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 | The Price of a Miracle | TELawrence | Novel | Young Adult | 2 | n/a | Jan 20, 2012 |
Summary:A young girl is reunited with her older brother, three years after he mysteriously disappeared.Chapters: |
 | Old Lady With Draggin Tattoo | flowing pencil | Poetry | Humor | 14 | 0.46 | Jan 13, 2012 |
Summary:Okay! Its bad! Really bad! But working on my entry Anna's Story has me pulling out my hair so ... it is time to play and God know I can waste some credits.
I wanted to do a really good job on this an make it about four verses but then, I took pity and kept it at two!
I do have a kind bone in my body.
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 | Genie from Hell | Linkun Chen | Short Story | Horror | 4 | 0.61 | Dec 8, 2011 |
Summary:A short story I wrote for a little girl who loved fairy tales. If you've read chapters 1 and 2 of my Novel, "Midnight Man," this story will probably sound familiar. But I hope you will still be able to enjoy this story on its own merits.
I would like to publish this story in some sort of short story collection or anthology, along with several other short stories I've written, either with other authors or by myself. So let me know if anyone else is interested in doing something like that.Chapters: |
 | Who Cares About the Sea | yacolt | Poetry | Erotica | 3 | 0.22 | Nov 22, 2011 |
Summary:A pg version of this poem has been made into a video and is posted on Youtube at this link ---- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ceijq_z48Y4 -----
I had to water it down a bit for Youtube. So I renamed it By the Sea
It would be super cool if you took a look at the video and left a comment on Youtube.
Some people like the pg version better and some like this one - a comparison of the two would also be nice to know.
Thanks in advance if you do go to Youtube. I will do several reviews of your writing in return if you subscribe to her channel or comment on the poem on Youtube. It takes quite a bit of work to do a video poem, and it's my friend's channel, so it would be nice to know if our idea on video poems is an idea worth continuing!
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 | Her eyes Your eyes | yacolt | Poetry | Erotica | 1 | 0.00 | Nov 22, 2011 |
Summary:I guess I'd like to know what do you think??! Too graphic??Chapters: |
 | Then Our First Kiss | yacolt | Poetry | Erotica | 6 | 1.28 | Sep 19, 2011 |
Summary:I tend to write fairly graphic erotica, but posted some of my mild poems here in the erotica section because I wasn’t sure if I could post the way I usually write.
I saw some graphitic work here so I got brave and I think I’m all right.
It takes me a while after I write something to see the rough spots in the poem. I have only had this 4 or 5 days so I’m not sure yet what I need to change.
I know it is a bit long, but with erotica that isn’t so bad. There is no wondering about the so deep meaning hidden in the poetic lines. This is a straight out story, bordering on porn.
I usually try to have some story so it isn’t just about sex, even if the story part of the poem is brief.
So is there any redeeming value in this poem and what are your general opinions. Is this poem, too graphic or is it arousing? Also comments about punctuation and style are also desired.
thanks
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 | Cafe Rose | Ethereal Angel | Poetry | Poetry | 3 | 0.18 | Sep 5, 2011 |
Summary:I have feelings, too! You never thought I did, huh?Chapters: |
 | MAGGIE'S POEM | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.58 | Jun 26, 2011 |
Summary:This is the third of five. The next more difficult as about a boy struggling with Aspergers. The other another boy who lives across the ocean.. I see him mostly in picture and in dreams.. he teases me in my thoughts though. Impish little man who speaks fluent French. He is also seven
This is about Maggie.. age four. She also struggles with a speech impediment. She can't say certain words and her best friend Gabby is always correcting her.. Maggie turns, hands on hips and says.. I have a'ho' in my mouth Gabby. I have a ho!" Her teeth don't meet so long speech therapy lies ahead.
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 | Messages from Jacquie | Sha | Novel | Memoir | 1 | n/a | Aug 3, 2010 |
Summary:This is a memoir of my daughter's death and the communications we've had since her death. Since it is a true story, I want to know if it's readable and interesting.Chapters: |
 | Uncle Fred's Dilemma | Sideman | Poetry | Humor | 14 | 1.02 | Jun 19, 2009 |
Summary:This is an abbreveated version of a story my grandfather used to tell many years ago. I just transcribed it into something resembling a poem. As most of you know, I am a HORRIBLE poet! But thanks to those of you brave enough to read this. Its only intention is put a smile on a face or two. Any comments you'd care to make are most welcome.Chapters: |
 | Courtney | Sherman Law | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 1.33 | Aug 14, 2008 |
Summary:As my oldest God Daughter (that I helped raise, I'm the only father figure she's had) prepares to go to Middle School, I am feeling nervous. So I wrote this for her. Chapters: |
 | My Ball of Energy | Sherman Law | Poetry | Humor | 12 | 0.94 | Aug 7, 2008 |
Summary:A poem about my Goddaughter Alex who is the light of my lifeChapters: |
 | Courtney's Cell Phone | Sherman Law | Short Story | Memoir | 9 | 0.37 | Jun 12, 2008 |
Summary:As a Godfather I help raise the granddaughters of my best friends. When the eldest Goddaughter was eight years old her grandparents and I had to deal with the pressure to get a cell phone. This is what happened.Chapters: |
 | Alex | Sherman Law | Short Story | Memoir | 10 | 2.10 | Apr 5, 2008 |
Summary:A short story about one of my favorite people for her 9th birthday. My God-daughter Alex.Chapters: |
 | Bella Androgyna | Allegra Zedakah | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.19 | Oct 10, 2007 |
Summary:Any and all feedback is appreciate.
I'm not a poet, but I am trying to explore other genres in order to improve my writing generally.
This is part of an exercise I am putting myself through where I write as the words come to me and give them life on paper without judgments or edits.Chapters: |
 | Maelan | rhiannon | Novel | Fantasy | 2 | n/a | Sep 21, 2006 |
Summary:Warning: this novel has at least four levels, is full of sex and violence, and is very fast paced. The Well of Women is at risk, as is the Tourney which Rhiannon wishes to use for pride and peace. But there are riots against offworlders, who the people blame for the rash of mother hate that is spreading through the land. And there is the mysterious Maelan--supposed guardian of the Well, whose malfunction may explain the evil that is afoot. Chapters: |