Content: desire

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What bites?

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Another prompt-driven one for the workshop. Just a teaser. Does it suffice? Should it blossom forth more?

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Observations from someplace unimportant

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I am experiencing many changes since Max died...sadness, heartbreak, loneliness I expected. But desire? I never once considered the vast separation imposed on the earthbound by the companion who has flown...I did not know there would be a struggle imposed by the separation of spirit from flesh...I feel my human-ness more than ever...

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3/9- I realize what part of the issh may be-- the stanza breaks are all funky... that's why this reads as one long rant (not necessarily a bad thing)! I tried fixing the breaks. Twice. No luck. Reposting for NPM at FB. maybe it'll look better there. Cross your fingers. It's been awhile, but I'm diving right in-- so the mind is willing but a little obstructed, or at least, the technique's a little rusty. I may have switched the flow a bit, you'll notice, in the way I chose to break each line. Does it still work? Or would a little more uniformity be stronger?

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With the attack that almost cost her life, Brenna James finds herself in a world that she never expected. Hunted and afraid, she's in for the fight of her life.

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This is a simple piece inspired by the TITLE of a song written by my singer/songwriter son Brad. Rework it as felt is terribly lacking and cliche. This piece is meaningful to me so any help is much appreciated. Point out cliches... where you grimace! ha. Is it better? Much appreciation

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A novel based on the Author's own true story. It is a story of her enthusiasm pursuing her goal to publish her writing in the US after she moved there, though English was not her mother tongue. She faced many other challenges while achieving her goal. (I appreciate every input I get to help me improve my writing, especially any grammatical mistakes. Thank you)

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Continuation of thought from the haiku I posted (among other things).

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Some things lead to others. A friend sent a long email and photos of himself kiteboarding. I meant to write a haiku about the pictures, the water, the colors, how I imagined it felt to be right there-- and this intercepted those thoughts. Strange.

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A desire so all-consuming, and hoping to be satisfied. But what?

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Don that perfect outfit, and you can play the part.

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Fighting a loosing battle

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