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 | The news came suddenly | po | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 1.43 | Sep 17, 2009 |
Summary:my first cousin died recently of a drug overdose. This poem is how I dealt with the grief.
I am interested in how the style is perceived as this is a comfortable writing style for me.
This is the first time I have posted work on this forum and I am grateful for the reviews. I am grateful for the editing comments by kiwi & ulli as I have incorporated them into my piece. My first time listening to constructive editing advice. There maybe hope for me yet. To you other kind people, thanks for your comments. I will be sharing this poem at a family reunion today. Hopefully it will bring perspective & healing...
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| Big Mom | flowing pencil | Short Story | Memoir | 14 | 0.71 | Mar 4, 2008 |
Summary:This is a work about the person who loved me the most as a child.. who taught me the most and provided a safe haven where I could be a child.
It is full of small simplistic acts that made me whole.Chapters: |
