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 | The Lowly Caterpillar | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.42 | Aug 17, 2011 |
Summary:Death... mourning.. hope.. waste...beauty... retitled and reworked. Is the punctuation better? Good... bad?
One I was going to send out this Spring but health interfered.
Is it getting good enough to try some magazine?
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| The news came suddenly | po | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 1.43 | Sep 17, 2009 |
Summary:my first cousin died recently of a drug overdose. This poem is how I dealt with the grief.
I am interested in how the style is perceived as this is a comfortable writing style for me.
This is the first time I have posted work on this forum and I am grateful for the reviews. I am grateful for the editing comments by kiwi & ulli as I have incorporated them into my piece. My first time listening to constructive editing advice. There maybe hope for me yet. To you other kind people, thanks for your comments. I will be sharing this poem at a family reunion today. Hopefully it will bring perspective & healing...
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| The Christmas Call | Sherman Law | Short Story | Memoir | 7 | 0.48 | Dec 25, 2008 |
Summary:I'm trying to capture my conversation with my 9 year old Goddaughter Ali from this morning. Partly for the Christmas memory, and partly to record how Ali talks at the age of 9. To do this justice you have to read Ali's part very fast, because that is how she talks when she is excited. She slowed way down when she got sentimental towards the end.Chapters: |
