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RE- puplished Final edit. Thank you deb, Natfoot and john klawitter . Your suggestions made it a better piece. Anyway...I feel better writing a little fluff piece...Thanks to all who read, all who reviewed...dags:)

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This story is from the perspective of Helen McHale, the mother of Evelyn Mchale, who committed suicide by jumping off of the Empire State Building on May 1st, 1947.

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This is a story about an old lady who wants to honor memories of her grandfather. I have rewritten several sections and added material at the end. Any punctuation nits or context suggestions appreciated.

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1 of the 1000 other drama's happening in NYC that night. Thank you all for the reviews. Better now?

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Louis Shane, Jr. turns Sarah Reisner's happy life into a roller coaster ride.

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A southern belle visits New York City by accident. She encounters a few 'problems'. I NEED to give my girlfriend a LOT of credit for her assistance in researching this (fun) story - Thanks, Zzap!

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Two brothers work together on debunking the myth that a penny thrown from the Empire State Building can kill a person. Things don't go quite as planned, but maybe there are other forces at play that is out of their control. Really, I am looking not only for nits, but story direction. Dialogue sound okay? Better ideas? I have struggled with the ending a little on this one and looking for some possible ideas. Once again, I appreciate anything you send my way.

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Welcome to the zombie apocalypse. The soundtrack, if this story has one, is "Uno" by Green Day. This is my entry in the Empire State Building short story contest.

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This is my entry for The Empire State Building contest. Any suggestions will be appreciated. Any thoughts for secondary plotlines will be considered. Thanks for any input.

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This is a story that started out one way and then took me in a whole other direction. Apparently I can only take life seriously in short bursts. Poor Phyllis thinks she wants to jump off the Empire State Building but what she really wants is a foot long hot dog. The symbolism is crude. But what can you expect from the most famous phallus in the world? Any and all comments are welcome, but mostly what I want to know is did you enjoy the damn story?

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This might be construed as cheating (slightly) but I edited this story a bit to include a mention of the Empire State Building and entered it into the contest. But it is essentially the same story as previously published. It was, when first published here, a new story: one that was never workshopped in any college master's workshops or anywhere else. In fact, it was the first story I wrote after I started writing again following my retirement/disability, even though the basic premise, writing from the POV of the opposite sex, was an exercise suggested by a writing workshop. Given my glandular bias, I'm not really sure if it's in any way believable and will appreciate any and all feedback.

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This is the King Kong story told through the eyes of the great ape. Nobody ever asked him what he thought of the whole mess. Not surprisingly, he's not real happy about it. Any and all comments are welcome. Thanks.

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