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 | The Black Stallion | Kay Lovell | Novel | Memoir | 3 | n/a | Jun 6, 2011 |
Summary:This has been rewritten, as I really had to agree with the critiques given, thank you.
So here we are again. The black stallion is a true story of my horse, a black Trakehner stallion, his name Beatos. An intriguing story of his life with me, of the love that I had for him. Of his achievements and the adventure that we went on together. Covering his life with me. Telling about the filming of the advertisement for the famous bank, of his kidnapping. This is his story.
Let me have your feedback, it all helps with the final verdict.Chapters: |
| The news came suddenly | po | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 1.43 | Sep 17, 2009 |
Summary:my first cousin died recently of a drug overdose. This poem is how I dealt with the grief.
I am interested in how the style is perceived as this is a comfortable writing style for me.
This is the first time I have posted work on this forum and I am grateful for the reviews. I am grateful for the editing comments by kiwi & ulli as I have incorporated them into my piece. My first time listening to constructive editing advice. There maybe hope for me yet. To you other kind people, thanks for your comments. I will be sharing this poem at a family reunion today. Hopefully it will bring perspective & healing...
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| SmellTasteTouchAdore | Ethereal Angel | Poetry | Romance | 3 | 0.36 | Feb 9, 2009 |
Summary:My prose poetry class ("proem," as Cynthia A. calls it, haha) assigned us to read and be inspired by "Song of Songs." This didn't come across so much "admire from afar" like I felt "Song of Songs" did. I did want to pick up on some of the attention to detail given to the lover's form-- though not neccesarily in metaphor, but more intimate, knowing and literal.Chapters: |
| Alzheimer Diary: A Wife's Journal | mishmont | Novel | Memoir | 14 | n/a | May 25, 2007 |
Summary:My experience of living with my husband of thirty years who is spiraling down through Alzheimer's, our lives together on a sheep farm, and memories of things past.
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I am republishing for the many newbies who may have new eyes, and for readers who might want to take a second look.
Not to mention Strongest Start 4 now that there is a non-fiction category.
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