I just couldn't go back in this story anymore at this time. Please understand.Chapters: |
 | Will It Ever Stop? | radley | Poetry | Religion and Spirituality | 8 | 1.86 | Dec 16, 2012 |
Summary:This has religious overtones. So, if you don't like religion, then don't read it. You are forewarned ahead of time. :) I am reminded of Michael Jackson's "Heal the World, Make it a Better Place" song, which was really awesome. We all have to pull together to make the insanity of these killing sprees stop. As a lawyer, I see a lot of new laws coming about because of all the shootings we've been having. Laws that you and I have to live with. Laws that may or may not work or even have an impact. It begs the question, why not do what is needed to prevent these acts in the first place? Can't we make this world a better place? Can we please address mental health, bullying, and the effects of alcohol, drugs, divorce, family violence and other hardships on the children and grandchildren whose parents and grandparents put them through these things? Can we do something to help these people and their famillies before they become so angry and hurt on the inside that it just comes out in rage? Like Max K. said, I'm mad. I went to the theater last night and was actually afraid to go. Two more shootings in Alabama today. Life is hard and we need God in our lives. We need to learn how to keep our families together and love one another. I don't mean to point any fingers. Life has been hard for me, too. I include myself in needing to change to make this world a better place. Let's "stand firm" and demand society to let God back in! Maybe if this young man had known God and His love for him, maybe . . . just maybe this would not have happened. I'd love some feedback . . . what do you think? Is anybody with me on this?Chapters: |
 | Eternally Lost: A Voice from the Grave | symbolicangel | Short Story | Literary Fiction | 7 | 1.09 | Aug 3, 2012 |
Summary:Looking for general feedback, thoughts and nits, and whatever else you want to give. Who knows, maybe I'll do something with this someday. I posted this a few months ago, but the second half has been completely rewritten. Thanks a bunch!
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 | Northern Extremities | martin m. meiss | Novel | Commercial Fiction | 2 | n/a | Jun 19, 2012 |
Summary:-- Strongest Start Six entry --
A floatplane leaves comedian Kenny McIntyre at a remote northern lake. He is fresh out of drug rehab and needs time and solitude for healing. Instead, he finds a brutally tortured woman behind his cabin. Maureen is naked, covered head-to-toe with tar, and dying. Kenny saves her and learns that she killed one of her attackers before escaping through the woods. How long before the other kidnappers track her to the cabin? What will Kenny and Maureen do when they show up?Chapters: |
 | Fool's Paradise (2) | edwaed shafik | Novel | Thrillers | 5 | n/a | Apr 12, 2012 |
Summary:The chase and executing of Bin Laden.Chapters: |
 | Healing (of another kind) | Odin Roark | Poetry | Editorial and Opinion | 8 | 0.96 | Jan 27, 2012 |
Summary:This morning's story of a particular style of drawing attention to a tragedy, was indeed an even greater tragedy, given the media's blood lust for anything that will garner eyeballs to the printed page. Herein is an editorial/prosetry rendering of conscience... at least for those who deem themselves conscious.Chapters: |
 | Aint Throwin Myself Off No Bridges (Final Poem) | Ellis | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 1.38 | Jul 10, 2011 |
Summary:I just put this together as a parting poem. It took me all of thirty minutes to write. Wanted to leave you with a high note, literally. I will always be a part of the TNBW family. I have a daughter going through a crisis and for a short while I have to put the metaphors away. I will keep my pen filled with ink until we are reunited again. Thank you so much for not only welcoming me into your house, but allowing to walk on the red carpet as well. You are all my heroes...
This is not a great poem, but there is love between the lines.Chapters: |
 | Language Of Music | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 16 | 0.55 | May 25, 2011 |
Summary:My new husband and I love totally different music. He is a bass player of Jazz.. while I can enjoy it... he doesn't really embrace my simple need for 'gut reaction to music.'
Music has been my escape through abuse and sorrow. I live within music. He lives within correctness of music I think.
These are simply raw emotions I expressed after we both listened to some music. He wasn't stirred by mine and I was left wanting by his.
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 | In Search of Mr Wonderful, The Journey From Myth To Madness) | Monica Bouvier-Walker | Novel | Romance | 1 | n/a | Jul 7, 2010 |
Summary:In Search of Mr. Wonderful, The Journey from Myth to Madness
Romance / Adult
To Invite Love, You Must Love Yourself First
Syvanna Lee knows what she wants—an everlasting love, her own “Mr. Wonderful.� Yet in her precarious quest to find such a man, she refuses to listen to the truth of her inner voice and ends up disappointed time and again. Each “Mr. Somebody� Syvanna becomes involved with opens a new chapter in her life. Each new relationship causes her to look at herself from a different perspective. Each new lover unveils previously unexplored facets of her own personality. She is ready for love, but will she ever realize that to give love, receive love, or even demand love, she must love herself first?
And if Syvanna would only take a moment to listen to her inner voice, she might learn an important truth. As the tale unfolds, an ominous secret from Syvanna’s childhood rises to the surface, a secret that may ultimately kill her.
In Search of Mr. Wonderful is a tale of heartbreak, self-destruction, desperation, and, ultimately, of transformation and discovery. Ms. Bouvier has written a novel of intense beauty and introspection that will stay with you long after you’ve turned the final page.
REVIEWERS PLEASE NOTE: I will be adding chapters daily until the whole manuscript has been submitted. There are a lot!!! Stay tuned!!Chapters: |
 | The Touch Me Nots | donaldvphillips | Novel | Science Fiction | 3 | n/a | May 28, 2010 |
Summary:Dr. Nathan Rysner is a member of the GenRose Bio-engineering team in Chicago. Nathan is exposed to genetically altered material in an accident in the lab and gains the ability to change his own genetic make up at will. A military black ops group is after him and the genetic protocol that can make a warrior impervious in battle. Nathan is on the run for his life. His adventures introduce him to the love of his life, Sherry Turner. Nathan inadvertently releases a healing gene that causes world wide controversy and instantly causes the medical field to become obsolete. The twists at the end will have you returning to the beginning searching for clues.
I'm looking for any and all feedback. I only ask that you read from the beginning if you are reviewing for story line. Nits are welcome. I'm particularly interested in your thoughts on dialogue and believability of scenes.Chapters: |
 | EMBRACING DAWN | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.21 | Feb 3, 2010 |
Summary:A simple quick gathering of thoughts and flowing words.
That's it folks! Any and all feedback.Chapters: |
 | THERE WAS A TIME | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 0.45 | Sep 5, 2009 |
Summary:I call these 'floaters' as they are thoughts that float through my consciousness. I grab them and type them down or are forever lost!
Emotional feedback as well as technical Chapters: |
 | When A Heart Is Willing | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 14 | 0.34 | Aug 18, 2009 |
Summary:Observation from years of living and observing. This is not always the case as many 'willing hearts' are never snatched up by another. But once in awhile... love comes calling.
Technically help is always needed but top priority is always the 'vision and feelings' evoked. Can always 'fix' the technical but if emotionally void it is useless Chapters: |
 | Sticker Shock-Revised | Rose Mandan | Short Story | Romance | 15 | 2.06 | Mar 23, 2009 |
Summary:Mollie and Jim are moving in together. Can their love for each other overcome the scars from the past?Chapters: |
 | TWINGE | Ethereal Angel | Poetry | Poetry | 5 | 0.04 | Jan 27, 2009 |
Summary:Just a morsel to satisfy a wee craving (or reopened hole?)Chapters: |