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 | Alice's Wunderland | 1_word_at_a_time | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.93 | Jan 7, 2012 |
Summary:Taking a break from Ruby Rose and feeling reflective, so thought I'd give poetry a crack. Not because I'm any good at it, but I wanted to play around with interpretations/double meanings.
I know as a poem this is really awkward - clumsy rhyming, lousy rhythm, annoying experimental pace ... so I'm looking more for suggestions on how to improve, rather than pointing out what I already know is crap.
I'm particularly looking for feedback on the content - I'm trying for the interpreting-alternative-meanings concept without being too obvious or too obscure ... walkin' the line, I guess.Chapters: |
| Two Fragments | Zer0 | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.50 | Dec 23, 2011 |
Summary:Another shitty free verse poem. All feedback is welcome. Chapters: |
| Return To October | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 0.12 | Apr 7, 2011 |
Summary:An attempt at Tanka .. Simply piece of poetry with using only thirty one syllables.. in a certain sequence 5..7..5..7..7
October is such a treasure. One of my favorite months as each day is a Van Gogh painting.
Afraid of review poetry? Easy! What emotion did it evoke.Chapters: |
| The Wheelchair | pannastra | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 6 | 0.56 | May 25, 2010 |
Summary:I'd better explain a couple of things which may have you scratching your head.
Muti = Af for medicine, poison, etc etc.
Sun-downer = a drink (or 3) imbibed at about the time the sun’s going down, being 5:30 – 6:30 around these parts.
I look forward to comments.Chapters: |
| Seasons Passing | Dan Philips | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 1.05 | Oct 28, 2009 |
Summary:Somthing a little different for meChapters: |
| LITTLE BOY BLUE | flowing pencil | Poetry | Humor | 20 | 0.47 | Sep 5, 2009 |
Summary:What can I say.. what excuse offer! I am a multi poster so throw me in the toaster.. But I shall rise! Perhaps strike again as only way to beat em perhaps is to join in!
Ha...........
Just being me!
Any and all feedback is welcome but a smile is required!
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| Autumn Muse | touch1stone | Poetry | Romance | 2 | 0.00 | Sep 25, 2007 |
Summary:Fall in Wisconsin is my favorite time of year.Chapters: |
| Late Summer Love | Miss Anni | Poetry | Young Adult | 5 | 0.31 | Jul 31, 2006 |
Summary:This was written as I pondered the magnitude of my situation. My husband and I are both in our 60's, and got married in August, 2005; he after 30 years divorced, myself after 15 years. We met on-line; it was love at first e-mail, and was a long distance courtship, of sorts! He had just had surgery for cancer; I was a full-time missionary in D.C.The wedding was the wedding of my dreams! But, because of his health situation(there is no cancer!), things are moving a lot more slowly than I would like! We still can't be very active, but hope to travel a lot...whenever!!! This is the first time I have done this; your feedback is truly welcome!Chapters: |
