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Title |
Author |
Type |
Genre |
Reviews |
Credits |
Date |
 | Night Terror | Jeanne M. Bannon | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 5 | 0.28 | Jun 4, 2010 |
Summary:I'm resubmitting this story because I'd like a little feedback before entering it in a contest. I've added a bit more in order to flesh it out some. Any and all feedback is much appreciated.
Thanks.
Chapters: |
 | The Comfort of the Earth | Jake Hawkins | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 4 | 0.31 | Feb 27, 2010 |
Summary:I had a dream and it turned into this story. Please give any and all feedback. Thank you for reading.Chapters: |
 | Squeezing Beavers | mike b | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 3 | 0.30 | Feb 27, 2010 |
Summary:The story is true, if embellished.Chapters: |
 | Sleepover | mike b | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 3 | 0.22 | Feb 27, 2010 |
Summary:Aw the freedom of dorm lifeChapters: |
 | A Different Take | sonny | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 8 | 0.11 | Feb 25, 2010 |
Summary:Life brings different experiences to all of us. In response to S. Thatcher's 'A Word Substitute for Endless', this short story shows another aspect of how writing affects us and those close to us .Chapters: |
 | The Surprise | pamlajj | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 8 | 0.31 | Feb 25, 2010 |
Summary:Everybody has a mother. Some people don't deserve them - or do they? All feedback welcome. Chapters: |
 | Wisenheimer Syndrome | Charles1011 | Short Story | Humor | 8 | 0.12 | Feb 24, 2010 |
Summary:Designed to elicit giggles and smirks. Just trying to prove my thesaurus is bigger than your thesaurus.
All types of feedback are welcome.Chapters: |
 | The Dragon Lair | Dan Philips | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 3 | 0.21 | Feb 23, 2010 |
Summary:Feedback appreciatedChapters: |
 | Beer Today, Gone Tomorrow | farfinagle | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.35 | Feb 22, 2010 |
Summary:A man refuses to take blame for a series of strange events.
Addendum: if you are reading the story on or after February 22nd, I revised the ending. Happy reading!Chapters: |
 | Custer's Last Stand - Revised | farfinagle | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 1 | 0.00 | Feb 21, 2010 |
Summary:History repeats itself as an army officer makes his last stand. This is a revision of my original flash fiction story. I have tried to add material suggested by my reviewers. But, remember - I only have 500 words! (I think I used 496). Thanks for looking!Chapters: |
 | Little White Pills | tina_dc_hayes | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 13 | 0.31 | Feb 21, 2010 |
Summary:I've had the idea for this story in my head for a long time, so I thought I'd give it a shot for the flash fiction contest. It's an epistolary about the effects that can arise from changing a simple prescription .Chapters: |
 | How I Became a Sarcastic Bastard | Charles1011 | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 16 | 0.28 | Feb 19, 2010 |
Summary:Any resemblance to actual corporations, living or dead, is entirely coincidental ...
All kinds of feedback are welcome.Chapters: |
 | Matt and Kelly | mike b | Short Story | Humor | 4 | 0.23 | Feb 19, 2010 |
Summary:A little flash in the panChapters: |
 | Custer's Last Stand | farfinagle | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 4 | 0.29 | Feb 18, 2010 |
Summary:History repeats itself. In a future battle, Custer makes his last stand. Flash fiction contest entry. Comments and suggestions are appreciated.Chapters: |
 | Touching Evil | Jake Hawkins | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 6 | 0.32 | Feb 17, 2010 |
Summary:Okay, this is my last entry for the flash fiction contest. I have to stop because it's becoming addictive. Let me know what you think.Chapters: |
 | Face to Face UPDATED | wisealma | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.35 | Feb 17, 2010 |
Summary:I've applied almost all feedback I've gotten. Thank you! If you're the type that reads the feedback below before you read the story, I'd recommend against it as much of it no longer applies (as the feedback has been applied).
Did the twist work? Any feedback appreciated.
*****SPOILER ALERT*****
Rod is a ghost...
Thanks
JustinChapters: |
 | THE NIGHT FAIRY | rlvs | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 3 | 0.18 | Feb 15, 2010 |
Summary:observations from someplace unimportantChapters: |
 | Notes found in a crack in a wall | LouLou S | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 15 | 0.30 | Feb 15, 2010 |
Summary:~~Words scribbled on paper~~I've taken out the summary information. I want to know if this piece can stand alone. Thank you for all your comments. Ask me anything :)Chapters: |
 | The Tree of Death - second revision | farfinagle | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 4 | 0.31 | Feb 15, 2010 |
Summary:This is my latest revision of my flash fiction contest entry. An agent races to defuse a bioterrorist bomb located in the Bonneville Salt Flats just north of a landmark named the Tree of Life. The Tree of Life is a real metal sculpture. To see a photo of it, Google Tree of Life/Wendover. Thanks for reviewing the story. All comments are appreciated.Chapters: |
 | Alleycat's First Circus | Nathan B. Childs | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 11 | 0.23 | Feb 14, 2010 |
Summary:Ali goes to the circus.Chapters: |
 | LUNCHTIME AT THE FIVE AND DIME | rlvs | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 5 | 0.23 | Feb 13, 2010 |
Summary:Observations from someplace unimportantChapters: |
 | The Usefulness of Little Brothers | Kydd Dustyn | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 11 | 0.29 | Feb 13, 2010 |
Summary:brothersChapters: |
 | How Did Mary Get Knocked Up, Daddy? | Nathan B. Childs | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 26 | 0.26 | Feb 13, 2010 |
Summary:Ali keeps askin' questions...
Thanks for the inspiration, sonny. Chapters: |
 | Final Exam (Updated) | wisealma | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 8 | 0.31 | Feb 13, 2010 |
Summary:Feedback PleaseChapters: |
 | SLOW EDDIE'S ORGASMIC RUSH | Doug Moore | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 10 | 0.35 | Feb 12, 2010 |
Summary:This is my first foray into flash fiction, so any comments are welcome.Chapters: |
 | Honey, it's time | tina_dc_hayes | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 10 | 0.33 | Feb 11, 2010 |
Summary:I apologize in advance.Chapters: |
 | Safely Tucked Away | emarie | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.31 | Feb 11, 2010 |
Summary:Marisa is being released from prison and wants her kids back from her aunt. Although she isn't prepared or ready for them, she wants them. True to form, her fellow inmates attempt to stall her release to keep her kids safe.Chapters: |
 | The Calendar | The Coffee Lady | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 11 | 0.32 | Feb 10, 2010 |
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 | War Dogs | Nathan B. Childs | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 18 | 0.27 | Feb 10, 2010 |
Summary:dedicated to the 'devil dogs' of World War II Chapters: |
 | The F Train | sonny | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 34 | 0.31 | Feb 9, 2010 |
Summary:411 words - funny? is it flash fiction? - does it capture the flavor of New York?Chapters: |
 | A Plague | farfinagle | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 9 | 0.32 | Feb 8, 2010 |
Summary:The pollutants of industry produce dire consequences, especially when manufacturing designer genes. This is a horror story. If insects make you feel too creepy, you might want to "bug out" of this one.Chapters: |
 | Makeup God | l.l. grace | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 14 | 0.32 | Feb 8, 2010 |
Summary:speaks for itselfChapters: |
 | Believing in Monsters | Kydd Dustyn | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.30 | Feb 7, 2010 |
Summary:500 wordsChapters: |
 | That Look | amarie | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.19 | Feb 6, 2010 |
Summary:That LookChapters: |
 | Yesterday's Lines | Chisel | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 5 | 0.23 | Feb 5, 2010 |
Summary:EDITED BASED ON FEEDBACK RECEIVED. THANKS ALL - AND I HOPE YOU JUDGE IT TO BE BETTER.
CHISELChapters: |
 | THE SEASHELL | rlvs | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 2 | 0.38 | Feb 5, 2010 |
Summary:Rememberences of the sea shoreChapters: |
 | Future Tense | brucedeitrickprice | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 4 | 0.31 | Feb 5, 2010 |
Summary:Written for a flash contest.
I think the story had to be romantic, less than 500 words, and a bridge had to be mentioned.
Any sort of comment is welcome.
Chapters: |
 | Revision - The Tree of Death | farfinagle | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 8 | 0.29 | Feb 5, 2010 |
Summary:I revised The Tree of Death after receiving feedback from reviewers. Thanks to everyone who read the original and offered their comments. The setting of the story is a real place located a few miles outside of Wendover, Nevada. You can google the Tree of Life/Wendover/Salt Flats to see a photograph of the metal sculpture. Story description: An agent races against time to deactivate a bomb.Chapters: |
 | Uncle Fred's Embarrassing Dilemma | Sideman | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 10 | 0.15 | Feb 4, 2010 |
Summary:Uncle Fred finds himself unable to perform an important function soon after marrying Emma Lou, who is forty-six years younger than him.Chapters: |
 | Ethel and Jacques: Practical Matters | jpb2ndchance | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 8 | 0.30 | Feb 2, 2010 |
Summary:Making adjustments in life in 498 words is not easy.Chapters: |
 | No Drought of Thought | Kydd Dustyn | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 9 | 0.05 | Feb 1, 2010 |
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 | Merrigan | Jake Hawkins | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 11 | 0.32 | Jan 31, 2010 |
Summary:The story of a breakup.
Please let me know what you think.Chapters: |
 | Mary Kept Her Secret | Kydd Dustyn | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 10 | 0.31 | Jan 31, 2010 |
Summary:Old prejudiceChapters: |
 | Surgery And Punctuation | Sideman | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.03 | Jan 31, 2010 |
Summary:Surgery and punctuation? Who woulda thunk?Chapters: |
 | GAMES | Cadfael | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 13 | 0.19 | Jan 31, 2010 |
Summary:A nasty little foursome have their eyes to the main chance! After all, if you don't look after your own interests, who will?Chapters: |
 | Second Place | Sideman | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.13 | Jan 31, 2010 |
Summary:Any and all feedback desired and appreciated.
Jonathan was an odd man. His decision to enter a very strange contest was his undoing. It was, indeed, a very poor choice.Chapters: |
 | Traveling with Maria | brosna11 | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 9 | 0.21 | Jan 30, 2010 |
Summary:Ever have a relative who is difficult to live with? My life with Maria has been difficult at times but we've reach the stage where peace reigns. Chapters: |
 | Blatterian Tragedy in B-Flat | Kydd Dustyn | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 12 | 0.26 | Jan 30, 2010 |
Summary:The title says it all. Periplaneta americana anyone?Chapters: |
 | Gone To The Country | Sideman | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.27 | Jan 30, 2010 |
Summary:This is my entry for the Flash Fiction Contest. My grandfather told me this story back in the early 1960s and swears it's true. I have my doubts about that! Grandpa had been known to embellish more than a little bit! He's the boy in the story.
Any and all ll feedback is welcome. Good luck to everyone.
AlanChapters: |
 | The Tree of Death | farfinagle | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 9 | 0.29 | Jan 29, 2010 |
Summary:This is an entry for the flash fiction writing competition. The setting of the story is a real place located a few miles outside of Wendover, Nevada. You can google the Tree of Life/Wendover/Salt Flats to see a photograph of the metal sculpture.
Story description: An agent races against time to fulfill his mission. All feedback and comments welcomed.Chapters: |
 | Black and White Destiny | Kydd Dustyn | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 9 | 0.05 | Jan 28, 2010 |
Summary:75 words!Chapters: |
 | A Story to Die For (Updated) | wisealma | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 9 | 0.62 | Dec 13, 2009 |
Summary:Feedback pleaseChapters: |
 | I-70 Orphan | Kydd Dustyn | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 11 | 0.03 | Jun 22, 2009 |
Summary:Part of the comedy of my life on our way from Colorado to my aunt's funeral in Missouri.Chapters: |
 | THE BACK OF THE BUS | rlvs | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 9 | 0.37 | Nov 11, 2008 |
Summary:Observations from someplace unimportantChapters: |