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 | Spa Days - a very personal rant against the latest beauty con | helen grey | Short Story | Editorial and Opinion | 8 | 1.14 | Apr 20, 2012 |
Summary:I feel like this is total sacrilege - I don't know anyone else who loathes the whole spa day concept? But hey, you can't help what you think!! & plus I do enjoy a good rant now and again - ! I would absolutely love some feedback - and would really love to find someone (anyone!!!) who agrees - even a little bit...Note - I have just tidied up a little bit - no real changes but just wanted to sharpen a few paragraphs here and there. Chapters: |
| Fool's Paradise (2) | edwaed shafik | Novel | Thrillers | 5 | n/a | Apr 12, 2012 |
Summary:The chase and executing of Bin Laden.Chapters: |
| THE DAY THE WORDS WENT QUIET | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 11 | 0.33 | Jan 19, 2012 |
Summary:Power out so posting this as is and now before battery goes out. It may need work but I have no clue when power back on as we are way out!
Any and all constructive criticism encouraged and all that even simply 'feel' the words your responses are soooooooo welcomed!Chapters: |
| THIS HAPPENED A WHILE BACK | Justi Moody | Poetry | Religion and Spirituality | 5 | 0.73 | Jan 13, 2012 |
Summary:I am not fanatic about anything. I am passionate about almost anything I enjoy very much. I am not a religious person, but I am a Christian who lived almost 50 years knowing all about God from books, classes, being in church and whatever. After that age I met God and got to know him on a first name basis and I do enjoy writing about my faith. It is not to offend you but to share my joy hope you will enjoy it too. Chapters: |
| COOLING EMBERS | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.22 | Nov 9, 2011 |
Summary:Autumn preparing for Winter.. I think this start strong and ends rather weak so will try working on it more.
Working hard on rhythm and format.
Nature and it wonderment yet oncoming chill and greyness.
Any and all criticism is never taken for grantedChapters: |
| Poetry of Life | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.26 | Apr 9, 2010 |
Summary:Observations of living for over a half century. Well over may I add!
Using an altered Haiku format.
Definitely not in best writing form but sick or not ... a writer writes!!
Critical commentary always welcomed as here to better my writing.Chapters: |
| MISTY RIVER FLOWS | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 0.17 | Jan 29, 2010 |
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Poem about nature, children, joy ... does it conjure up memories? Is it visual and easily understood? Does it read like a short story in its presentation?
Any and all feedbackChapters: |
| A Dance with the Enemy | Buffalotales | Short Story | Historical Fiction | 2 | 0.00 | Sep 7, 2009 |
Summary:Does duty preclude a young girl coming of age? Where is the line drawn between common sense and public opinion?
Feedback welcomeChapters: |
