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 | The Legend of Draconis Book I--King Satin's Realm | Janet Taylor-Perry | Novel | Fantasy | 2 | n/a | Dec 27, 2011 |
Summary:Aidan O’Rourke never dreams that talking to old Diggory Danaher will take him on an adventure of a lifetime. After months of stories about a mythical island and his father, Aidan decides to find out for himself if his father is alive and living as a panther on the mythical island.
Stowaway wives, a lost father, bewitched human beings, a wicked witch, pirates, and friendly dragons combine to draw Aidan into a web of intrigue of good versus evil as he becomes the champion of a land that only exceptional men can reach. Aidan proves how exceptional he truly is through the power of faith and unconditional love.
Set between sixteenth century Ireland and a timeless, mythical island kingdom called Draconis, King Satin’s Realm relates the saga of four generations of the O’Rourke family as they battle evil in a strange world after finding it in turmoil. The O’Rourkes seem to be called to this enchanted world to be its champions. However, not even a place of such mystery can quell the wanderlust born in the O’Rourke family.
Feedback on dialogue, character development, readability, description, and appeal to the audience. Yes, the word is SATIN. I can spell; it is not Satan. This story is as much family saga as fantasy, but there is no family saga categoryChapters: |
 | Children of Light | CharlieB | Novel | Fantasy | 3 | n/a | Jun 16, 2011 |
Summary:This is different for me, but I've always wanted to write something like this.
Skylar Crandon is like any rebellious teenage boy, enjoying his youth. Then on his seventeenth birthday, everything in his world changes. His body has transformed, the world around him appears different, and no one is there to answer any questions. Until Eva.
She knows what he is, and she offers answers if only he follows her to a secret underground group filled with others who are just like him. A vastly new world is presented to him, along with the knowledge that he could never go back to his normal life again. But he does have a choice. He can stay with people like him, and become what he was always meant to be, or he can live on the run in the world he doesn’t want to give up.
He knows he’s never going to stay in a world he was so forcefully pushed into, but the more time he spends learning about them, and spending time with Eva, the more he realizes that his decision is going to impact more than just his life.
I changed the rating to R because of graphic violence and the language that Skylar and Aaron use.Chapters: |
 | Goopeater | Reenita | Novel | Young Adult | 4 | n/a | Feb 7, 2011 |
Summary: The Goopeater is the magical coming-of-age tale of Arya, a 13-year-old boy from San Francisco who is tormented by bullies in the school for eating "goop".
In the wake of an accident that has left his once-vibrant mother a husk of her former self, Arya clings to the only bond left: an old, battered copy of an ancient book about good versus evil. One night, he is sucked through a crack in his floorboards and drawn into a magical world. Guided by the book which is the very last copy left, he travels the land, meeting a sage who has walked the earth since the beginning of time, monkey warriors and fearsome demons. Arya soon discovers that this new world is, in fact, an old world, and that he has stepped into the story of the Ramayana, the setting and characters before him mirroring the pages of the book that he prizes so dearly.
When his book is stolen by the villain of the story, the demon king Anavaar, who wants to erase history and rewrite it from his own vantage point, Arya must embark on his own quest to retrieve the beloved keepsake. Aided by a mysterious Medicine Woman and guided by the principles of ancient warrior training, he overcomes the trials of the demons. In facing his fears, he learns that the Medicine Woman is indeed an embodiment of his mother's Higher Self, the true soul of the kind and vibrant mother he remembers, and that Anavaar is actually a conglomerate of the bullies that torment his daily existence.
Realizing that he is not alone and coming to terms with his heritage, Arya is able to move forward with the battle, accept his mother's death, and finally go home where he is no longer known as the Goopeater. Chapters: |
 | The Demon Pool | RBD | Novel | Thrillers | 3 | n/a | Nov 1, 2010 |
Summary:Hello all. The Demon Pool is a 141,000 word supernatural thriller that offers a demonic twist on the famous legend of the Fountain of Youth. Think ChiPS (remember Erik Estrada?) meets The Exorcist only set in Southwest Florida. I am aiming for the mainstream thriller/horror market. I have an associate editor with a major publisher that I was able to pitch at the Pacific Northwest Writer's Association conference this past summer willing to read the completed manuscript (I finally submitted the fifth draft in early May 2011).
The story is essentially complete, but I am sure there will be some more editing and revising. Any help with the writing or story that will help me make it better will be greatly appreciated. God bless you all and next time you visit Florida, be careful where you swim. There may be more than gators in the water.Chapters: |
 | Torn Between Light and Darkness | BloodyG | Novel | Fantasy | 3 | n/a | Aug 12, 2010 |
Summary:The story is about the Prince of Mixed-Bloods, who is supposed to succeed the throne from his dead father. Unfortunately, due to unforeseen accidents, the current king of the vampires sits on the throne of the cratures created by the mating of creatures who belong to different races (like a human mating with a demon, etc.). Any feedback is welcome.
(The story does not immediately start off with the things described in this summary.)Chapters: |
 | Origins | E. Alicea | Novel | Horror | 3 | n/a | Aug 5, 2010 |
Summary:When junkie Hayley Jane overdoses and ends up in Hell, she finds she’s a coveted freak and her destiny has only just begun. She finds herself trapped in ta nightmare of deep betrayal in the House of Rage, and now she must make friends with the Devil himself to save her only friend.
* ALL FEEDBACK WELCOME. Chapters: |
 | The Shed | Nathan B. Childs | Short Story | Horror | 13 | 1.11 | Apr 12, 2010 |
Summary:The Shed is the expanded version of my flash story, Look At Him, Daddy. Chapters: |
 | THE APOCALYPSE GENE | knighthawk | Novel | Fantasy | 5 | n/a | Feb 17, 2010 |
Summary:PLACE: Chicago, Illinois / TIME: The Near Future--Cancer gone Pandemic is ravaging the world and only two psychic teenagers, the mysterious Kindred Clan, a brooding Immortal, and an Angelic being, can defeat the Pandemic, which it appears, is far more than a mere disease . . . Chapters: |
 | Coven of the Zodiac | Pisces310 | Novel | Fantasy | 4 | n/a | Jan 19, 2010 |
Summary:Coven of witches, each representing the 12 houses of the Zodiac. I'm recently back to the writing world and appreciate all of your feedback! Thank you so much!
Blessing!
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 | Oathbearer | dennis mcdonald | Novel | Fantasy | 5 | n/a | Apr 7, 2009 |
Summary:On the world of Guya…
In an age of darkness…
A time when the Inquisition raged and the Church of the All Father sent Inquisitors and Witch Hunters into the lands to burn witches. One such witch was named Sundra. Sentenced to death by fire, she escapes her fate with the aid of a mysterious swordsman named Jorn. Together they must forge a bond as Sundra takes the oath to be the next Oathbearer and wield the powerful Sword of Balance to destroy the church and save the world from an ancient and unholy evil.
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