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 | The Pet Deer | helen grey | Short Story | Memoir | 1 | 1.59 | Dec 9, 2011 |
Summary:Hi, this is a complete re-write changing the narrative to third person following feedback from the last posting. I also tried to give a little bit more context. I wanted to bring in some dialogue too but somehow that just didn't happen!!! I tried to keep the simplicity of the language but tone down the "little girl" voice. This was following some feedback but also I went to the Library to do some research and try to be a little clearer in my mind as to the target age group. I always intended the stories to be illustrated so if I could just ask everyone to imagine a large & colorful picture book read aloud to children in the 3 - 6 year old age group... I love feedback and am really grateful for any thoughts or help you can give. HG.Chapters: |
| Healing Nature: Nature Series #29 | jpb2ndchance | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 1.03 | Mar 3, 2010 |
Summary:This all transpired more than a year ago. This past fall I saw the same deer with a pure white patch of hide where her open wound had healed completely over. Comments welcome.
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| Deer Yard At Nightfall | jpb2ndchance | Poetry | Poetry | 5 | 0.24 | Jan 21, 2010 |
Summary:I had been thinking about this place I found in one of my rambles through the woods and couldn't find a way to start the poem. Then Flo wrote a lovely Haiku which gave me the first line. Thank you Flo for allowing this piece to take shape and get free from my head.Chapters: |
| Ghosts In Moonlight | jpb2ndchance | Poetry | Poetry | 2 | 0.00 | Jan 2, 2010 |
Summary:A couple of deer, some moonlight. Things get written.Chapters: |
