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 | Alice's Wunderland | 1_word_at_a_time | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.93 | Jan 7, 2012 |
Summary:Taking a break from Ruby Rose and feeling reflective, so thought I'd give poetry a crack. Not because I'm any good at it, but I wanted to play around with interpretations/double meanings.
I know as a poem this is really awkward - clumsy rhyming, lousy rhythm, annoying experimental pace ... so I'm looking more for suggestions on how to improve, rather than pointing out what I already know is crap.
I'm particularly looking for feedback on the content - I'm trying for the interpreting-alternative-meanings concept without being too obvious or too obscure ... walkin' the line, I guess.Chapters: |
| What Is A Heart To Do | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 14 | 0.37 | Dec 7, 2009 |
Summary:Questions for those without a significant other. A lover
A wife A husband A simple sweetheart
How it feel sometimes on your own as a woman. Perhaps as a man also?
Mainly what emotions evoke and any technical help offered is always welcome as a mere student of writing.
What about punctuation? I have some but not all the way through. To me it cluttered it. Due to one very late reader I added a comma and thank her very much! Help!
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| A Writer's Lament Rewritten/republished | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.78 | Nov 2, 2009 |
Summary:Thoughts of not being. Death and dying.. reconciliation to truth. Letting words come into focus and put down without thought.
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| A Dance with the Enemy | Buffalotales | Short Story | Historical Fiction | 2 | 0.00 | Sep 7, 2009 |
Summary:Does duty preclude a young girl coming of age? Where is the line drawn between common sense and public opinion?
Feedback welcomeChapters: |
| What Pearls Have You Cast (repost) | touch1stone | Poetry | Poetry | 5 | 0.24 | Mar 10, 2008 |
Summary:What legacy will you leave behind? Chapters: |
