Content: escape

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Trent De Saber, once a promising Lieutenant, has fallen. Conscription forces him to face his demons as he struggles with his destiny, survival, loyalty, and escape.

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I probably should have posted this here before posting in my Blog, but feedback, like so much in life, is better late than never. So any comments are welcome. Thanks!

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Gladys Tripalong has it all; a loving son, when he's speaking to her, two devoted sisters, when they’re not ticked at her. And Joe Little, her lover. Life’s good—that is…until she’s kidnapped. Previously: She turns butt towards the window. One at a time, she maneuvers her feet out the window. Hands gripping the window ledge, she slides her body down. It’s awkward and far more difficult than she had anticipated. But it’s working! SHIT! Her big boobs wedge on the window ledge! She wiggles and jiggles but all that accomplishes is to tilt her wig—now she can only see out of one eye. If she can get one hand free, she can pull the smelly garbage out of her bra and get the hell out of there. She hears the door open. SHIT! Should have locked it From her available eye, she watches a burly man enter the bathroom. The man sees the disheveled woman dangling out the window by her boobs. The burly man, who looks like Marlon Brando gone badly, cleans the mirror. “So—how’s it hanging, Lucille?” As always, feedback is appreciated!

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Thank you for reading this poem about one of my themes... please feel free to say whatever... what works, what doesn't.

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A chicken, a cat with nine tails and a dog with a candy stripe coat come together as friends in an cosmetics testing lab. This is the story of their great escape from the barn and their subsequent adventures in space. This is my first attempt at writing novel so any feedback on structure, style and content would be most appreciated. Thank you.

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This is a memoir of my daughter's death and the communications we've had since her death. Since it is a true story, I want to know if it's readable and interesting.

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I'm not really happy with this as it feels self-serving and more than a little pompous so some constructive comments will be appreciated. Or let me know if I should just delete it entirely. Thanks.

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Memories of childhood past. Where peace but for a moment could be found. Any and all feedback is more than welcomed. This is was really rough and may still need work but hoping to learn if emotionally strong while not cutesy. Let me know your feelings. This is about a real willow tree at my "Big Mom's' home.. It was my sanctuary so many times.

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Want to perfect a few pieces to send out! Please be tough as want what I submit to be the best I can make it. way of escaping. child within creativity imagination Is this better. Improvement in use of tenses punctuation etc How does it make you feel? Does it stir the child within? If you have already reviewed this... you can simply let me know in a forum if you feel I am making progress in my writing.

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My second poem on the sea journey of boat people. I think I like this better than the first one - perhaps it's clearer. I'm interested in what you think - critique away..

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Attraction/Repulsion.

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