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 | WITHIN THE SILENCE | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.24 | May 22, 2012 |
Summary: Pent-up emotional hubris?
We all have our moments Having said that, I would imagine many would find the words expressing their own feelings at one time or another? If not? A simple rather dark piece of writing?Chapters: |
| Ragged Edges Rewritten | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 11 | 0.31 | Mar 18, 2012 |
Summary:All feedback is welcome. Technical is desired as weak point.
This is a simple piece about 'feelings' I know! Overdone subject but alas.. they do follow us closely. This is a piece that took two minutes and to be honest have no idea where it came from. This is how I write. I cannot 'create' like so many of the talented writers on this site.
REVISITING THIS PIECE I SAW A LOT 'WRONG' WITH IT. Hopefully I have improved since first posting.. that is the feedback I would love to have. Improved? Not so self serving as not my intent. What I writer I feel is experienced by many.
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| CHOICES OF THE HEART | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 0.21 | Oct 12, 2011 |
Summary:Title temporary. Work unfinished.. most likely this will be the second verse as don't feel it stands a lone. Just needed to get back in the saddle after yesterday's fiasco of losing one of my best pieces and all forty four reviews! It was like losing a friend!
So get back up and post something!
As you know I am stepping my writing up or at least making the attempt. I am a serious writer when I am serious!! haaaaaaa So be tough on me. I won't melt. Chapters: |
| unnoticed changes | SpoiledWrott10 | Poetry | Poetry | 3 | 0.54 | Oct 4, 2011 |
Summary:How things in our lives change and we don't even realize it until it is too late.Chapters: |
| YO GOD | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 0.76 | Jul 14, 2011 |
Summary:MY WORDS... my emotions and mean absolutely no disrespect to anyone's God or Gods... Just my calling out to whatever may or may not exist and thus making my words one huge total waste of time.
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| We Could Have Known Love | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 16 | 0.33 | Dec 4, 2009 |
Summary:Any and all feedback. Make you think? Make you feel? Make you nauseous! ha...
Just having a bit of fun writing something totally romantic.
Sort of about me but not a serious loss in the long run. Hurt like hell at time though so does that come through?
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| LABORIOUS DAY | flowing pencil | Poetry | Humor | 11 | 0.90 | Sep 7, 2009 |
Summary:Lots of laughter is all that is needed..
This is based on FACTS
HUMOR!! No sadness allowed!Chapters: |
| Her Decision? Whose Decision? | Ethereal Angel | Poetry | Poetry | 1 | 0.00 | Jul 25, 2009 |
Summary:I'm fond of loosely using the 5-7-5 of the haiku format, but not exactly creating a haiku in strict theme and rules. 3 and 4 also hold appeal for me (don't ask me to rationalize that) so many of this type of unconventional poem that I do have 3 lines and four stanzas. Someone try to analyze the weird math behind that.
A friend pointed out that the 4th stanza is stilted, compared to the previous 3. Agree? The word "variable" was a little issue; "vehr-YAH-bull" makes the last line fit the 5 syllable count, "veh-RI-yah-bull" makes it 6. Don't go all Texas on me (like an ex-boyfriend did) and say it's the latter, haha.Chapters: |
| Rantings of a "Free" Woman | Allegra Zedakah | Short Story | Editorial and Opinion | 6 | 0.25 | Aug 20, 2007 |
Summary:This is just something I thought about this morning that I wanted to express and get other's opinions on.Chapters: |
