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 | Megazaur: The 13th Omada | apatos13 | Novel | Fantasy | 0 | n/a | Oct 7, 2008 |
Summary:This is novel set on the world of Zauridia: a warm tropical planet where man and dinozaur exist together. There are two nations of men called omadas. The 12 Omadas and the 13th Omada. This is world where man is able to control certain dinozaurs with his will. The civilizations are a combination ancient greek and barbarian. Swords and spears are the primary weapons of man.
I'm looking for any feedback, I can get. But I really need them nitpicked line by line. I'm more of a storyteller than a writer. This is the 2nd draft of a novel; I have been working on for 2yrs. Also your reviews will teach me how to do the same on the reviews you need.
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 | Reflections Seeing the writer within my soul and deciding to let her speak. | flowing pencil | Short Story | Memoir | 12 | 0.45 | Jun 16, 2008 |
Summary:My journey into the world of writing how one person inspired and lit the fire but also snuffed the flame. Finding my voice
Listening harder, watching closer, feeling textures emotionally reaching hope thanksgiving for help on site.
Comparing work and seeing if improving. Open and honest opinions as am taking this seriously and honestly due to a reviewer and his courage to point out the flaws. Chapters: |