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A pg version of this poem has been made into a video and is posted on Youtube at this link ---- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ceijq_z48Y4 ----- I had to water it down a bit for Youtube. So I renamed it By the Sea It would be super cool if you took a look at the video and left a comment on Youtube. Some people like the pg version better and some like this one - a comparison of the two would also be nice to know. Thanks in advance if you do go to Youtube. I will do several reviews of your writing in return if you subscribe to her channel or comment on the poem on Youtube. It takes quite a bit of work to do a video poem, and it's my friend's channel, so it would be nice to know if our idea on video poems is an idea worth continuing!

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I guess I'd like to know what do you think??! Too graphic??

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Free form verse, mildly erotic. I welcome critical reviews.

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An erotic love poem about loving someone even past death. Detailed criticism encouraged

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This was an opening chapter brought on by the prompt "tell about water on your skin" off some writing website or another. It bloomed into something fairly dark, and the material may make some uncomfortable, due to violence and sexuality. I am looking for feedback regarding my grammar, sentence structure, missed details that simply don't gel, others areas of confusion. This is NOT my normal genre, but the story came forward of it's own accord. Please do not read it if you are easily offended.

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Kelly had put herself on the auction block but when her boss starts bidding on her, what's a woman to do? Any feedback would be helpful. I'm kind of new to short fiction. Thanks for the feedback, it's been very helpful. This story's a work in progress so I appreciate it.

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It's a hot afternoon in the stable and Sierra thinks she's all by herself but is she really?

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Shelli anticipated another day of studying in the library but what awaited her there was nothing she could have ever anticipated.

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The free city of Anderholm prospered at the crossroads of kingdoms, its gates open and its citizens engrossed in wickedness and scandal. Two scholars have come to change its fate. One seeks an ancient treasure, while the other longs to bring back the Age of Magic. Between them stands Shadyia, a pawn in their game who becomes the key to their ambitions. For men, she is an insatiable seductress. For women, an envied rival. For one, a loyal friend. Passionate and cunning, she is Shadyia, a Sister of the Silver Rose. A whore with pride.

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here in the uk we have a kinky undies and sex toy store that is also renowned for home parties...yes i hosted one recently...a good girlie night of wine, nibbles and giggles as we passed around the latest lingerie and varied collection of vibrant vibrators...beats watching tv any day i must say!

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I'd almost forgotten about this flash fiction and then came across a competition which it might suit. I've tinkered with it just a little, re-named it and wondered if someone could please take a look at it before it's launched into polite society.

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She's naked and cold so she needs green fire.

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An evening with an exotic dancer and private clients.

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A Re-boot of the Rhiannon series. It rewrites the first Rhiannon story (published elsewhere)The Gorgon. It is deliberately inconsistent with other stories published or workshopped. Rhiannon is more complicated, Rosalyn has a different status, it is in 3rd person. It has themes of transformation,the loss and reclamation of important things (although they are not what the characters or readers think at first). A word on its setting: this is not set in medieval Europe. It takes place on a world that is about 11th century in terms of its social and technological development, but is 30 lightyears away from Earth, which is occupied by a world (Terra) with 21st century development. It takes place in our future, but in that world's (worlds') past. One culture is corrupted by Terran society, others are not. Oddities like the characters using slang from the US c. 2009 is thus explained. It is the tale of the fall and rise of Rhiannon, the ever so great descendent of the lengendary woman/goddess of the same name. All feedback is appreciated. Thank you.

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I'm not sure how such a bizarre story came to me but the idea of a breast with a life of its own struck me as amusing. And how the mammary can act as a sort of go-between, bringing a man and woman together. I hope no one finds this story offensive for this wasn't my intention. Do please let me know if you find it compelling enough and if it flows okay. My spelling is UK spelling so please bear with me! Keen

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I wrote this while going through my divorce a couple of years ago. It was a great catharsis but I am not sure about the writing. The initiating event was taken from my work as an air traffic controller. I just built a story around it. Feedback on characters and whether or not they need to be developed further would be appreciated. And just overall feedback about the story would be great also.

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I have written an erotic piece about four college friends now in two couples getting together for a weekend away. How does the story flow and does it have any literary value?

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This poem is about sex, straight up. Its a little softer piece than some of my work. I have plenty more where this came from and intend to post as often as I can. Feedback Desired: Raw sensuality erotica written by me. I am looking for feedback, good, bad or even indifferent. I write mostly dark or erotic, or even darkly erotic poetry.

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...about time for another rude one i thought...so here's a rather rude PICTO depicting DP as in double penetration...erotic or plain porny?...um...dunno, you decide!

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...repetative? moi?? ...well hey ho here we go it's another phallic PICTO!!

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...at the risk of boring to a mouth gaping yawn ...here's yet another PICTO on that subject of "going down" and what it likely leads to!!! ...nearly called this 'Face of Fantasy' --because it is a face, btw!-- wot d'ya reckon??

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... a PICTO for those who wear and share the delights of minimalist undies... yes, it's a (slightly rude/lightly erotic) thong!

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...not exactly erotic ...but dunno where else to stick this PICTO of a vibrator (pardon the expression).....!!!

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sorry... at it again (so to speak)... the title is suggestive of what this PICTO depicts ...a quick click and you'll soon be in the picture!!

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another crude stab at erotica!! ...a playful PICTO projection of an erect penis ...side view on rather than full frontal!!!

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here's another experiment --a depiction of bossoms broadly in the realms of erotica ....a teeny-weeny bit rude!

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yes, this is about BJ as in 'blow job' ....experimental, tongue in cheek (of course), fairly explicit, rude and bordering on the crude ....you have been warned!!!

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This is a continuation of "A Touch of Seduction", currently available on the tNBW Publication page. If you have not read that story, please do so before reading this, as it is necessary for context. I intended to do this as a short story, but it is clear that it will run well over 5,000 words, so I am posting it as a novel. It will be more like a novella, unless the characters do something even more unexpected than they have so far.

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