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(1st revise) Name: Galadorie De Abyssal Status: A mascot dragon of the Feinador's retreat Situtation: Kicked out from the castle and forced to live in the stable, Galadories must complete a requisiton until we earned enough prestige to be sent back to the castle once more. With friends and foes along the ways, Gala will embarks on his late rite of passage to learn about friendship,his lost identity,and everday life of those who lived the cresent coast region and beyond. Current Horoscope: "You have no luck with piercing object" Fate: "Too much to tell" Feedback: Comment on Plot,Character,nit,and credibility will be the most appreciate.

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Summary: The song singing by the dragon to his mate. It recalled the day he meet her as the wounded draglen, not yet a dragoness,and the starting the song on the night when She was fully recover and was about to leave him. Feedback: Like always, any comment on grammar,verb tense, etc would always be the most appreciate.

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A powerful staff is created to help protect the peaceful mage city of Magikar, but somehow dangerous outsiders learn of the magical item and they want it for themselves. Follow Daylor Godsend the Grand Wizard of the legendary city of Magikar - Zulfigar the renowned sorcerer, Ryon a clever half elf half human - the mighty fire demons of Teron - the ruthless King Travot of Brindale, Geralda'n a devious shape shifter as well as many other interesting and bizzare characters in search of the living staff. Some for good and some for evil - yet all are tangled in a web of high adventure, pure terror, intense action and even romance that will link them all together in the first book of three. The Staff of Valor - by Jason Sidelman I appreciate any and all that look at my work. I have been working on this over the past few years and believe its ready to be shown to the world. I am ready for the good and the bad comments you all have to tell. The novel is copywritten and if you could give me advice on a NY agent that also would be terrific. Thank you - Mr Fantasy - AKA Jason Sidelman I have already done a few reviews and will continue to keep that up on my end.

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Summary: A dragoness raised child sang his made up song to get an attention from his Dragon Mistra. Feedback: This is a children verse I intended to put it into my brainchild work.Any comment on tense,line flows, and grammar will always be appreciate. Note: Snowpour-Snowstorm. It was an intended mistake made by my character. Mistra-The Drakarian term,a made up dragon tongue I had been working on it for awhile See also Feinador--Life of Gala). The term express emotional meanings so complicate it was tranliterated into this poem as the actual meaning is up for anyone to interpret.

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Tiamat Ashtad, or Tash as she is called, is thrown into the middle of a high profile kidnapping when the suspect targets her. She's got to reach inside and learn who she really is to rescue the children and save herself. I'm looking for feedback on everything. Don't worry about being gentle I've got thick skin. I do however ask that you respect myself and my characters. I'm here to learn and grow. :)

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No feeback necessary. This is simply a short story I wrote for two of my grandchildren.

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